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Reviews for What Do You See?

By : Snowway32
  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2011
    I cant wait til the next chap. this one made me cry.
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  • From ANON - pp_hh on July 19, 2011
    Hey your story is really interesting and well-written. I like the characters so far and the pairing aswell.
    Even if I dont know what to think about this whole Minato shares a soul with Naruto and that he had the same problems with hurting himself...
    I mean Minato had not the same problems as Naruto why would he do that?
    Well thank you for your hard work.
    Greetings
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  • From ANON - carousel on July 18, 2011
    I really do love this story. It's so beautifully written. I like the idea of some Kakashi/Naruto in the mix. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - KC on July 17, 2011
    Yeah ... Naruto got promoted! Can not wait to see how things play out next. I feel bad that Jiraya left without saying anything to Naruto.

    I will admit that in general the Jiraya/Naruto pairing is a bit "EEWW!!" for me.... Basically it is the age difference of about 40yrs. I mean really that is boardering on the Grandparent/Granson age range for the ninja world. But I have read some very good stories that bring these two together, so I tend to read a story and see how it all develops.

    No one is forcing me (or anyone else) to read your story and I think that it is unrealistic for Readers to expect authors to change their stories to suit their own preferences. I appreciate that you are willing to share your creativity on such sites as this and so far have enjoyed your story.

    I am looking forward to your next chapter.


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  • From ANON - carousel on July 03, 2011
    I love this story so much. The last chapter made me so sad. Poor naruto is cutting himself. D: I hope that jiraiya helps heal naru faster. Update soon~
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  • From kyuubifreak on July 01, 2011
    this paring is rare for me to read but i am looking forward for the next chapter!
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  • From Carousel on June 29, 2011
    Chapter 2 was fantastic! I like the way that Jiraiya confronted Kakashi. I felt pretty bad for Kaka-sensei. The way you are potraying things through Jiraiya's eyes is rather interesting. I can't wait to see how their bond grows in this story. :] Update soon~
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  • From LadyLaran on June 29, 2011
    This is a rare pairing to find here, and you've given it a good start so far. I'd suggest a beta to help you tweak the errors. Plot wise, you've started something that I think I'll be following!
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  • From Carousel on June 29, 2011
    I like this story so far. I feel so bad that Naruto is going to be so sad though. I can't wait for more since I have never read a Jiraiya/Naruto before. Update soon!~
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