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Reviews for My Beautiful Master

By : Snowway32
  • From WishStarAllie on August 21, 2018

    its sad that such a good writer as you would leave such a bountiful story and not complete it.


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  • From ReleaseMe_77 on February 16, 2015
    can't do this to me D: you can't! You just can't leave it there like that!!! I'm so inlove with this story I hafe to know what happens I just hafe to D:who killed naruto’s dad? What's to become of the love they have?! Are they going to bring light back to heaven relme?! So many questions that I'm dieing to find out I see this hasn't been touched in a while it brings me great sadness that it's incomplete ;-; it should be against the rules for this master work of art isn't done I really hope you get it going once aging I hate be one of them ppl who beg but I just can't help it with this one plzzz don't let it just stop there plzzzz I need to know what's happen next. I'm dieing to know, I really am inlove for the story line you did as well as the plot I fished this in one day that's pertty fast for me, it's just one them story's I couldn't put down!!!! I hope the plot buddies find you aging *makes silly sounds* for plot bunnies to come you're way!!!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 01, 2015
    This is an amazing story and I really can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dani on June 18, 2014
    I hope you finish this fic. I rarely find any that I enjoy reading anymore. Most of the recent fics seem to be written by children. The grammar is horrible, the wording is wrong, and half the time they jump all over the place. But I enjoyed reading what you have written so far in My Beautiful Master. I know it's been years but you have over 10,000 hits. I think you should finish it.
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  • From EntityLvr on March 20, 2014
    OMG SO ADORABLE!!!!! I spazzed so many times in this chapter. Okay now for the next one. wow. so adorable!!!
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  • From ANON - Deathstar92 on March 12, 2014
    Love the story hope u write more!! 😄❤️❤️
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on September 01, 2013
    God I miss this story. I wish you would contiune, but I understand that life comes first. Could you though give us a hint if you are to contiune or not? So we don't hope for something that's not to come.
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on August 11, 2013
    Are you going to finish this story? It would be nice to finally have an ending to one of your stories which I find have potential. Thanks.
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  • From Miki-chan on March 26, 2013
    Review review review! (Are these enough reviews to ask for an update ;)
    I'm loving this! Wow it's so perfect, every part is explained so well, I like how you answer everyone's questions at the beginning too. Definitely keep going wih this, I'm curious to find out what happens next! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Rainshi on February 28, 2013
    I miss this story. it's been years I hope everything is okay. can you give us anything on if this story is discontiuned or not.
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  • From ANON - Craster on July 15, 2012
    When was this last updated? I really hope you havent given up on this story, since i have come to love it very dearly. I hope there will be another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on June 29, 2012
    waaaaa I miss this tory sooooo much I wanna new chapter. But but waaaaa I wanna good chapter ooooh the inhumanity!
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on April 01, 2012
    Oh how I miss this story. the pain of waiting yet the fear of begging to soon. It's to intense I don't know what to ask of you!
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  • From Nimbafuu on March 13, 2012
    Oh god I love this story!! I love the way you write the characters, the plot you have going, and I can't wait to read more of this!
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  • From ANON - asm613 on January 28, 2012
    (His father had been the only one he had left
    there was nothing left.

    How long he sat in the rain Naruto didn't know but even when he eventually heard the sound of a car

    "Naru-chan?"

    "Uncle Kashi?")

    ---so you start by writing naruto didn't have anybody left- and the next paragraph you give him an uncle- well, i guess he does have someone left, doesn't he..

    -the angst was a bit over the top- probably would have been better to ease into it gently instead of presenting it as a tsunami/hurricane right at the start. can't appreciate the sadness when that's all there is to begin with- when there's nothing to compare it with.

    -otherwise, i like the concept- sasuke being sent from another realm to protect and be naruto's companion- while investigating why/how minato died- but that leads to the question- if fugaku is a god like deity; and his duty is to protect minato- why doesn't he know what happened to minato- why did he fail to protect minato- i guess those questions will be answered in future chapters- so something to look forward to.

    thanks for sharing
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