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Reviews for Ardor

By : katokachan
  • From tawanawelch on October 19, 2011
    OMG!! I love Neji so much!! >.< I'm glad he's not being mean but I guess he is working with criminals too. So much has happened n even the cops r breaking n entering,LMAO!!! I wish I cuda seen all that was happening at the station with everyone working together. When Shino gets up, oh boy! It'll be payback time unless he'd understand. Jiraya may gave a hissy cuz he'd be found out thru all this. Poor Sasuke's suffering from much anxiety for feeling helpless. What does Orochimaru want anyway? Does he want Sasuke dead? Take over Uchiha connections? Hmm...this is getting better n better. :)
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 18, 2011
    "One more thing, I will definitely add some more Kakashi/Itachi for you!" Thank you!!!! If you know my work, you know that's on of my obessions. *Jumps for joy*
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 18, 2011
    I'm totally into this story! Love it! Just let Kakashi seriously kick ass with the Uchiha (or give us a little more Itachi/Kakashi) and I'll be happy!!!
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  • From sara101 on October 11, 2011
    huh what thats the end? ugh i was like omg no, not another person, more suspense, ugh no not again, blah lol loved the chapter tho :D cant wait for the next chapter great job!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on October 04, 2011
    LOL!! Itachi wanted to shoot Sasuke's toe again!! That's so hilarious!! Thanks for the comic relief.:d yaaay!! Action next chapter!! Soooo, Kakuzu is the big boss of Yukio. Naruto might be in for torturous times up ahead. Especially if his number 1 henchman is Hidan. o.o

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  • From tawanawelch on October 04, 2011
    So!! Jaraiya is involved with the corruption? Maybe that'll make it a little easier for them to sneak around. I guess Yukio is the one who's kidnapped Naruto n I can't WAIT to see evil mobsters Itachi n Sasuke next chapter. I hope they take care of Yukio once and for all.:3 Hahaha!!! Comic relief was too funny with Itachi wanting to shoot Sasuke's big toe!! XDD
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  • From Eloradanin on October 03, 2011
    "Naruto looked at his mirror and noticed a car, which now that he actually thought about it, had been following him for a while already.
    "Hello?"
    "Sasuke, by any chance are you-?
    "Naruto?"
    "Your little sex toy won't be able to save you this time" the familiar voice shoved Naruto in the trunk and the dark vehicle drove in the opposite direction.
    In about a few hours they were out of city limits." This kind of lost me, one second Naruto's driving the next stuffed into a trunk? otherwise I love it


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  • From ANON - Caroline on October 03, 2011
    Great story. Thumbs up =)
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  • From sara101 on September 30, 2011
    absolutely love this story cant wait till you update it!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 30, 2011
    Aww, Happy Birthday!!!! Early!!! I hope u have an Incredible celebration!!:)
    This chapter was great with the guys talking about Naruto n then Sasuke n Itachi kinda talking it out. Is Itachi angry but just saying anything yet? Man! It's going to be gard for them to hide their relationship. I bet Kiba will do some checking up on Sasuke cuz he's the angriest it seems. I guess Shikamaru doesn't really have a reason that he'd check into it. So poor Hinata had a crush on Naruto, huh? Wonder what Naruto would say now if he found out about that. LOL!!! I love how possessive U make Sasuke in this! *sqeeeee* it makes reading this story That much more exciting!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 30, 2011
    This story just keeps getting better n better. I'm so afraid for Naruto of the shock n disappointment his friends will be in when they find out about Sasuke. What is Sasuke going to do about his brother much worse his father when They find out? This is such a mess. Poor Naruto's trying to do the right thing but love is, I guess, confusing him.
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  • From sara101 on September 27, 2011
    loving this story can't wait till the next chapter hehe
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  • From ANON - mattey on September 25, 2011
    Oh fuk yea! Keep it up
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  • From runoutofaname on September 22, 2011
    Awsome! Keep it up =)
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  • From ANON - taby on September 21, 2011
    Now I'm so anxious for the next chapter
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