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Reviews for Benevolent

By : katokachan
  • From ANON - EmmyBBerry on November 13, 2011
    Hahaha adorable chaper, can feel things getting a bit tense now, cant wait to see what happens! Always willing to Beta if you want?
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  • From moodysavage on October 27, 2011
    There!?! You stopped there!?? *mumbling in a corner sulking... stopping there...nice long chapter... still ended too soon... need more info... now now now darnit'*
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  • From bloodshound on October 10, 2011
    man they are adorable together...though you can just see that sas past is going to come back to bite them... still, the guy is 17. He only has a year or so before he;s legal and tell them to shove it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2011
    I enjoy both hearing what they think and knowing what they are doing.

    As for the story itself, I quite enjoy it. Please continue to update.
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  • From moodysavage on October 07, 2011
    cute and awkward... really fun to read. I like it when a scene describes the action and the thoughts. It would actually have been a lot more difficult without the lube though.
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  • From moodysavage on October 03, 2011
    awesome!
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  • From ANON - Allie on September 30, 2011
    This story is fucking cute.
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  • From moodysavage on September 29, 2011
    whoo hoo! I so liked that! It was adorable how close they are and how they are always together. The little hints of awareness that kept cropping up during the swimming ... and Sasuke carrying Naruto on his back... those were just so sweet. And that last part... Sasuke needs some helpppppp!!! :) I'm really liking reading this.
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  • From tawanawelch on September 29, 2011
    LOL!! Sasuke wants help pumping it orrrr thinking of somethingvto pump it to.:)). I know Naruto's voice sounds so sexy.
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  • From ANON - DD on September 28, 2011
    Super adorable!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 27, 2011
    Yes!! Keep going! Keep going! I can't wait to see what u have in store for them next chapter..d
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 26, 2011
    Awwww! So cute! Yes def continue!
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  • From moodysavage on September 26, 2011
    cuuute! I think it would also be very cute to see a peek of their lives at different points as they are growing up
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  • From Stacy on September 26, 2011
    Way to cute!!
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