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Reviews for Hold On Tightly, Let Go Lightly

By : yolotengo
  • From Stellina on October 16, 2011
    I absolutely LOVE this story!! Awesome job! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update when ever you have the chance (hopefully soon!) ^^

    -Stella(:
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 15, 2011
    omg.
    that was crazy!
    i cant wait for another chapter!
    update soon.
    and add some smut for good measure!

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From moodysavage on October 15, 2011
    I feel bad for Sasuke!!! With their rivalry I don't know how Sasuke will be able to let go of Itachi sleeping with Naruto with Naruto hanging all over him like he did. Naruto will need to learn some boyfriend skills on what not to do if he wants things to work out. His past is his past but he can't let that ruin his future by behaving in a way forces Sasuke to see that Naruto isn't his. Sasuke is possessive... he'll want Naruto to belong to him and Naruto wants to belong him too! An insecure Sasuke is painful when Naruto could so easily fix it if he was just aware.

    *sigh* But that would take maturity and awareness... not something Naruto is strong on. You're setting up for angst aren't you? Pleeaasseeee say it isn't so! Give Naruto an epiphany... no more hanging on other men! *banging head on desk*
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 15, 2011
    Lots of chapters to catch up to. :) Naruto's detox experience sounds *rough.* Not that I like watching him suffer, but I'm glad you didn't skip over all the shit that happens when someone goes into withdrawal. It's not a pretty experience, but given how much he was using earlier in the fic, it had to happen.

    Sad thing is, after everything else Naruto has been through, the withdrawal might be the easiest thing he goes through in trying to adjust to a normal life where he isn't being abused. It really depressed me when Sasuke said Naruto probably should never be a parent after everything that had happened, but the sad fact of the matter is that he's probably right. Sometimes a person with a really messed up past can be a good parent, but most of the time not. And it's a good example of the fact that in big and small ways, Naruto might always be affected by his experiences. For one thing, Naruto has become so used to being with older men, at this point, I don't think he could have a relationship with another kid his own age even if he wanted to. If Sasuke had been the same age as Naruto, I don't think it could have worked between them. Another 16 year-old wouldn't be emotionally equipped to do everything for Naruto that this Sasuke has done, and I don't think Naruto himself could relate to another 16 year-old anyway. What does a person who has seen and done all the things that Naruto has say to someone whose daily concerns have never been much more complicated than school, soccer practice, and homework? School is another issue where Naruto has been permanently affected by his experiences. It would be good for Naruto if he were to eventually make friends with people his own age (he has been used and abused by adults for his entire life), but at this point, putting him back into regular high school and expecting him to not feel uncomfortable there is probably out.

    Finally, it was a shock that Itachi had once been one of Naruto's clients. Even if he was decent enough not to normally sleep with him, even doing it one time was still one time too many. (Sasuke was right to make an issue of it.) But it's true though, occasionally prostitutes' clients are decent people like Itachi who just want to hang out. They aren't necessarily always going to be perverts like Orochimaru. Glad Naruto wasn't always met with nothing but cruelty while he was on the streets. :(
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  • From moodysavage on October 14, 2011
    seeeeexy! Really really liked that chapter. I'm glad they are taking things slow and that they are letting their relationship build... with the play time included :)

    I worry about when Sasuke goes back to work though.
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 13, 2011
    Ooooooo.
    nice treat!
    thank you for that one.
    i love this story so update soon.
    XD.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From smint45 on October 13, 2011
    Oh that was nice!!! Sakura is such a bitch!!! I hoped Tsunade would come, oh well!!! But now they have to get Naruto off the methadon slowly!!! That will take some time and work!!! Poor guy ^^ See you soon!!!
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  • From moodysavage on October 12, 2011
    *contented sigh* that was so sweet... I like Sasuke being all tender with Naruto... and also telling Sakura to get lost lol
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  • From FromAfar on October 11, 2011
    On the whole I like the story, it's not boring and even though the plot is quite "classic" on AFF, it's still pleasure to read.
    One thing I really miss is what makes Naruto so special a kid in Sasuke's eyes. Is it just a chance coincidence that he stumbled upon him? In short, I'd like to know more of Naruto as a person. Of course, here goes a story of used & abused + never loved child etc etc, but what makes the boy really attractive, charming maybe?? I fail to see what could attract Sasuke's attention in Nazruto or make him desire a gaunt, scrawny street hooker. Pity or perversion? Or Naruto's vulnerability, helplessness? Or else?
    This point I'd like to understand. What's the true reason Uchiha helps the kid? Did Sasuke really *want* the boy from the moment he saw him?..hm. Or maybe Sasuke really has nothing to do with his life or free time..
    Naruto keeps reminding me of Leo Di Caprio from "The Titanic":)) Not sure why.
    Thank you for updating so quckly and good luck.
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  • From moodysavage on October 11, 2011
    There!?! It stops there?!!! Noooooo!!!!!!!!!!! I was so into this chapter and it just… stopped! Arrrgggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I loved the kiss…it was so sweet. Hate knowing Naruto has been abused for so long. Love that Sasuke is getting more used to touching with Naruto. Hate that Orochimaru is twice Sasuke’s age and Naruto slept with him. Love that Sasuke blushes and is kinda hesitant on rushing his first relationship. Hate that Naruto doesn’t know if he can stay clean (he will… right?). Love that Sasuke is right there for him. Hate unexpected cliffhanger (he’s calling Tsudnade right?)

    Notice a pattern here? Hmmm? NOW it’s time to write an ‘I love it!!’ chapter. Actually I often like stories that can give a reader strong feelings for the characters- very well done.

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  • From smint45 on October 11, 2011
    Oh my god you can't stop here!!!! And you absolouly can't let Naruto die!!! I really hope everything is going to be alright!!! Is this normal for withdrawels? I never witnessed them so I don't know ^^ I hope to hear from you soon!!!
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 11, 2011
    oh.
    interesting.
    let me guess?
    Itachi!
    lol.
    nicely done.
    cant wait for more.
    update soon.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From smint45 on October 10, 2011
    Really great!!! I want more ^^ See you!!!
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 10, 2011
    oh wow.
    i love how i dont rad this for a few days and you already have 4 more chapters up.
    keep it up.
    im really looking forward to the rest.
    naruto and sasukes relationship.
    not the past.
    ew.
    some people.
    anyway.
    love it so far.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From moodysavage on October 09, 2011
    I'm so glad Naruto said yes about staying!!! But how old is Naruto? I don't want Sasuke getting in trouble!!!
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