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Reviews for Kuro Ran: Black Orchid

By : Snowway32
  • From ANON - Demoninmysoul on November 28, 2011
    Wow! At last I reached the end, and can't wait to see more! I'm really curious: will Naruto heal from this lung thing? Will he age now that they parted with Kyuubi? Will we see others during the sequel? Arrrggggh!!! I shhould just find the sequel now, and start reading!

    I really loved thus piece of yous! Great starting idea, smoothly flowing storyline, deep emotions, and I loved the way you included and described the art (both the painting/sketching and the music)!!!

    Earlier I commented at the Hiashi/Naruto fic, and now I've read a totally satisfying scene with Minato in the bath, after the parents' death!!! So sorry again that I was so harsh with that one, and I'm really happy to see all these bedscenes both different from each other and fitting right into the plot! Each and every one of them were marvelous!

    Also, I love the Naruto you created, both in his normal life, and as Minato's partner. He definitely isn't a weak or boring uke! Teasing his partner, and then throughoutly enjoying the fruit of his work, but caring for his partner when needed. Minato is just as great, but the semes in your previous fics were just as good, so it didn't surprise me.

    Also I hope Kakashi will have a part in the sequel as well, and makes it interesting for the lovers (”will you marry Naruto?” - made me laugh! How do you come out of a situation like this? :D )!

    Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - Demoninmysoul on November 28, 2011
    Hey! First of all, I just love this story!!! I'll review after reading it till the end.
    I just wanted to ask(?) you about two words you love to use.
    The first is ”keen” as a verb, but in dictionary it means lament, so it isn't a happy/fitting thing, or do you use the meaning as some slang? Because then please next time in an authors note include an explanation of the meaning for me. English isn't my mother language, so I'm sorry if I'm slow in understanding.
    The other is ”equilibrium”. Maybe it isn't as global, but you could try balance or poise -it's easier to grasp and understand for people like me - well, after looking it up,I understand, but maybe you like using a broader variety of words.

    Thanks for writing this! As promised, I'll come back to review!
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  • From smint45 on August 29, 2011
    Oh that was so fantastic!!! I totally loved this story!!!! I'm so glad Naruto survived!!!! And his emotional trauma can be overcome with Minatos love!!!! I'm happy to hear there will be a sequal!!!! I can't wait!!!! See you again!!!!
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  • From smint45 on August 22, 2011
    Oh that was terrible!!! I really hope they both will be ok!!!! Especially Naruto menthally!!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From smint45 on August 17, 2011
    Awe great!!!! Finally the battle starts!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From smint45 on August 11, 2011
    Awe that was sweet!!!!! I really want to see that picture with Naruto sleeping with foxtails bathed in sunlight!!!! Maybe you can paint that one sometime too!!!! That would be fantastic!!!! I hope to see you soon!!!!
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  • From smint45 on August 06, 2011
    Oh that was great!!!! Minato is so not going to like this ^^ Oh I can't wait for the fight to come ^^ See you!!!
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  • From smint45 on July 29, 2011
    That was great!!!!! With all the talk about dieing it was kind of depressing but the great smutt lightend it!!!! All in all a very good mix for a chappie!!!! Thanks and hope to see you soon!!!!
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  • From smint45 on July 22, 2011
    Oh that was really sad but I liked it non the less!!!! I would love to read another Mina Naru Story from your feather !!!! I really like the way you write them!!!! See you again soon!!!

    P.S I was right it was Madra!!!!
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  • From frozenspirit on July 22, 2011
    Aw, I love how you described the reactions to the death of Minato's parents and the last seen was so cute. I can't wait to see how they will resolve the issue with Madara.
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  • From smint45 on July 19, 2011
    Awe now you can't just stop here!!!! It was Madra killing Minatos mother wasn't it? I just knew Naruto felt something real and not just a memory!!! Please let naruto protect Minato!!! I really can't see him suffer again!!!! I hope you will update soon so that we will know who did all this!!!! See you soon!!!!
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  • From frozenspirit on July 15, 2011
    This is by far one of my favorite stories. Naruto so cheated to win the fight, but not complaining at all. :) I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this story.
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  • From smint45 on July 12, 2011
    Oh the fight was absolutly fantastic!!!! I just loved it!!!! I like the wy there fighting styl is similar but not identical!!! And the modified sexy no jutsu was just damn hot!!!! And a bit unnfair towards Minato^^ But the smutt was just as amazing!!!! I really like them together!!! See you again soon!!!!
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  • From smint45 on July 09, 2011
    That memory was really sad!!!! But I loved the fluffy ending!!!! And I so can't wait for the spar!!!! That will be fantastic!!!! I never saw Minato fight so I can't wait for your describtion!!!! See you again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on July 06, 2011
    The last chapter was rather sexy. :] I can't wait for more.
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