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Reviews for Fake a Smile

By : Mandymoo
  • From tawanawelch on October 04, 2011
    Finally!! They understand and forgive eachother so now they can have some sexy, smutty fun.:3
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  • From tawanawelch on September 20, 2011
    Awesome chapter!! Sasuke really endured that physical agony of carrying Naruto allllll the way to the hospital n I love every minute of it. He proved to himself his husband is worth fighting for. EPIC!!!:d *fist pump*
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  • From moodysavage on September 18, 2011
    I loooooove it... love it love it love it!!!! :) sending lots of cookies your way! thanks for writing a longer chapter for meeee!!!

    oh wait... it was the threatening to strangle you... you were working under duress... I'M A BAD READER!!!! I'm supposed to be encouraging!!! (hitting head on desk) very bad! but... it got me a longer chapter... from BOTH POV's too... and kissing... sasunaru kissing... I will try to be good.

    I really liked that Naruto punched Sasuke in the face. He should do that every time lol.
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  • From Madamdragon on September 16, 2011
    Well, it's good that Sasuke wanted to protect Naruto. He is finally thinking of someone else other then himself. I know the pain of losing family is tough but if he is willing to change for Naruto then I think he can find some kind of inner strength to give up the bottle. Hope more is to come soon. Thanks for the quik update.
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  • From moodysavage on September 11, 2011
    awww... I liked this. Sasuke has Naruto now and he's crying too isn't he. Of course my first thought was... I.am.going.to strangle.the.author... because it looked (and is) sooo short!!! But you actually had a lot of emotion and progress in the story with a minimum of words. Really good skills there ya know.
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  • From Madamdragon on September 11, 2011
    ah Boo! How dare you stop on a cliffie. Boo!!! Oh well I will try to wait for the next one. But make it fast...Is naruto ok? Is that sasuke in the distance? Update Please! I can't stand suspence.
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  • From fujinakaheero on September 06, 2011
    I really like this story, there has been a lot of abuse stories around, but the way you write this one makes it very different.
    It's probably why I'm captivated by it. I do hope another update is close by. Author to author, I know knowing you actually have readers who like your work is much more motivation to write more than when you're not sure.
    Waiting for your next chapter! :)
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  • From tawanawelch on August 24, 2011
    Aww, I'm so glad Sasuke realizes how bad he's treated Naruto. I thought this was about cheating but it's really about their relationship's difficulty n how they come back together right?:). This is ending up so wonderfully. If Sasuke knew where to start, he'd have been out to find Naruto already.
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  • From Madamdragon on August 22, 2011
    well I hope they find each other, and I hope Sasuke changes like he says he's going to.
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  • From moodysavage on August 22, 2011
    heeerree author author author... heeeerrreeee author author author... GOT Ya! Ok... now you sit here at this keyboard and type like a goooooooddddd little writer. That's good... I'll bring your milk and cookies... and a straw so you don't have to stop typing. Just lean over and sip. Poor Sasuke and Naruto's story must go on yep yep yep.

    lol I like this story a lot. write lots more! :)
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  • From AngelTalion on August 12, 2011
    THIS IS ALL BEAUTIFUL AND FRUSTRATING!!!!!!!!
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  • From Madamdragon on August 11, 2011
    Sasuke seems to be worried, and Naruto looks as if his heart is breaking. This is getting good. Hope more is to come soon.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 11, 2011
    Wow, now I feel so bad for Sasuke. He walked home thinking happy thoughts of his husband and now he's gone. I can't wait to read what Sasuke thinks of all this. I'm not so worried about reading lemons, just love w good story.:3
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  • From ANON - dar on August 11, 2011
    I actually like more development on the story as to how naru and sasuke develop and what happens when sasuke finally realizes!!! THanks!
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  • From moodysavage on August 11, 2011
    awwww... I loved that. I want more!!!!
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