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By : AngelTalion
  • From CrypticRebel on October 09, 2017

    PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!

    Also dispose of that thing called Sakura😈😈😈😈😈😈You can borrow my shovel it even has her name on it! πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆ


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  • From ANON - Ai on April 03, 2015
    One word! More!
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  • From ANON - Trinity on March 02, 2015
    Love the story update soon please.
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on December 30, 2012
    Good start. Hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - Clarissa on October 10, 2011
    I like the path this story is taking, its got drama, romance, lust, love, and a little bit of loath @ least from sasuke's side. An you were able to give Naruto a different personality than what were use to, it fits his profile to when you think about it. As for Sasuke I'm glad you kept him in character in the story. Who knows maybe Sasuke will divorce Sakura and have his son's meet Naruto and they take to him seeing as how Sakura is never around. I'm liking the story so far so hopefully you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Kazy on September 13, 2011
    PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE continue this story!!!! It is delicious! And i kind of love that Sakura is portrayed as a bitch. I don't hate her, but her character needs to be knocked down a few pegs!
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  • From ANON - silentshdow101 on August 21, 2011
    This is really good! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 07, 2011
    Oh boy! Sakura's one greedy woman n I can't wait to see her downfall. I like Naruto's story n wonder who the guy was that was kissing him. Will he be a problem for Naruto as Sakura is for Sasuke?
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  • From ANON - Maddie21 on August 03, 2011
    Sakura's goin down!!!!!!!!!!! Loving this story btw :D
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  • From missbri88 on August 02, 2011
    I love the look of this story and I just can't wait to see more of this.
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 01, 2011
    Sasuke's kids are really cute. It's so sad the way Sakura treats them. Even though Sasuke hates being apart from Naruto (and Naruto hates being apart from Sasuke), in a way, Naruto made the right call in trying to avoid Sasuke since it gets him home in time to actually parent his children (since Sakura appears to have no interesting in doing so).

    On Naruto's end: yup, he's being a coward, but I have to hand it to him for at least trying. On Sasuke's end: he's being a coward too, but I have to hand it to him for putting in the effort to get Naruto back. Naruto or no Naruto, Sasuke has plenty of reasons not to be married to Sakura--he hates his wife and is fully aware of the fact that their marriage was a mistake, and yet the obvious thing of getting a divorce doesn't even cross his mind. It's as if he doesn't see divorce as even a possible option for him. Just how trapped in the marriage is he? I know in the beginning of the fic it said that Sasuke was trying to be the good son to make up for Itachi walking away from the family, but would the Uchihas really want him stuck in a marriage like this one? I think if what Sasuke does for Naruto is to give him confidence and comfort on an emotional level, then what Naruto has to do for Sasuke in return is to give him the confidence to stand up to Sakura and his family. As far as getting rid of Sakura and officially being with Naruto, surely there must be a compromise Naruto, Sasuke, and his family could all live with? But of course, in order to have Sasuke, Naruto first has to overcome the problem of believing he can't have him. Is Sasuke's marriage the only problem for Naruto, or is there something else besides? (If Sasuke wasn't married, would Naruto have gone after him, or would he have been intimidated by Sasuke's greater wealth and social standing?) If it's just (or even mostly) the fact that Sasuke is married, I wonder how Naruto would react if he knew how miserable Sasuke was at home...? With how selfless Naruto is and how much he cares about Sasuke, I don't think he would like the idea that Sakura is using Sasuke.

    Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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  • From ANON - kai on August 01, 2011
    abandoning your kids so soon theyre no where near the greatest parents but at least sasuke spends time with thm when hes home, at least he tries cant say the same for sakura though seems she may be having an affair of her own.well at least narutos trying to do the best thing since sasuke has a family naruto really is a great guy to do such a thing.well hope sasuke comes up with a way to get rid of sakura once and for all...while still keeping his kids naruto would be a much better parent anyways.cant wait to see whatll happen next
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  • From ANON - T on August 01, 2011
    Gaaaahh!!! I love it so far!!! I love Naruto love triangles in which Naru and Sasu end up together and Saku is left by the wayside. You are currently writing my absolute FAVORITE Naruto plot. AND IN AN AU OFFICE SETTING?! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!! lol
    It'd be easy to say get rid of her. However, Sakura is the mother of the children and it's always complicated when children are involved...on the other hand, they can attest to Sakura being emotionally and physically absent so what the hell. Dump the broad, after a huge "Sakura finds out!!" and get rid of her. However, I don't think Sakura should catch Sasuke and Naruto having sex because that's been done a lot. I have a feeling that Sasuke would eventually get fed up with her bullshit and he's not the type to mince words. I would like to see him tell her off and maybe as like a bonus later, catch them in the act to cement the fact that it's over. It's not like Sakura has any political/familial power and I don't know if Sasuke's company is iffy about his being gay, but if not, I think it'd be funny to have Sasuke brazenly admit it in a board meeting around the time the divorce is final. That would be awesome!

    I mean...what's stopping him now other than his obligation to his wife? I'm sure Naruto would be a good parent. All Sasuke has to do is convince him, which shouldn't be difficult. XD

    PLEASE CONTINUE, I WILL PROMISE YOU A REVIEW FOR EVERY CHAPTER YOU WRITE!!
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  • From kyuubifreak on August 01, 2011
    wow, i love the story!! im looking forward for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Annie on July 31, 2011
    I hope that you write more soon!

    Anyway, I like the tension but I hope that Sasuke kicks Sakura out, cuts of her money, and brings Naruto in as the new mommy!

    Cant wait for more!
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