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Reviews for Hysteria

By : silverlitforest
  • From Dorkchic on November 05, 2011
    First off I want to say that I adore your stories. They are very well written and sexy as hell. Even when they are pairing that I would never have done or one of my personal favorites (Ita/Naru) I like them! You have a few spelling errors, but nothing too serious. There is only one thing with which I want to take issue. The word 'withering'. This has become a pet peeve of mine because I see it in a lot of fics so please do not take this too personally because it is only partially about you- just been building up for a while. In about 1/3 of the lemons I read someone will write that whomever is on the receiving end withers or is withering. 'Wither' means to dry up, shrink, and die. Flowers wither not long after they have been picked. The term I think people are looking for is 'writhe' - which means to squirm or move in a serpentine fashion. I think someone way back used the improper term and people started using it themselves after figuring out the meaning from the context clues not realizing it was wrong.

    Sorry for the rant and I will get off of my soapbox! Please do not be offended and feel free to ignore me or delete this. Hoping that I read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - lo on November 05, 2011
    I like your PWP stories, they're sweet and sexy.
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  • From tawanawelch on November 05, 2011
    Wow! I really loved this n I also fell in love with this pairing reading JaydenNara's stories. This was hot and sensual as well as comforting to see Kiba and Shikaku getting along do well.:)
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