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Reviews for A Practical Demonstration

By : SakikuTorakak
  • From ANON - Lord K on August 20, 2013
    This is awesome smut...you should definitely write more stuff like this.
    I would love to see next chapter!
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  • From thmanwithnoname on March 25, 2013
    Great story. It was filthy and rough, and I love it. Any chance of a sequel? I'm not much for m/m, so I haven't read the other stuff you have posted, but if you write any more like this, I'd love to see them.
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  • From DrkVrtx on July 08, 2012
    *takes off sunglasses*

    Holy crap O_O
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  • From ANON - Proto on May 14, 2012
    An excellent story! I would certainly love to see more characters pulled in and more toys used in all holes. :)
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  • From ANON - Bruce on April 19, 2012
    My dear author,
    This is, without a doubt, THE most enthralling piece of eroticism in this category. Your descriptions of the stretching, the lust-filled looks... Upon my word I was completely insensate to everything except your words on my screen. I will be the first to admit that as a male, yuri is one of the most erotic things to read about, but this was something else entirely. If you would please consider continuing this I, and I am sure others as well, would be eternally grateful.
    Yours most exitedly,
    Bruce
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  • From ANON - hoplop on April 05, 2012
    Holy shit, you need to write more f/f or atleast another chapter, this was amazing, better thn most
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  • From ANON - dragonfly_dust on April 01, 2012
    I found this fanfic quite awesome~! Do more! Have the character explore other sex toys!
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  • From moonprincess90 on March 28, 2012
    You did a good job. I don't like F/F, but this on was very good. You just might change my mind about F/F. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - BloodyKikyo on March 26, 2012
    That was one of the hottest things I've read in quite some time. Denial, resistance, reluctant admission, you had it all. This wasn't just sex, it was a contest of wills. Also, leaving it off with a possible continuation, almost DRAGGING people towards the next scene? Truly Riveting. I'm not much of a fan of your other works(not into the yaoi), but this was stupendous.
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  • From Intelligo on March 25, 2012
    Excellent writing! More please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2012
    It was good. Well done.
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