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Reviews for Online Predator

By : Mushibubu
  • From ANON - Hi on December 11, 2013
    Incredibly funny and really interesting, cheered me up so much! Why isn't there more, though?
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  • From nivell on January 26, 2012
    Loving the introduction, although there were some missing words here and there. Did Sai really die though? Oh man, I hope not!
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  • From ladybird425 on January 24, 2012
    This was so hardcore that it was amazing :)
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  • From Carousel on January 23, 2012
    This is so awesome so far. It's hilarious, well-written, and I'm sure it will be sexy.
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  • From tawanawelch on January 23, 2012
    LOL!! Poor Suigetsu!! This is do totally funny how Sasuke has brought him into this craziness. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on January 23, 2012
    I'm enjoying the shit out of this one! More, more, more!
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  • From moodysavage on January 22, 2012
    I must say I'm glad I read this because it's freakin' funny! It's so spoofy and I loved his reaction when he found out Sasuke blew up his car. Totally look forward to your next chapter :)




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  • From conrada7 on January 22, 2012
    Amazing!!! Absolutely AMAZING!!! I love it!!!! Update soon please?!?
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  • From Tamara on January 22, 2012
    OMG I love this story already. First time reading a plot like this. Marital problems and Sasu having a hissy fit. Naru needing to have his SAsu back and a whole bunch of violence thrown in. Anticipate what you do next.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 22, 2012
    Please Candy,

    Sasuke is not a 'rouge' assassin, he's a rogue assassin. Big difference.

    Interesting plot, though.
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  • From laurenloogie on January 22, 2012
    Very well written. But it's lam not lamb, hehe.
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