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By : mannahpierce
  • From cynaga on January 07, 2012
    (Ch 4) Yes! The plot thickens... Great chapter; lots of fun to read.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 07, 2012
    Maybe Sai is a A.I. that is developing on it's own and will learn emotions like the Manga one later. I'm waiting for the nicknames to start that might be not so child friendly ;-)
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  • From bloodshound on January 07, 2012
    halllllo artificial intelligence. i thought so. this is going to cause problems.
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  • From ANON - v on January 07, 2012
    This was such a fun chapter :) Who knew that Te-chan and Ta-chan were evil and Haru would be the one to call them on it! LOL. I'm very curious about Sai also, but I think that the best part was Iruka's conversation with Haru...Its easy to forget how important he was to the growth and well being of most of the adults when you get caught up in his relationship with Ran and Kakashi so this was a lovely reminder of who he is and what he can mean to the people he loves. Loved it! :)
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  • From bloodshound on January 05, 2012
    now that is very interesting. if sue chan did the vr makeover that's impressive but why would she send the sai fairy out on a mission. if she didn't could it have been sai himself? No matter if it was su or sai, either way is going to raise some very interesting possibilities. that is something that needs a close eye kept on it.
    Well, done Haru. for a weak link, he wasn't very. ^^
    I like the way haru handled those girls too. the point needs to be hammered home that when they are irresponsible with dangerous stuff, ppl can be hurt or killed. I don't think they'll forget that any time soon.
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  • From Telynaayuri on January 05, 2012
    and the plot thickens! i havent reviewed in a while sorry but i must say that i still love your stories!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on January 04, 2012
    Looks like the only thing standing between certain frilly little Uchiha girls and world domination is Haru.
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  • From Tamara on January 04, 2012
    Wonder when this will hit the fan. Shika should find renewed interest in his sister, else she might have fairies running around the household. The mission was well written, even had me holding my breath at the outcome!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 04, 2012
    He never thought that she could be a genius? ;-) His cute little male ego will take a hard blow if she will become as intelligent as Shika :-) I can so see that :-)
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  • From roro237 on January 04, 2012
    I did the old belly laugh when Haru-chan ask Kazuki to stay and help with the girls and got the look:) I would have never guessed the girls were little terrors now:) Haru is growing up before my very eyes. Tsu-chan my little sweetie feel better soon! I enjoyed the mission. You're still so incredible with all kinds of action going on in a chapter:) Iruke-sensei to the parents and now to the children wonderful. Queenie thank you for Wednesdays and Saturdays. I had a sparkle in my eye on the way home from work today ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kyle on January 04, 2012
    I've not been waiting excitedly all day for this to update
    ..
    why do you ask?

    *innocent whistle*

    Is sumiko doing it or is it something/someone else?
    Perhaps the data crystal array Haru installed that is never doing what it should?
    If sumiko is doing it...why is nobody aware she's so clever?
    Surely if Shika is monitoring the program, he'd be aware it's not Haru is changing it?
    So manyquestions.

    BE SUNDAY ALREADY -shot-

    Thanks again for writing these Mannah. c:
    I really really enjoy them.
    I hope Wallflower is updated soon too.
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  • From ANON - richon on January 04, 2012
    hoho the 2 demons girls nearly kill their brother and the other children. haru and ran did the right thing. Sumiko may be a type 7 ou type 5 too. haru will discover soon. Love this story !! see you soon
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 04, 2012
    Poor Iruka... taking care of Shika and then Sasuke was probably the most challenging and tireing task in his life so far and now he must take care (kind of SAVE from himself...) the brillinat mix of both of them!!! HA! he needs to save another sleepyhead genius... cute. Good luck Iruka! He will surely have some good influence on Haru. I can't wait for more interaction between the two of them. It's a shame that I haven't thought of it before! It's so perfect. I just wonder what role will Iruka ake. He was kind of a...'parent figure' for Sasuke, giving him warmth that he missed. For Shika he was some one who (a least I see it that way) who had taught him the 'normal human' stuff. He grounded him in the normal life.
    I wonder what will he be for Haru. What does Haru need? If a teacher than is Iruka smart enough????

    This story pulls me in....

    Thank you for updating!
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  • From ANON - toosweet05 on January 02, 2012
    This is a great continuation from the stories. I am sorry to see that it is only going to be 11 chapters long, but I still love reading any story that you write. You are an awesome writer.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 02, 2012
    I see a Threesome in the future. I might be crazy but I see it and I'm happy about it aslong as it lasts :-)
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