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By : mannahpierce
  • From satterb on July 04, 2013
    For some reason I thought we were nearing the end of this story. However, I don't see you bringing this to a close anytime soon. Thank goodness for that. I love this universe and all the characters. I can't wait to see what happens next. You always keep me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on July 03, 2013
    Chapter 39. Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh! That feels better. The impending morning! I wonder how Madara will handle the information of the contamination being released 5 days before he informed Sasuke. Wait, does that mean that Kotohime realized that Madara was gonna off her from his group? Or at least that the possibility is there so she took a 50/50 and released the virus? OMG! The possibilities of the situation going extremely bad and getting better are stuck in my mind's eye. I can't wait to find out! I bet there's a curve ball in the following chapter(s). Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 03, 2013
    oh boy! 'many more growly purrs than found in a conventional lullaby' was lovely. A very nice and reassuring note to end a tense chapter. I can't wait for Tsu chan to start taking care of Shika.
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  • From ANON - Achillona on June 29, 2013


    excellent so far. so scared for the canine hybrids health and Shikamaru's sanity.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 29, 2013
    I can't take it anymore! It's killing me. I feel sick myself... It's so stressing...
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 29, 2013
    I can't take it anymore! It's killing me. I feel sick myself... It's so stressing...
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on June 29, 2013
    SQ now that I'm out from under my desk I can write you:) No wonder Shika was a wreck! It's been in the house for that long!! I'm scare!!! Ho-chan has become a wonderful young lady:) I lol when she said they could use Tsu-chan's wobbly lip if necessary:) I was with Sasuke I forgot about Iru-sensei:) I loved that he walked Rin to her room. She wouldn't have left other wise. The title was oh so perfect for this:) Of course the sweetest for me was how Sasuke went to sleep. I loved every bit ^_^
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  • From ANON - maliya on June 29, 2013
    I feel so sad for all the hybrids that will die, I hope that Rin can find a treatment to save them.Maybe Naruto with the help of Uchida can find a way to make people in Tarrasade recongnize that hybrids have rights as well, i think this event will inevitable change Tarrasade politics toward hybrids. I also feel bad for Shikamaru, he is separated from Haru, Neji and Naruto,and now have to face another critical situation...
    Again, thanks for the hard work!!
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  • From ANON - eilidhdawn on June 27, 2013
    ever think about writing for tv especially soap operas?

    good chapter
    keep writing
    please don't leave us hanging
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  • From satterb on June 27, 2013
    This is killing me. I did not see this kind of story thread coming at all. I'm looking forward to the next update. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 25, 2013
    92 - One step forward and two steps back. They are so patient and strong! Admirebale...
    I don't believe that you could let Naruto die that way.
    It's dificult for me to even read this. I can't stand the thought of lethal diseases... Iwould wait it out, but then who would tell me how it turned out???
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 25, 2013
    Chapter 92. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO A hurdle of doom has come looming in their presence! OMG! I was so focused on Madara that it didn't come to mind that the virus could have been released early. Oh, the horror! You've gone shocked me into silence. Well, not literally. Still, you keep outdoing yourself. Awesome! Keep up the beautiful writing!
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  • From blugirlami21 on June 23, 2013
    Aww, poor babies. You really like to keep the peril close at hand. There's always something new and unexpected to happen to this crew whether it's a bombing, or Orochimaru, or Izuna, and now we have a deadly virus on the loose. I can't imagine what it would be like to lose Kiba or Naruto or one of the children to this. I can't imagine that we will get through this unscathed. It would be nice but it would make the introduction of it all to the story rather pointless. So I'm dreading the outcome of this. Good writing and twists and turns as always. I look forward to the coming chapters with trepidation.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 22, 2013
    Chapter 92. As horrible as it may sound, I'm glad you decided to have the virus infiltrate, but I don't want Naruto to get sick and die, either. This is why I hate conflict. But you can't have a story without it.

    Anyway, keep up the good work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2013
    Thank you, your are doing a wonderful job.
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