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Reviews for Some Things Are Felt

By : Damp
  • From AlienixX on April 07, 2012
    What to say.. everything's so clearly explained in the text. The rest is in my questions :)
    Naruto’s living in a farce switching between sheer violence and deceptive periods of calm which are for the show. What’s real and good in his life? Memories. No wonder he clings to them. I think you will introduce the whole story between Naruto and Sasuke step by step, till the point when the latter ‘had driven him away and left to die’.. so far the little episodes have been some little trifles, some innocent actions. They don't hurt and make the boy smile.
    Naruto looks like a rag-doll. Still, he hasn’t been broken completely. Maybe he doesn’t care for Sasuke as much as he believes, it’s just that the memories of the boy kinda ‘anchor’ him to sanity? Remind him he had once had his own life, will, friends, some real life with real people?
    But if Naruto’s responsible for money, he’s supposed to meet people, a lot, so.. before his escape attempt he had some connection with the outer world?

    That ‘business’ of theirs and 'Blues".. mafia or some top-secret drug lab?:) And the man behind both guys - 'uncle'? How does he manage to control Kyuubi?
    ‘Kyu’ seems to be uncontrolled, unbalanced and vengeful person. Desperate at Naruto’s unresponsiveness to his feelings, Kyuubi takes what he can get.
    Kyuubi is a delusional maniac.. as if Naruto will ever be able to love him. I wonder if Kyuubi knows Sasuke’s whereabouts, or keeps tabs on him.. just to torture Naruto with the promise of the info or harm Sasuke for Naruto’s feelings for him.. unless Sasuke believes Naruto to be dead.
    Your story's definitely interesting, and yes, I like the way it's told, too, gradually. I guess it's complicated to analyse how the mind works in such a dire, hopeless situation. Or shuts down completely:) It must be difficult but very intriguing. Love such stories.

    Thank you, my hopes are with Naruto:) As for the music, your story made me think of 2 songs - "Always" by Saliva and "Forget" by "Drowning Pool".. and maybe "Hunter" by Dido and "Iris" by FooFighters. I'd recommend to try "Drowning Pool" songs, I like the band. And the mental state Naruto's in makes me think of "The Beatles" - "Two of Us", "Strawberry Fields Forever", "I'm Looking Through You", "I'm the Walrus" and Duran Duran "Out of My Mind":)
    My likes are pretty classic, as you see :)
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  • From Carousel on March 12, 2012
    I can't even handle how intrigued by this story I am. I can't wait for the mystery to unfold so please update soon.
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  • From FromAfar on March 04, 2012
    Interesting start. As little info as possible - I like this approach, you kept using "he" to the end, so "the other man"(the tormentor) and "he"(the tormented) kinda mixed..
    The whole situation is not quite clear, but two things intrigued me: "It was just one way they dealt with the other" and what Kyuubi said: "It's not entirely my fault you're in this predicament; we're both in this together". That's what I'd like to read about. What makes one to chase after the other? The cruelty of punishment and mentioned sex made me think of some.. twisted love or maybe revenge on Kyuubi's part. Friends from childhood - they could be even a family once.. whatever happened in the past, it's interesting.
    Not to mention "the dark haired friend" - can he really be Sasuke? Sounded too nice to be him:))
    Please continue. Good luck with the story.
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