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Reviews for Ardor

By : katokachan
  • From lara5170 on September 28, 2015
    This is a very good story but I'm afraid to look at the date it was posted. I really don't want to find that it's an abandoned story but I can't help but feel it is. I really hope I'm wrong.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2015
    YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH. i cant believe u somehow sucked me into this shitty fic and then didnt even finish the fucking thing. u haven't updated in three fucking years and i bet u never see this review but FUCK YOU!!
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  • From ANON - Killua17 on December 31, 2013
    WHY!!
    I need to know what happens next, I NEED TO KNOW!!
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  • From ANON - joe on June 24, 2013
    why do you keep having naruto say he can take care of himself and yet he's always in trouble and needing rescuing----how did such a bitch pass police academy with top honors and youngest and most achieved- he can't seem to get out of any trouble at all unless he's rescued.

    i could do without the bit between itachi and kakashi- does absolutely nothing but detract from the main story.....and itachi's interrogation technique--- why would it work ??? really stupid criminals maybe---so i don't know why you came up with that weirdness____a lot of this reads like crack fiction
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  • From ANON - joe on June 24, 2013
    awesome
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  • From MisatosPenPen on March 20, 2013
    Um, update, please? I really want to know what happens.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on January 25, 2012
    *Does a happy dance* So happy to see this one updated!!! I really need to see possessive Itachi take his puppydog-like Kakashi!
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  • From runoutofaname on January 25, 2012
    Awsome! Keep it up =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2012
    (What do you guys think?)

    horrible
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  • From abigailpa on November 03, 2011
    Omg lol I love itachi I cnt wait for more n what did thy do to naruto lol I'm so curious I cnt wait to c Wat happens between neji n sasuke cuz it seems like neji is probly gonna b an issue
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  • From tawanawelch on November 03, 2011
    I'm loving this story!!! My man, Neji to the rescue!!! I'm so glad he did that, now I know his life will be spared by the Uchihas. Unless domeone else from his side takes him out.:)
    Great work on this chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Joyce on November 02, 2011
    MY GOD. Updating soon please please please!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on November 02, 2011
    Woohoo! Thank you for updating, the waiting was killing me. I love those brothers sooo much! And Kakashi was adorable! Can't wait for a little Itachi/Kakashi!!! Neji, I love you too. Update soon! Pleeeease!
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  • From bloodshound on October 19, 2011
    man, those pricks responsible for this game of chase the dobe nappers are beyond annoying. and if they annoy me, poor sas must be frothing.
    they deserve a nice, drawn out, lingering and extremely painful death,
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  • From tawanawelch on October 19, 2011
    THAT!!! Was AWESOME!! Sasuke was really showing his true self I loved it! I hope my Neji is spared somehow through all this n thank Kami Yukio is DEAD!!! Now for Kakuzu n the rest. Do they want Sasuke dead or do they want to sell both him n Naruto? I like more Itachi n Kakashi time.:d. I can't wait for ur next chapter!!! Awesome reading!!!
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