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Reviews for My Beautiful Master

By : Snowway32

From ANON - richon on September 26, 2011
hoho jirayia show his true self, sasu is more and more protective about naru!!this story is awesome, i am craving for the next chapter , see you soon
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From ANON - Althydia on September 24, 2011
Still loving this story with every added chapter... So glad that Naruto accepted his true heritage without too many problems! Minato was doing a good job preparing him for that day with his stories, wasn't he?
Also, Naruto and Sasuke sure look cosy together! Has Sasuke still not noticed that something more than his heat could be the cause (or maybe it's an Uchiha thing to be in denial about one's mate)? And isn't it ironic that Sasuke who doesn't like sweet things tastes and smells sweet to Naruto? :)
I love their interactions when they are together and I think Sasuke is doing a good job taking care of Naruto and feeling empathy and compassion for him - as well as distracting him from his pain. But I won't object to seeing more of Itachi, of course. Although I can't expect Sasuke to leave Naruto alone with him (but I do rather expect some teasing from Itachi when he sees his little brother so flustered by the Kitsune)...
I'm glad that Naruto told Sasuke about what he saw too. But I think that Sasuke should tell his dad at least some of that if he wants to advance in his investigation of Minato's death. I do hope that Fugaku doesn't expect Sasuke to take care of the culprit by himself, though?
Also, if they leave for the Heavenly Realm, with the big time difference between the two worlds, wouldn't it cause some trouble in the Human world if they suddenly disappeared for a few years? At least, if they plan on ever coming back... And will they take Kakashi too?
So, I guess that Fugaku can cope with Minato's death, even though they were mates, because he had never claimed him? And why did Madara forbid the marriage with a very powerful Kitsune (apart from just for the joy of being a bastard)? Anyway, I think it's high time Fugaku or Itachi talked to Sasuke about mating...
Thanks for the answers and chapter - I'll look forward to the next one!
P.S. Will we see Kitsune Naruto soon? So fluffy... Sasuke won't stand a chance!
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From ANON - rainbowunicornsarefun on September 24, 2011
this is sooooo nice! Please update soon! I love this story.=)
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From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2011
Aww, sookie sookie now. Those boys just can't seem to control themselves around one another. It's nice to see the budding romance around them, especially for Naruto, since his life just got turned upside down.

Will Naruto try to feel up his jiji-chan's ears and tails? It would be cute if he kept trying, but fail because his jiji would be just one step ahead of him to block his advances. It would be a positive bonding moment for the two of them.

If they take Naruto to the Heavenly Realm, where will he go exactly and will Jiraiya and Kakashi go as well?

Will Naruto have his own cute fox ears and tails? If so, how many tails?

Won't Sasuke have possessive/jealously issues if he gets Itachi to help with Naruto?
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From smint45 on September 23, 2011
Oh that was great!!! I loved Narus kiss^^ And how overprotective Sasuke is^^ But I think that is necessary after what happend!!! I can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!
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From Nimbafuu on September 23, 2011
Nooo! I always hate it when it ends! I want to read more, this story is so captivating!! I can't wait for more!! :D
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From ANON - richon on September 19, 2011
there is some explaination in this chapter !! I want more pointer !! this story is awesome!! see you soon
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From Stacy on September 19, 2011
Another wonderful chapter! A white 9 tailed fox? Cool!
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From ANON - Althydia on September 18, 2011
Great chapter! And thank you for the answers and the gift too! (very nice drawing!)
The killer is still mysterious, but my guess at the moment would be Madara. Also, why didn't he kill Naruto when he had the occasion? And what would he gain by killing Minato? Can one absorb the Kyuubi's chakra after his death or is it just to eliminate the competition?
I also wonder about who Minato's mother was (since it wasn't Tsunade apparently) and if she could be important (I even wondered if it couldn't have been Orochimaru!). I'm glad Jiraya came back, though, because Naruto will need his guidance. Naruto will have so much to learn about his family and the Heavenly Realm and his own powers! I hope he can take everything in despite his grief - and I very much look forward to his first conscious meeting with Sasuke! I hope he can still feel the instinctive trust and attraction to him, because Sasuke would probably take complete rejection very badly...
I'm also very interested in all the other deities and what role they'll play in the story (like Gaara maybe?). I'd like to see how Naruto would fare in the Heavenly Realm too.
Also, from what Minato wrote in his diaries, could it have been possible that he and Fugaku become mates like Sasuke and Naruto if Minato hadn't met Kushina? I'm still a little surprised that he always hid his Kyuubi side from her too. What would have happened if she hadn't died when Naruto became 18 and his full powers were set free?
And Sasuke being possessive of Naruto even with Jiraya: :D It's so cute! I wonder if Jiraya can sense that they are actually mates...
Now let's hope that Sasuke will be able to make Naruto smile again. ;) (I don't want him to be suicidal anymore) And thank you for sharing!
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From AvangalineHazel on September 18, 2011
I haven't given you a review since the first chapter, i feel so bad :(
But anyway the story is progressing nicely and i can wait to see who the evil person is. Right now im guessing its either Itachi or another Uchiha, perhaps Madara or Orochimaru but i guess i'll find out eventually.
I did notice that there were a couple of spelling mistakes in this chapter but its nothing major so you shouldn't worry, it was just unusual to see from you.
Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon :)
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From smint45 on September 18, 2011
Awe that was so fantastic!!!!! I totally love you nine tailed Jiraja he is so cute!!!! I totally adore him ^^ And I just love Sasukes possesive side!!!! I so can't wait for more to come!!!!1 please update soon!!!! See you!!!
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From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2011
This is still emotionally packed with Naruto reliving things, Kakashi being able to show his pain when his father arrived, but having to impart the horrible news, and Jiraiya getting hit with the news himself. If Sasuke is as sensitive as he seems, how can he handle all the pain going on in that house, especially with Naruto's pain and condition?

Real Question: Since Naruto is unconscious and probably will not be able to speak about what happened any time soon, will Sasuke be able to go into his mind and relay what happened to the others? I assume if this did happened, he would definitely wait for Naruto's permission first.
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From ANON - richon on September 12, 2011
ohoh sasu reveal himself!! naru got his memory back, what is it exactly, a kistune ? kuybi ?? to much questions!! love this story, so awesome!!
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From smint45 on September 11, 2011
Awe that was great!!!! So Kakashi knew and it seems naruto knew too!!! Cool!!! And Poor Naruto finally remembers what happend, although we still don't know what that means!!!! I so can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!!
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From ANON - Althydia on September 11, 2011
Cool chapter, although it's still hard to see poor Naruto so sad... It also seems that the Namikaze family have a lot more secrets that I thought. So Kakashi and Naruto know about the Neko deities protecting them (although I hope Naruto won't freak out when he recovers from his fever and sees Sasuke). Also, Kyuubi seems to have been inside Minato. Does it mean that it was sealed there or that Minato is a kitsune deity? Because Naruto also has whiskers marks and a seal so he could be part kitsune too... But then what about Kakashi and Jiraya? Speaking of which: I thought Jiraya was dead, but with Minato's words to Naruto I'm not so sure anymore... which begs the question: where the hell is Jiraya when Minato gets killed and Naruto is left traumatised and alone?

Also, something tells me that Fugaku knows more than he's saying, so he has indeed some explaining to do to Sasuke. And if the Kyuubi was indeed inside Minato, it could be a good motive to kill him. Maybe Madara did it, as a renegade from the Uchiha clan hungry for power (like in the manga actually)? But it could also be Orochimaru or someone else...

Another thing: has Sasuke been told about mates? I should hope so, but he just hasn't realised what his feelings for Naruto are yet (or he's in denial)... And what was Kakashi doing at Iruka's office, leaving Naruto alone? Could it be another couple? But Sasuke's anger at him was quite fun and justified (even though he's also mega possessive of Naruto). And have I told you that I think Sasuke's bell on a ribbon on his tail must look absolutely adorable? Quite a nice and softer addition to his warrior look too. I understand how Itachi must find his brother so cute. :)

Anyway, thanks for answering some of my questions! As you can see, I just have more for you, but it's just because your story is so fascinating... Now I hope that with Sasuke's help Naruto will gradually be able to get out of his traumatised state and become more like his usual self, because I'd love to see more interactions between them (and there's still the problem of Sasuke's heat to address)!
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