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Reviews for Don't Let Me Down

By : yolotengo
  • From KalyxandSoren on August 18, 2011
    I think your song choice would be clearer to others if you were to list the artist and the song name. For someone who does not know Taking Back Sunday the story could seem disconnected from the lyrics. **Also, You need to add into your disclaimer that the rights to the lyrics belong to Taking Back Sunday!** Your writing style definitely matches the tone to this song well though. I love slice of life stories with a touch of angst ^.^ So all in all good job!
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  • From ANON - G on August 18, 2011
    Good story, but would be a lot better without the lyrics. I'm not familiar with the song and the lyrics don't match up with what's going on, so I just started skipping them while I was reading. They ended up being a distraction to an otherwise good story. Besides that, I liked the story. It made me happy and sad. Sasuke's pain was sad, so was Naruto being forced to watch it but not really able to help him. It made me happy because they make one another happy, even with all the bad stuff, and the ending leave you with the feeling that just by being around Naruto, Sasuke will eventually be happier.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 14, 2011
    Yes I did enjoy this although Sasuke was troubled. So many people suffer from this inner turmoil with cutting. Very sad indeed.
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