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From ANON - angelj232000 on October 29, 2012
YAY!!!! New chapter. I have missed you and this story. I like where it is going. Itachi scares me. I can't wait for the next chapter. HUGS
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From EntityLvr on September 25, 2012
Omg so you have NO idea how long I've been searching to find one of your other stories, The Art of Patience. I read it like a few years ago and was immediately obsessed with it and followed it till it finished. Then I reread it, but when I went to read it for a third time my computer had deleted my bookmark and I had no clue where it went. I just now found it and your page today and obviously this story as well, which I totally love already, and I flipping spazzed. You and DarkPrism are my two top inspirations for writing about BDSM. and The Art of Patience is probably my top favorite story on this entire site. maybe just my favorite fanfic ever. Hope i don't sound creepy with this though. I'll continue reading this story in particular as well as start the rereading of The Art of Patience tomorrow after work. Omg I can't I believe I found you finally YES! *hands cookies having a fangasm moment* o3o
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From ANON - imawilburd on May 29, 2012
Oh I am in live. With the story so far. The D/s aspects of the relationship are great and have so many truths to them about trust being a first priorit. And Sasuke makes an amazing Dom and a very knowledgeable and smart one. I do like that he had a problem and actually took steps to fix it. Going back to basics as in subbing again was a appropriate idea. Your portrayal of the life style and boundarys are superb , so thank you for that. I look forward to more and how thier relationship grows.

Lol does someone get to beat down on Itachi because he needs one. And I have an idea who he is working with, little basturd.
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From ANON - angelj232000 on May 01, 2012
I am glad that they are working things out. I love your Naruto. I wish I could draw cause I would so draw him. I wish some one would. The ears & tails sound so cute & sexy. Keep up the AWESOME work. Can't wait for the next chapter & to see where the characters are going. HUGS!!!!
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From ANON - angelj232000 on April 18, 2012
Itachi is still perfect even when he is being a manipulative bastard. A part of me can't wait to see what he does next even though I am dreading it LOL. I think Naruto & Sasuke are so cute together. I adored Kiba. Everyone needs a friend like him. Keep up the awesome work!!!!! HUGS
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From ANON - angelj232000 on March 26, 2012
DAMN!!!!!! You really did make him a bastard. I may love Itachi but he better get what's coming to him by the end of the fic. He needs to be taught a lesson for trying to break up the cuties. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!
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From Mija on March 24, 2012
First YAY! I waited for a new chapter for what seems like forever *yes I am being dramatic*...but omg, what the heck is Itachi doing? Why would he do that? He straight out lied! He did tell Naruto that Sasuke told him and why in the heck is he trying to come between them, even if Itachi wanted to have Naruto as his own, how could he could about it this way, and how can Sasuke believe him, surely this must not have been Itachi's first time betraying his brother or he wouldnt have done it so easily, but its still confusing, he spoke to someone who I am thinking with horror mind you, was either Kabuto or Orochimaru, if Itachi is working with them than I dont even want to know what hes going to do, but then he was happy that the crisis so to speak was averted? Again confusing and yes more questions lol, but I cant wait to find out more, thanks for the great read, till next chapter, huggles an smiles Mija..:-)
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From LadyWolf on March 08, 2012
Another good chapter...trust is something that is so hard to earn especially in a D/s relationship...I wish there was a way to tell if someone is a whack job so then you can steer clear of them...;OP

Can't wait to read more!!!

post soon
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From ANON - angelj232000 on March 05, 2012
I was sooooooo HAPPY when I saw that the next chapter was up. I am crying for Naruto. He is so strong to have survived that. Kabuto needs to rot in a jail cell then hell for what he did. I was surprised the Sasuke knew Kabuto, I liked that twist. I wonder what Sasuke's bad feeling will bring. I am worried now. Still loving the story. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!
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From ANON - Mija on March 04, 2012
ahh Sasuke dear, how is it easy? You havent had sex with him yet, you have claimed a sub you knew before you even offered the contract to that he was abused and might have a hard time getting back in da scene, then you find out your mentor and fellow sibling student had a hand in your subs pain and misery? But ohh man, he kept Naruto locked up in th celler like an animal? and did all those aweful things to him? OMG poor Naru I wanted to cry and the nightmares, poor poor thing, and I just LOVE Kitsu, reminds me of Akamaru, so since they live together does Aka get along with Kitsu? lol, but I gots a feeling Sasuke will be running into Kabuto and or Orochimaru soon, most likely Kabuto but then again it woul make a bit of sense that Oro would be the one he would run into first, I hope he gives them some shit to think about and FEAR..ooh that will be good, to have Kabuto and Oro, especially Kabuto sweat, wondering if Sasuke will cause them trouble, which leads to a whole set of possibilities lol, one Kabuto finds out where Naru is and with WHO and oh hell no he wants his blond fox back and will stop at nothing to get him back becaue he will not let his rival have what was and is his...two, fearing that with Sasuke being his dom and having power and money he might cause some problems for them because I am thinking statute of limitaitons hasnt run out yet? or is that just for murder? I know murder has no expiration date when comes to law, but I think it takes at least five for violent crimes and such like rape ad stuff right? Not sure, either way even if they did not fear the law I think they would fear other things like reps and getting found out for the oily sadistic evil mean they both are and want to shut Naru up for good since without a victom there can be no proof of crime right? lol, anyhow lots of Q's of course and I babble way to much, loving this fic, I was worried it might be put on hold since I hadnt seen a new chap but when I saw this I jumped from my seat and did a little happy dance, seriously, made sure no one was watching but did it lol, well till next time looking foward to more, be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From Mija on February 12, 2012
OMFG! That was HOT! Wow, just wow, for not having penetration they sure in the heck came close lol, whew but that was smexy as all get out, I LOVED it! hehe, and I love the fact that Sasuke is all commanding and so pervy and naughty lol, before and I am sure when they are not 'playing' he will be the polite sweet man he is lol and ow man even all horney and ready to explode Naruto's smexy but eager shyness turns Sasuke on and drives him nuts I love that too! I love when Sasuke cant control him self around Naruto, how odd is that huh? I love it when he is posesive, like the jealouse thingy with Kiba and was it mentioned before that Kiba lived with Naruto? I either missed it, or forgot it, ah well, but still love that Sasu is jealoud, and thank cripes Naruto is going to spill about his ex and Kabuto? Ok I should be suprised, Kabuto is perfect for the evil abusive or what ever he did to poor Naruto the bastard, but oddly enough I hadn't expected it to be him, should of but didn't, nice choice, again glad Naruto's going to spill the beans, if he is sort of kind of over it and wants to actually start a good relationship he should spill, its not too soon, most people tell others these things before getting into relationships so that there is no baggage or so that this person knows what sort of baggage you will be bringing into said relaionship, so as you might be able to tell I totally pscyed for the next chapter and cant wait, thanks for the awesome read, great chapter, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From ANON - mina on February 11, 2012
They are so so hooott!! mah! i dunno what i was expecting when they got back to the penthouse but it wasn't so much smexiness. so that was a pleasant surprise lol. And naru being embarrassed by liking the enema was too cute, though i still judge you naru bc yes it is gross LOL lucky for him i'm not sasuke :p And of course oooo it was Kabuto, of course. You sick bastard what did you do to naru that could possibly scare sasuke away! hmph!
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From ANON - angelj232000 on February 10, 2012
I love this fic. Naruto & Sasuke are so cute together even when they are doing dirty things. I love the way their relationship is progressing. Naruto is so going to be living with Sasuke soon. I am very curious as to the basteredness of Itachi as the story goes. Keep up the awesome work!!!!! HUGS!!!!
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From ANON - mina on February 03, 2012
haha i forgot to write my name on the previous review *fail* Anyway i liked reading about their club outfits naru sounds like one sexy bitch! LOL Booty shorts what what!! XD
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From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2012
LMAO Did he really say 'Im sure your asshole is pleasant'?? lolololol that cracked me the hell up, so formal for such an off key comment it was hilarious dwl
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