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Reviews for Fake a Smile

By : Mandymoo
  • From ANON - flaming rose on November 15, 2012
    Oh my god! I loved this 'fic! You balanced out the romance and angst/abuse perfectly! Thank you so much, this -believe me , or no- was such a stress reliever! So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU ! I can't wait to check out your profile page! I'll make sure I do! But, I've got to go now, so ja ne!
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  • From moodysavage on March 25, 2012
    ah... you say you don't really know what else there is to write but you actually left a loose end with this chapter! Naruto loved Sasuke enough to trusting him again and his fear will naturally lessen with time as Sasuke proves that he will never hurt Naruto again. But now Sasuke is not sure that it will be enough because he is wondering if Naruto will be able to get past his fear.

    I think we need a flashforward... yep yep... of when they are both sure of each other and their relationship doesn't have any more shadows to it.
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  • From Madamdragon on March 25, 2012
    An update long over due. But this update makes up for that. Love it. I am glad that Naruto can feel comfortable around Sasuke again. I hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita3 on January 14, 2012
    Chapter 9 finished. This isn't the end no? Hope not. Now I feel bad it's finished. No more chapters:((
    Anyway, I'll hold my 'tears' horses, and hope you'll post another one:D positive thinking or more like wishful thinking.
    Still, amazing story, in this chapter, they were both very cute, and even if you didn't say it, it really was like a day with the two of them, together, this chapter.
    I mean, they went shopping, then to the park, then home, then bang bang...
    Anyway, glad they are back together. But I have a feeling, a good one that there is more to come but nothing happy.
    I have this theory that promises are made to be broken.
    That's why I never promise anything, it's that when I promise, I just force myself sometimes, without wanting, to break it. I just can't keep it.
    So I never promise...god.
    Again, amazing story, made my day, made me smile, almost cry, surprised. Just marvelous.
    Oh, and I realized from the start, or maybe I'm just crazy that the names of the chapters quite are like a sentence, I really liked that a lot.
    PS:Hope we'll talk soon, I hope you're well, and that my many chapters won't bother you, or think I'm crazy, or anything like that, not a stalker, nothing like that, just like that I want to tell you my opinion about your story because I also know who wrote it.
    Just words of praise for this story and for you my dear. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita on January 14, 2012
    Forget what I said about the chapter 7 being a bomb, chapter 8 is a way bigger one. Delicious chapter of course. But the end really...what? Don't tell me he's dreaming now...chapter 9 I'm coming!!!
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita33 on January 14, 2012

    Okay...Chapter 7 should be named: Surprise .... Naruto's fist on Sasuke's face. I didn't expect that at all. Though I liked it so much that I can't take it, but I was really surprised.

    Everything is so sad all that love and thoughts, and then, a bomb...or a fist. Go boy! Go boy!

    Letting the bomb away. I was really touched by the: I leave you, so I won't hurt you anymore.

    I did this with all of my friends, even if I know that some of them still care about me, I know it's better this way... and I also almost did this with the one I love but couldn't...

    Anyway, I know what Sasuke felt so it just hit me dead on. Thank you for this chapter. Made me feel bad a bit, but good in the same way.

    What I'm saying is that I think I have too many people who would be in Naruto's place, give me a nice fist or really beat me up for leaving.

    Sorry, got personal. But still, splendid story. 'Can't wait for them together. Finally.

    PS: Really, thank you for this chapter my dear.
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita33 on January 14, 2012
    Chapter 5 just let me awww. Poor guy. Finally deciding to go back home, but the world doesn't want that to happen anymore.

    Sasuke's side is very realistic and well done, he realized what he did like a normal person would have in his situation. I'm glad you are still yourself even when writing, and by that I mean smart.

    It's impossible not to realize it, and many would just write that: Where is he? And why isn't he here? I hate him, blah blah. But for real, from what you described, their 'home relationship' and all the beatings, it was only natural to realize it, but not want to.

    PS: Great story by the way my dear. Can' wait to talk to you.
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita33 on January 14, 2012
    Chapter 3 and 4 finished. Amazing two chapters.

    In chapter 3, the little story of Christmas just made me smile for real. And then the decision was perfectly made. Then, what I liked very much is the fact that no matter how much Naruto wanted to act as 'normal' and walk into the shops and all that, he still ended up alone in the woods. Very interesting

    Then in chapter 4, finally glad that you decided to do Sasuke's side,but sad I couldn't find out more but very excited, poor guy, searching all over the house. I'm wondering if we will ever know what they talked, well, Sasuke said, over the phone. Well, I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.

    PS: Can't wait for the bigger descriptions as you said, but even if the chapters are not 111 pages, I still like it a lot in the way it is.
    It's amazing how you can make not very longgg chapters and capture such emotion. Another proof that you're amazing my dear.
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita33 on January 14, 2012
    Chapter 2 finished. What I liked about this one is the change in the middle, from when Sasuke beat Naruto, and he passed out, and then the waking up think. I mean,I really felt the black part, when it all shut down like. You amazingly did that with when you described sounds of outside.

    Anyway, I feel bad for Naruto and for having to choose from staying with the loved one and running away from him. Again, know that feeling.

    However, the second thing I liked is the end when you used a kind of metaphor with the house, I can really relate with this story, I'm about to cry, he also looks at simple stuff, or at anything ,things, nature, etc and makes connections with the loved one.

    God how much I like this story and it's just the start. Thank you.

    PS: Still hope it won't bother you, my many reviews and I still hope you're doing well my dear.
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  • From ANON - GothicLolita33 on January 14, 2012

    Hey! First chapter finished, I thought you'd probably say why review the first very chapter but I said, why not?

    I like the atmosphere a lot. You could make them to be themselves in that silence, in their own house, with all those words that simply aren't needed. I was curious about what they will do, not say, which is wonderful.

    I like this loving Naruto that is just in love, no matter what, reminds me of myself, and this Sasuke which I think it will have a great personality in the end, can't wait to find him out.

    Basically, it is the first chapter, but it has a start, a middle and an end. I'm glad I read it, and also review,though I hope, it won't bother you.

    You made me excited to find out more about it, and that's something I love when I start to read a story, so thank you very much, you don't know how happy I am, finally a great story!And, the most, from you.

    Oh, and also, I adore the title, know what is like to fake a smile, even for a loved one.

    Ps: Hope you're doing fine my dear.


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  • From tawanawelch on November 02, 2011
    So sensuous.:)*eyes sparkle*
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  • From moodysavage on November 02, 2011
    ohhh I like them back together! But I get the feeling that they don't quite trust each other yet. They want so much to be happy together but Naruto is still reacting how Sasuke taught him to react... with fear. And Sasuke is aftraid that Naruto will leave and I don't think he trusts himself either. They both seem a little desperate to make it work this time. I think it will definitely take time for each of them to settle and trust their love again.
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  • From Madamdragon on November 01, 2011
    Glad for the update. Hope more is to come soon.
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  • From moodysavage on October 04, 2011
    awwww :)
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  • From Madamdragon on October 04, 2011
    OK so is it a dream? I hope not. But I hope to see more updates soon please.
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