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Reviews for The Words I Couldn't Say

By : vampireunicorn
  • From ANON - sophieee on January 08, 2014
    What happens to itachi? Does he die of his disease?


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  • From GobletofFenrir on January 14, 2012
    I really like what you've got going on here. The premise is wonderful and your storytelling is fun to take part of. I can only say that you're a bit fond of the semicolon and there are a few grammatical errors throughout, but other than that, wonderful. :)
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  • From moonprincess90 on January 05, 2012
    Oooooooh :::::cries:::: that was so sweet!!!! That waa realy one of the best fics i've read in a long time. I hope the're will be anthere fic maybe of them having the baby? There are so many different ways you could take this. Thanks for the fave fic. :-)
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  • From Tosti555 on January 01, 2012
    I just saw this story for the first time yesterday, and I've read almost non-stop. I can say that this is the favorite story I've ever read on here! The storyline is one of my favorites, the writing is amazing and everybody is incredibly in character. Especially Sasuke, I love him and hate him just as much. You really showed how he's grown emotionally. I really hope you write a sequel, or a story just as awesome!
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  • From moodysavage on December 30, 2011
    awwww!!!! I loved the ending sweetness and all :)
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  • From ANON - morlana on December 30, 2011
    Nice to see Sasu was wrong about his father and Naru's mother as spry as always. What a party animal. heh I love that Fugaku still expects a grand child, I wonder how they'll do it. Adopt or surrogate? Very nice wedding, I was expecting a double wedding but I guess only Naru and Sas were prepared for that.
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  • From moodysavage on December 28, 2011
    omgosh I just laughed and laughed over this chapter! I think my favorite part was when Kiba and Kushina woke up Sasuke and Naruto... that whole scene where Kiba was holding the toy and then Sasuke was rethinking everything as Kushina found out about her antique chair... that was awesome. Freakin' awesome.

    Now for Sakura... was she actually going to go through with it?!?
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  • From moodysavage on December 23, 2011
    *snicker* 'and the fat one looks hungry' lol

    I wonder if Sakura found Sasuke's letter he hid... or if she's panicking too? I bet that's why she's still calling. She probably feels like braining him right about now lol.

    I don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews. I think it's totally awesome. It's like a movie where every scene furthers the plot... it's really well done. I really really loved when Sasuke broke down in the hospital and cried on Naruto and Naruto's mom saw the whole thing. It's like that scene resolved her feeling toward the situation and made it possible for her to wholly accept Sasuke. Before she probably felt that Naruto loved Sasuke more but I think that changed her mind. That and how he protected Naruto during the crash.

    This story just has so much depth to it. *sigh* it's awesome :)
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  • From moodysavage on December 23, 2011
    ack! I'm so behind... but I just have to review. I love love love this story! I'm at the part where Naruto and his mom are laughing about Sakura trying to sleep with Sasuke while she's trying to break in to her email to prove she's cheating with Gaara. I'm not sure if she is with Gaara (though that seems likely) BUT I think Sakura is trying to MAKE Sasuke call off the wedding. We're so used to her being all clingy so we think it's natural. But when you wrote that one of the moms (Sasuke's I think) said she was so smart that made me remember Sakura saying to herself that maybe she should be MORE clingy. And those hints from others that it was like she was annoying Sasuke on purpose... SHE IS!!!

    If her family is broke then they would kill her if she messed up this great deal. For her Sasuke HAS to be the one to break it off. But Gaara... poor guy I still don't see him stuck with her lol. Now you have probably already written WAY past this point in my guessing but oh well.

    I loved the rings too... and that whole scene at the beach and Sasuke threatening about the sand lol. Really fun to read :)
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  • From moodysavage on December 13, 2011
    arrggg!!! I am so far behind!!! I'm been saving this story for when I am not half dead falling asleep or distracted by a house full... my last chapter was chapter 8!!! I loved Sakura getting maced by the way. That was freakin' hilarious. Just wanted you to know that I didn't fall off the face of the Earth.
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  • From ANON - Masako on December 07, 2011
    I can never be mad at sasuke because his personality is, unfortunately very similar to mine. This is part of the reason your story creates such a huge emotional roller coaster for me...it reminds me of my own personality's weak points. Like I said in the beginning, this is an excellent introduction into the aff world. I don't know how long you have been writing but the ability to create the whole spectrum of human emotions in just one chapter is beautiful and definitely a skill to be very proud of. The ending of this chapter had me close to tears. I love how you outlined the whole purity of the church vows with naruto's relationship frustrations and insecurities. There is always happiness at the end but it is never complete and as a reader it makes me really look forward to the day there is a perfect happy ending. Thank you for the chapter and I can't wait to read the next!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on December 07, 2011
    I love what this story has become.
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  • From ANON - Masako on December 05, 2011
    Sweet mother of mercy that was HOT!!!! Whoa my hearts pounding.... It's a strange roller coaster though. I get all pissed off because of sasuke's blind stubbornness but you always end with just the two in so hot sexy action and my anger disappears...but my face is still red (for other reasons) (｡-_-｡). I'm really curious how you are going to get sasuke to see the light. Thanks for the great chapter. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From moodysavage on December 04, 2011
    you are super talented at writing... you know that right? and I'm so glad you like my reviews because I LOVE GIVING THEM for this story. This kind of chapter is one that some people have a hard time writing... sometimes the emotional feelings get lost in the dom/sub feelings but you did it really well. There's just something about scenes where someone totally gives their control up to someone they trust that I find very appealing. Maybe because in the real world that just isn't the way it is. Love doesn't always go with trust and D/s scenes are all about trust. Maybe that's why I like them lol. Anyway... wonderful chapter as always and I have to say... I am dying to know what role Gaara is going to play in all of this. I've even wondered if Sasuke is going to be left standing at the alter as Sakura runs off with Gaara!
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  • From moodysavage on December 03, 2011
    That chapter was sooo good!!! My favorite line... 'Awake Sasuke was nowhere near as cute as sleeping Sasuke.' I admit... I found that totally funny. I loved the whole honeymoon suite scene that Naruto planned out too. It had so many different parts to it... and Naruto took it slow and worked to make it so special for Sasuke. But I think my favorite part there was when Sasuke admitted that he had never topped and his fantasy was to top Naruto... and only Naruto and Naruto responded "I love you too." That was sooo sweet!!!!

    Really awesome chapter.
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