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Reviews for Affairs in Tutelage

By : Spiraling
  • From ANON - TheWierdOne on January 03, 2013
    i dont think naru is much of the type to go behind peoples back im sure it would eat him alive
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  • From ANON - kitty on September 10, 2011
    please update soon!! great start!
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  • From moodysavage on August 20, 2011
    this was so cute!!! and definitely make Naruto and Hinata already broken up... or maybe never went together in the first place. Maybe they just flirted and messed around to see if there was something and it just ended with them embarrassed. Yeah, no couple with Hinata lol.

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  • From ANON - Jen on August 20, 2011
    About Naruto and Hinata, I got the impression from the phrasing of this line that they've already broken up:

    "Naruto sighed, uncrossing his arms and sitting up in his seat. He always felt so guilty around Hinata, to the point that he almost hated talking to her nowadays. They'd gone out for so long, she trusted him with every personal detail of her life, and he still couldn't confide in her his only real secret."

    The fact that Naruto is talking in the past tense ("They'd gone out for so long") and not the present tense makes the relationship seem over and done with. Naruto also uses the past tense in talking about the sexual stuff he's done with Hinata--vs. using the present tense to describe the stuff they're currently doing. (Another question, if Naruto already has a guilt complex about not being able to tell Hinata about his possible interest in guys, would he compound the situation by kissing Sasuke so easily?) It seems to me that the subconscious train of thought already being established in the story is for Naruto and Hinata to be broken up?

    Actually, I liked the fast pacing of the chapter. I don't think it was necessary to watch them hating on one another and slowly becoming friends since the fic isn't really about that. It's more about their experimentation, if I've understood correctly. I also liked the fact that the characters questioned why the school forced them into this situation, whether or not it was an unusual thing for them to do, etc. It's realistic for them to wonder.

    Well, we don't don't know the characters like you do, so I don't know how good our story suggestions would be, but I guess I was curious when Sasuke said he knew what it was like to go through what Naruto was going through. Maybe it would be interesting if Naruto were to eventually ask about it?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2011
    OMG I love this idea, it's sooooo cute.
    I think that hinata and Naruto should be broken up. I don't' think he's the type to go behind her back, especially since she treats him so nicely.
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  • From ANON - Vixenia on August 20, 2011
    I say have him cheat on hinata. not because i don't like here. I just think its more heart wrenching and plot twisting that way. Ahhh jealousy!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 20, 2011
    so... we're waiting for more
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