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Reviews for The beauty after the storm

By : foxkitsune300
  • From HollowedRose on September 10, 2011
    Oh my, Sasuke is being his usual bastard self, really now, I don't expect him to give up so easily. I also can't wait to see how the meeting between him and his son will go. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 10, 2011
    this is getting interesting.
    i cant wait to see where this leads.
    keep up the good work!
    oh...
    and are you gonna have any smut in this?
    like as a flashback or something?
    just wondering.
    XD.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From moodysavage on September 09, 2011
    I loved this! I thought the parts where Yuudai was annoying Kiba on purpose were just hilarious. And Kakashi getting stuck with Sasuke? lol I so laughed at poor Kakashi. It's going to be funny watching him plan for things for Sasuke to do. Kakashi can be pretty creative. Yuudai is figuring things out quick so it'll be interesting to see how he reacts to meeting or seeing Sasuke. And I wonder what his picture is going to be!?

    And it was my pleasure to beta! :)
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  • From bloodshound on September 08, 2011
    That bastard. That miserable rat prick bastard. Odds on he'll only want his kid too, selfish prick. If he wasn't so selfish as to target Naru he might still have kept an amicable relationship with him... Still, i suppose he wanted to breed his heirs with the strongest and Naru is very strong.
    I noticed a few typos. if you're not sure of the word meaning or tense, stick em in dictionary .com. considering you've already got three chappies out and there were only 2 or 3 typos that i noticed that's pretty damn good.
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  • From moodysavage on September 08, 2011
    *fangirl squeal!!!* A chapter for me?! :) Thank you!!! :)

    I do really love this story. I think you have a really solid unique storyline. I can't predict everything about it and it doesn't follow the typical 'Sasuke is a misunderstood jerk but Naruto forgives everything' format. I like those kinds too but I also like to sometimes not know what is going to happen lol.

    And Naruto has a child from 2 of the people he has been closest to... and their ages are so perfect! 4 year olds are so cute and say the funniest things and Sasuke's son at ten would be old enough to pick up and understand a lot of things. Grandma Iruka? lol That's so cute.

    And Sasuke's son is going to track him down! :) Oh does he have it coming... just wait... Sasuke's son has a mind of his own *giggle*

    You know how much I like this story of yours... so I'm also going to offer to beta it if you want. Time is kicking my butt right now but I do get really excited when I see a chapter up lol I'd love to see others react the same way. You can email me at moodysavage@yahoo.com if your interested. But don't feel you have to or anything... I love this story regardless lol.

    Thanks so much for the chapter!!! :)
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  • From moodysavage on September 07, 2011
    I feel like cackling with glee. Really I do. Sasuke being an over-confident ass and Naruto being a steaming mad hot head and both of them being stubborn. I love it! :) It's going to be really interesting to see what Sasuke has up his sleeve to try to smooth things over and how he reacts when Naruto doesn't cooperate. lol and he says he wants to repair the friendship... but what does he REALLY want. And 11 years have passed? Naruto's babies? Did he and Gaara have kids too or did he have twins with Sasuke?!?

    SOoooo many questions lol.
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  • From Stacy on September 07, 2011
    Damn that sasuke!
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  • From moodysavage on September 07, 2011
    ahggghhh!!!! that was awesome! "miss me?" aarrggghhhhH!!!!! I soooo wanna' know. (now I'm excited... more to come!!!) :)
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