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Reviews for I Never Wanted a Second Chance

By : Spiraling
  • From ANON - Jen on October 23, 2011
    Well I guess I agree with FromAfar. The most interesting part of this story to me is Naruto having to live with his plans to save Sasuke or die alongside him having gone drastically awry. To Naruto, this would be the ultimate failure. The one thing he has worked so hard for for YEARS to completely blow up in his face. Even worse, he's stated that he doesn't believe he can be Hokage UNLESS he saves Sasuke. So to him, saving Sasuke, even if that means dying with him, also means accomplishing his biggest dream. On top of this, Naruto has finally killed a person--and it was his best friend, to boot! So now he's without his most important person, has no dreams left, and has totally failed at something he worked so hard to accomplish. Having lost all that, this Naruto should be a shell of his former self, I would imagine. Seeing Naruto work through these issues is why I'd want to read this fic. Ordinary teenager Sasuke doesn't really interest me because, well, he's ordinary. As an ordinary person stuck in an extraordinary universe, he just kinda loses by default. Not to mention, this kid was talking about pranks and seances and going to school. What could he possibly have to say to a guy who just killed his best friend, fought and won a war, and can do ninja magic? Naruto certainly can't keep this Sasuke. This world is far too dangerous for him, and this Sasuke has his brother, and his own Naruto, back at home waiting for him...
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  • From FromAfar on October 23, 2011
    Btw, if Naruto killed Sasuke, this automatically means Naruto's defeat. He lost to Sasuke's past, hatred, convictions, he couldn't bring him back neither physically, nor emotionally. He's no Hokage. He wanted to win Sasuke back, not to break him. Instead of ending the circle of hatred, he broke it.
    So, if Naruto lost to original Sasuke, do you plan any kind of.. hm.. "return match"? But these two guy are sooo different.
    Well, we'll see I guess.
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  • From FromAfar on October 23, 2011
    Well, there are SO MANY ways in which Naruto-fans try to "change" or "adapt" Sasuke for Naruto.. turning him into a baby, erasing his memory, making him 10 years younger or blind etc etc etc Obviously, the original unyielding warrior-avenger who could hold his own with Naruto or even defeat him wasn't "good enough" (?) He really made things too "complicated", painful or too real. Too difficult for Naruto's capacities to deal with.
    The one who "never wanted a second chance" is sasuke, I believe, just as he never wanted to be "redeemed", changed-tamed-adapted in any way by any author here on AFF :)
    To the plot of this story: personally, I see no reason in introducing an out-of-this-world-Sasuke. He has no connection to Naruto's world and holds no responsibility for anything the "original" Sasuke did, which leads to complications, painful attachment, unreal hopes and expectations.. for everyone. I don't think Naruto will let go of him so easily as he plans.
    In fact, I'd rather read more about Naruto coping with consequences of killing Sasuke. This IS real! The most intersting, how did he manage to survive and not to die together, as he promised they would.. :)

    Good luck with the story. Hope it'll get more.. realistic turn.
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  • From ANON - vixenia on October 22, 2011
    omg that was an awesome start!!! i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on October 21, 2011
    poor suburban Sas. He so isn't geared for this sorta thing.
    Naru will look after him though and one day they might be able to get him home.
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  • From smint45 on October 21, 2011
    Really interesting start I'm waiting eagerly for more!!! See you!!!
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  • From ANON - G on October 21, 2011
    I've seen this sort of premise before: main character meets AU version of his rival/series villain/etc. and they fall in love. I'm always a little hesitant about reading these fics because to me, the main character falling in love with the AU character is basically like if Naruto were falling in love with a different person who just happens to look like Sasuke. I guess I'm such a sap that I don't want Naruto to be with new and improved replacement Sasuke. I want him to be with real Sasuke who he has a bunch of history with. Well, you are a good writer so I will give this fic a few chapters to see if I can get used to replacement Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Aiko-chan on October 21, 2011
    MUST READ MORE. I love the way it's going, and OH MY GOD it's Sasuke but then again it's not!

    Please update soon!
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  • From moodysavage on October 20, 2011
    I LOVED this!!! Write more.... soon soon soon soon soon !!! I love the idea of this storyline. Can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From Carousel on October 20, 2011
    This is a pretty interesting story so far. I wonder what happened to make AU!Sasuke travel into the ninja world. Curious....update soon please! :D
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 20, 2011
    Frist reader!!! Cool! I love the premise! Did Itachi come over too?
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