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Reviews for Fake a Smile

By : Mandymoo
  • From tawanawelch on August 09, 2011
    Aww, I really loved the flashback of happier times. I'm glad he's going back but he's right he does need this time to remember why he loves Sasuke and why Sasuke loves him.
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  • From moodysavage on August 08, 2011
    I like this. It's very painful for Naruto and he def. needs to tell Sasuke what has been going on. Doesn't Sasuke suspect anything? If his partner whom he loved had been showing up with unexplained bruises every week for a year... shouldn't he be mad enough to beat the crap out of someone? And will Naruto leaving make Sasuke drink more? Or less? Because he probably doesn't feel much like partying if his lover is missing. Hope you post more soon!
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  • From on August 07, 2011
    I believe Naruto should just keep quiet,and let Sasuke find out on his own. Naruto isn't the type of a guy to go back on his words, and returning right after he left just isn't what Naruto would do.Besides, it would be obnoxious of Naruto if he'd just go back and put everything in Sasuke's face, I think it's a good thing Naruto kind of "retreated" from this kind of situation, because he doesn't want to hurt Sasuke.
    Sasuke is a smart guy, I'm sure he could figure it out on his own if he'd just put the pieces together...He would be guilt-ridden not only because of things he did,but also knowing Naruto never wanted to hurt him by accusing him.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 07, 2011
    Yes, I think I'd like to see him go back and tell Sasuke what he did to see Sasuke's reaction. I can't help but feel hesitant in my choice to have him go back because he may get a beating from leaving in the first place.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 07, 2011
    Wow, I like the story n I want to say my Neji is the abuser but then I think it's Sasuke. I like that I can't tell n can't wait to read the next chapter.:)
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  • From ANON - kit on August 05, 2011
    this is so sad yet really good. i think naruto should stay and let sasuke figure it out. you would think with him being so smart he would figure out that every time he woke up after a night of drinking and seeing naruto so beat up, that it was HIM who did it. :T update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - G on August 04, 2011
    Oh, OK, Naruto's secret is Sasuke. Don't know if it would be better for Naruto to go back or keep going. If Naruto goes back, it would be good because Naruto would finally be taking a stand about Sasuke's drinking. That's good for Naruto because it makes him stronger as a person. If Naruto keeps going, then that means Sasuke would have to track him down. That's also good because it would make a bigger impression on Sasuke that way. He'd know just how serious the situation is and how close he is to losing Naruto.
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  • From Madamdragon on August 03, 2011
    Naruto should definetely keep running. I hope another chappie is to come
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  • From AngelTalion on August 03, 2011
    yes I want Sasuke to know its him but there is this part of me that thinks he knows... and he doesn't stop.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 03, 2011
    Make naruto go back and tell sasuke! Please. And I love your story. Keep up the good work
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  • From AngelTalion on August 02, 2011
    for your first its amazingly well done. It left a knot in my stomach and I wanted to STOP reading but I just couldn't. VERY well done I hope to read more very soon!!
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  • From ANON - G on August 02, 2011
    The way the summary was phrased, it sounded like Naruto has a secret, but isn't Sasuke the one with the secrets? Sasuke is a violent alcoholic who is cheating on his lover with Naruto. Or maybe I read it wrong and Neji is Naruto's lover. That would be pretty shocking, if Naruto cheats on his lover and refuses to tell Sasuke about his abusive behavior, all so he can have Sasuke as a lover in any way he can get him. (But in either case, why would Naruto keep quiet about Sasuke's violent tendencies? If sober Sasuke cares about Naruto, which it seems like he does, then he'd want to stop hurting him.) LOL. I'm confusing myself now. I'm sure there's a reason for everything. Update soon!
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