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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - sadie237 on June 22, 2013
    OMG!!! SQ I was getting choked up when Papa was with Tsu-chan. Tsu-chan is just the sweetest he asked Lady luck for help:) I think what got me most was when Sasuke saw Naruto's eyes looking at him from the tub. That just broke me down. You know me SQ the unexpected things get to me:) I love how you take me away and keep me grounded at the same time. I hope that makes sense:) Thank you. I'm nervous excited and scare! When and how did they get the virus in the household?! Kimimaro had made it seem like we didn't know everything. So it was released sooner! Five wanted to stay with Yuki:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe what do you have in store for us?!:) The 'Realisation' is that there will be a bumpy road a head ^_^
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 20, 2013
    Chapter 91. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMG!! This chapter ended unexpectedly. Well, the way it ended was unexpected. I'm still tingling all over. I can't wait for what will happen next. Will Rin be able to ananlyze what's in the canister? Will there be a need to put the hybrids into stasis? OMG! I can't wait! Thanks for the update! You never disappoint!
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  • From ANON - LenaSaturn on June 19, 2013
    I have just finished reading what you have so far of your series & have enjoyed the unfolding story & how your writing has grown over the years you have written. I look forward to reading more as you release them. Thank you for the entertainment & best of luck with writing.
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  • From ANON - Lurker on June 16, 2013
    I've really enjoyed the whole story so far, so much so that I've been looking forward to your updates each week for around a year. I get the feeling that this story is about to come to a close, and I'm wondering if you'll be continuing your writing.

    It'd be handy if you had a twitter so that you could keep us (me) updated on exactly when you upload each chapter, or even just so we can follow you personally. Plus I'm sure having a more accessible platform for communication with people interested in you or your writing would feel quite gratifying.

    Just a thought?
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 16, 2013
    Oh shit! Kimmimaro is such a tool, in all senses of the word. He feels more and more plastic with each encounter, which is funny considering he is possibly the character with least, if any, growth. Thanks for the haha shower moment amongst all the tension. Things seem adrift at the moment, which leaves your reader(s?) feeling at least as antsy as your characters.
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  • From satterb on June 16, 2013
    Loved the shower scene, but really loved the fallout from the shower scene! Now, dying to know what the "gasp" Kimmimaro let out when he walked into the meeting room was all about. Did he bring the contagion in with him as well? All of this is freaking me out. I still don't trust Madara and I hope all his discretion's are discovered. Thank you so much for all your wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on June 15, 2013
    OMG SQ!!!! That was my total tech sentences:) I didn't see any of that happening. You are so brilliant:) To come with that! You pulled both your six guns out in this chapter and fired the last shot with that cliffy:) That is a huge back breaking cliffy!! Yea Baby wOw! I was scare of what Kurotsuchi or Old man might do. I was worried about Naruto. I had a nose bleed with Sasuke in the shower:) Yea you had all my emotions working in this 'precautionary' chapter:) SQ I love every word. Thank you for your hard work ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 15, 2013
    NO! Did Kimamaro…. Di he release the poison????!!!
    But they are ready, aren’t they?
    And I thought that Madara was supposed to swear he would never challenge for leadership in the interview…. but he didn’t…
    This chapter was great! Exciting, interesting… and even funny. The shower scene was hilarious. Just that cliffhanger…. Damn.
    Thank you for the update!

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  • From ANON - NobodysAingyl on June 13, 2013
    Hello! Just wanted to let you know that I missed your story so much that I started over from the beginning. Again :) No matter how many times I read it, I'm always pleasantly surprised at how rich and fleshed out all the characters are, and how entertaining the storyline(s) is/are. I've finally settled on a favorite character! I love seeing how Sumiko is developing into an intense, clever girl, and can totally see her a few standards later as an adult. You're doing an amazing job! I'm at 'Delays', I think, in Leader. Once I finish the newest updates, I'll review again!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on June 11, 2013
    Let's see, what sort of encouragement can I provide? I think I've said before, you are a fabulous writer and I'd read a cereal box or instructions for assembling office furniture if you wrote it. But I especially love the universe you have created. It seems so quixotic to create something this wonderful that by its nature (fanfiction, slash, Space Opera) has a limited readership.

    It must be really hard to finish an epic story, but you still keep coming up with twists. I know you're big on redemption;is it possible for Madara? (I doubt it, but you rehabilitated Itachi and made him into one of my favorite characters, so anything's possible.) I can't wait to see what is happening with the toad hybrids. And I know you can't address every loose end, but you've foreshadowed it a bit so I'm still hoping to hear about Ranmaru.
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  • From ANON - The horseman of death on June 09, 2013
    hey Mannah sorry to hear you have a literary backup i just wanted to say that once again you have an excellent story a beautiful story arc and a great eye for detail perhaps you are missing a detail and that is why you are having trouble it probably sounds silly but you know how i do it when i am at a loss. simply go over your story so far as if you were reading it for the first time when you reach the end you will probably have brand new ideas. good luck as always.
    god bless The horseman of death
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  • From satterb on June 09, 2013
    I have the same fears as I did after the last chapter. I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop so to speak. I am astonished that Sasuke seems to have forgotten how much torment and heartache "Izuna sama" has inflicted on his family. I do like the twist of Madara wanting to become himself once again, and I'm curious to see where that takes this story. Is he going to end up being outed by an adversary or will he out himself? I'm also wondering how Hikaru and Haru are going to end up feeling about each other as this story draws to a close. So many things going on. I look forward to more. Thank you for all your wonderful hard work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2013
    It's always really interesting to see the interactions with not-Izuna. It's just layers over layers of beautiful subterfuge, misunderstandings, and plots. So many plots.
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  • From blugirlami21 on June 09, 2013
    I'm sorry to hear that you are struggling with the story. But that's understandable considering how long this story has gone on for. I'm still really enjoying it thus far and still look forward to reading every week if that helps. Maybe you should consider updating less often to give yourself time to get your mojo back. We won't be mad if we have to wait a little longer to read a new chapter as long as you are able to keep writing the story.

    As for the chapter, I'm glad that Sasuke is finally using his brain when it comes to Madara. Nostalgia is great in theory but he really needs to remember what Madara has done so far and act accordingly. I look forward to Haru and Hikaru finally learning to get along. I never quite understood their aversion to each other because at the end of the day they are brothers. They should be able to appreciate the other for who they are not for what they are not.
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  • From ANON - Lixx on June 09, 2013
    I am not sure which way you are going to go with this - though I know which way I hope. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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