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Reviews for The beauty after the storm

By : foxkitsune300
  • From HollowedRose on September 19, 2011
    Whoa! The kid is dangerous! And Sasuke is an asshole for being such an insensitive jerk and just saying it like that. I can't wait to see what happens next. >.>
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  • From bloodshound on September 16, 2011
    oh oh... naru is gonna just HATE himself in the morning. wouldn't retrieving his kits take priority over revenge though?
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 16, 2011
    ha!
    i cant wait for another one of these.
    update soon.
    ohhhh~
    i cant wait for Garra to step in and see them.
    ha!
    i cant wait for that.
    lol.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From moodysavage on September 15, 2011
    ooohhhh!!! I loved that!!! I loved what Sasuke said to Naruto!!! Hating Sasuke is just impossible for me but he was so horrible to Naruto. I'm so glad to know that he has left Naruto alone for all the years to pay for what he did and that all he is expecting is to try to be friends with Naruto again. That will be a major step for Naruto to be able to forgive him and accept him as a part of their lives and in his son's life. Ohhh I just so love this story! You keep surprising me!!!

    and thanks for the kudos! I am totally enjoying beta reading this for you :)
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 15, 2011
    Aw.
    Garra cried.
    lol.
    yea.
    thanks Moody.
    that is the name right?
    anyway.
    cant wait for more.
    update soon.
    XD.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From HollowedRose on September 15, 2011
    No! I don't wanna feel sorry for Sasuke! Dammit! And yet I do, and that pisses me off. Somehow, no matter how huge of an asshole Sasuke is, in any fic or in the actual manga, I can never completely hate him. Sure, I hate him, but there's always that hope that he'll go back to Konoha and be friends with Naruto again.

    So basically, from this chapter, there's a small possibility my hope will come true. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's a pity Naruto probably didn't hear a word Sasuke said. Anyway, I'm hoping for this day to go by fast so that when tomorrow comes I can read a new chapter. =P
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  • From bloodshound on September 14, 2011
    wow, you update fast. ^^
    For the deadies... couldn't happen to a nicer pair of bastards. Yuu chan, really, going in with NO backup. Not smart kid, not at all. Well crap, how are they gonna get Kyu Naru to back down enough to save his kid.
    No typos at ALL *happy dances allllll around you, waving banners. Though, why do we have two chappie 3's :/
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 14, 2011
    omg.
    i cant wait for more of this one.
    i love it.
    XD.
    update soon.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From HollowedRose on September 12, 2011
    Oh my, I almost feel guilty for thinking it was Sasuke...

    I definitely did not expect the kidnapper to be Itachi, somehow Akatsuki had totally slipped my mind, silly me. Now then, does Itachi want an heir too? *shudders in horror* D:
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 12, 2011
    omg.
    he did NOT!
    ugh.
    how could u end it there!
    im so maddddd.
    update soon.
    ugh!

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From HollowedRose on September 12, 2011
    Ok, I did NOT expect that. I didn't think Sasuke would go that far. Even though he was not punished for any of the things he did while being with Orochimaru, this happens in Konoha and I don't see how he could escape punishment this time if and when he gets caught. What an asshole. Unless that wasn't Sasuke, but who else could it be? =/
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  • From Dorkchic on September 11, 2011
    Gaara attempts to head the problem off at the pass- good for him! I cannot begin to describe how disgusted I am with Sasuke so far. If he were truly forced to do it for the sake of his cover then that is one thing, but the way he was behaving during that time and how eager he was to torture Naruto and how often he did it was well beyond what would have been required to stay in Orochimaru's good graces. He had to force Naruto, but that does not mean he had to make it as painful as he possibly could. (the sick bastard was enjoying it!) And if it were truly all for the sake of the mission he would have not have acted the way he did on his return. People who are forced to do extreme things (like repeatedly raping and torturing their best friend) feel bad about it during and afterward. They do not just do the Uchiha equivalent of saying "Na na, nothing you can do I have a get out of jail free card so it sucks for you!" while sticking out their tongue.

    He did not seem to care at all what Naruto had went through and gave the impression that he just used the mission as an excuse to do whatever he wanted with impunity....the bastard.
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  • From Bluerose92 on September 11, 2011
    omg.
    i love it.
    not the bad stuff.
    but the ending.
    nice.
    cant wait for more.
    update soon.
    lol.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From moodysavage on September 10, 2011
    This was so sweet! I loved reading about how the picture was taken of Yuudai as a baby and I liked hearing Gaara warn off Sasuke. And I forgot to mention before that I really like that Yuudai has whisker marks on his face. Sasuke is still super possessive of Naruto even though he's been gone fore 11 years. But really... did he expect Naruto to have no relationships after all that time? Dummy Sasuke! Gaara is obviously there for Naruto's birthday. I bet Sasuke doesn't even remember!

    I started reading fanfics as a sasunaru fan and couldn't see Naruto with anyone else. But I've read enough now to have read some really great pairings with other characters so I don't automatically go rooting for Sasuke. But Sasuke really needs a wake up call on how bad he really treated Naruto! And I think everyone is wanting to pound that in to him lol. I really love this! It has so much depth to what's going on and how the characters feel. And I love Sasuke being his normal overconfident self. A Uchiha always gets what they want lol. But maybe not always!

    I like not knowing what to expect. It's obvious he should be with Gaara but I can't help rooting for Sasuke too. Even though that rooting comes with a lot of groveling on his part. *sigh* I'm really bad I know.
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  • From bloodshound on September 10, 2011
    no typo's at all! I'm impressed. *pays homage to your bata and you for getting one.
    It's sooooooo good to read a good story with out wincing over typos.
    yeah, about that Sas. Good luck getting by Gaara. He's on seriously scary dude. Still, you gotta know Sas ain't gonna back off. He sorta stabbed himself in the hand with the whole rape bit though. I understand how he wouldn't have had a chance to court his mark but still, that sorta thing doesn't just roll off someones back. Worse yet, he doesn't seem to be able to see past his own selfishness to realize just how much damage he did.
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