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By : mannahpierce
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 02, 2012
    The sex alk, huh? Not bad! Naruto and Sasuke did well. I loved that Sasuke is still so weird about girls. He's cute like that. It's worth to read this side story even if just for this one moment. It was brilliant. Haru just couldn't find a worse person in the whole univerce to ask about girls' body parts......
    Too bad that Haru is into Ran after all. I was hoping he would bond with Kazuki!
    I liked it! This chapter was really fun to read.

    And I'm EXTAIC that you have a title for the third part of the triology, because it means that you really are thinking and working on it! You have no idea how happy I am now!
    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on January 01, 2012
    This is AWESOME!!!!!!! Omgoodness 11 ch all in Haru's point of view, cool. The sex talk was funny and sad, I hope none of the kits get attached to someone that doesn't love them. Poor Haru, to be left behind is not a good feeling even if your use to it, I hope he really does catch up. Will anyone ever know of Naruto's childhood?

    Ja ne till next time and I can't wait till Wednesday
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  • From ANON - mikoto-chan on January 01, 2012
    love your stories!!!!! I'm happy you are back ... I'm horrible at reviews but I will try to do it more from now on :)
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  • From ladybird425 on January 01, 2012
    Aws, you made Sai for Sumiko :) So lovely!
    And now it fits that he doesn't have a name x)
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  • From satterb on January 01, 2012
    I've always loved Haru chan! I can't wait to see more of this story. I'd missed you while you were away. Thanks for sharing more of this wonderful universe with us.
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  • From bloodshound on December 31, 2011
    wow. i never even thought of sai featuring. this is going to be interesting. winces on haru's behalf. for a kid whose physically younger than the rest, haru sure does have a lot more responsibilities put on him. old soul in a young body i think. snickers. those last to lines were great. Haru was so very ... er... thanks. should be fun seeing how he copes.
    I never even thought of triggered behaviors with the kits. what a scary thought as it leaves them so much more open to abuse and the snake freak is still out there somewhere. at least they're well supported. the hybrid trio, will they have triggered behaviors too. so many possibilities to play with. ^^
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  • From ANON - Kyle on December 31, 2011
    Oh man oh man! XDD

    I can just imagine Haru's expression at the end! OH NO CHILDREN.

    -kicking himself laughing-

    Also yes, I did get the email and I'm working on prelimanary sketches and stuff. c:
    It's okay I ping you WIP's and stuff to check details, right?
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  • From cynaga on December 31, 2011
    (Ch 2) What fun! I think Sai is a sentient lifeform generated by the computer. Or maybe a spy who snuck his avatar into the system. Why isn't anyone worried? Everyone assumes it was Shicka, Sumiko or Hath. We know it wasn't Haru... Intriguing!

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  • From Prism0467 on December 31, 2011
    LOL I have to wonder if there is anyone in all of Tarrasade who could sufficiently explain to Haru and the other kits what a clit is.
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  • From ANON - v on December 31, 2011
    Loved this chapter, I had to read it twice *smile* I think I was worried after all his planning when his To-chan was injured that his brain would out pace his heart and he might become a little unpleasant but I think having Ran has helped balance that out a great deal. Sai is very interesting, I really am interested to know exactly how smart Sumiko is and if anyone has noticed? Perhaps Shika has been so worried about how to be a good parent and her acting out that he's forgotten how smart his father was? Also I think using the simulators to find out if the kits will have behaviors is wonderful, I had horrible thoughts about if they would attack each other if one of them went berserk and how Naruto would blame himself, such a relief :) As always, can't wait til the next chapter!
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  • From roro237 on December 31, 2011
    (Smiling) Sai huh I love it:) I hadn't thought about which way Haru might go but yes Ran's way:) I think that there has always been a bond there. This chapter was so sweet. Our little ones are growing up ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on December 31, 2011
    haru had his sex talk, love the way sasu and naru talk about it. Sai srrm special but he is an imaginary friend, sumiko is happy. I am happy to know you have start the third part of the story.se you sonn ant happy new year!!
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  • From ANON - morlana on December 31, 2011
    Haru is growing up and I believe he would have a greater understanding of things and with his propensity towards needing to know the root he will more than likely find out a lot of distasteful things before the others. I wonder if he will approach Iruka and Naruto about their sexual experiences, if so I'm sure he'll protect the others about the knowledge of their To Chan having a rough childhood. And Sumiko she is coming into her own, wonder why Shika is ignoring her potential to be as much of a type genius as he or Haru is? Well I always enjoy your stories so I can wait to find out. Happy New Years!
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  • From bloodshound on December 30, 2011
    wb. having said that i'd like to say, wow, the litter is awesome. I love the way they check and balance each other without losing what makes them them. i also love the way naru and sas interact with them. how if something is causing a prob or not working, they tweak it till it does.
    on the mysterious boy, I'm soooooooo betting it's sumi's interactive 'friend'. I feel sorry for her a bit. it's no fun being the odd one out. I'm glad her big bro is there to help.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on December 30, 2011
    They are all so cute and I'm happy that you are back. :-D
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