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Reviews for Under the Desert Night Sky *Completed*

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  • From ANON - Moon&Cat on April 22, 2016
    This is amazing! In fact, it is the most gorgeous story I have ever read. The plot is great, the characters'personalities are incredible! I love the chemicals between Naruto and Sasuke! They are just so smitten to each other! If there were a best husband in the world award, Naruto would definitely win. He is so charming, caring and full of love. I really love that about him, cause I've read a lot of stories and Naruto isn't this caring, carefree, yes, but not as wonderful as he is in this fic. I love how you portraited Sasuke in this story. He isn't afraid of letting his emotions out freely, he acts when he feels like it. No more hiding, putting in the damn indifferent mask. He finds sharing every little thing to Naruto easy and I love that about him. Cause he knows that Naruto will stand by him, no matter what. And oh god, I almost cried at the part Naruto willing to give his eyes to Sasuke, and break the seal to save Sasuke, too. It was just so wonderful, the love between them!
    Hopefully, the next sequel will come out. I'm looking forward to it.
    Great job, by the way! ^^
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  • From ANON - Ain on July 24, 2011
    Very nice! :)
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  • From bloodshound on July 21, 2011
    It sucks balls about Sakura but i guess i should have expected it... though Tsunades gunna be cut. there goes Hokage apprentice number two. :P
    tytytytytytytytyty for saving shiro. Gaara is happy again. YAY
    That last chappie was adorable. Sas is comfortable with abandoining the Uchia name? Well, i suppose it has a crap tone of bad history.
    It's scary that Kabu and Saku got away though. No goodness will ensue for sure.
    on the whole... well done and i can't wait for the next enstalment.
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  • From moodysavage on July 20, 2011
    This was so soo soooooo wonderful!!!! I so loved the couples you had in part 2... especially Gaara and Shiro. I loved how Gaara was so upset over Shiro almost dying and that Shiro would do anything for him. And I love that Naruto and Sasuke now have a family. Sakura... she so makes a great villian. Her and Kabuto make a great villian couple. Can't wait for part 3!!! I was so worried when I was behind in the chapters and saw that it was completed! Now I'm soooo happy that there is more to come!!!!! :)
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  • From roro237 on July 20, 2011
    Absolutely fantastic!! I was smiling like Naruto put the ring on my finger:) I'll be looking forward to 3 ^_^
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  • From roro237 on July 19, 2011
    That was so wonderful:) I'm near tears. My tears are for Naruto who lost his son. I guess I feel a little sorry for Ms.Pink. Now I understand why she wanted to know if Naruto told Sasuke they had sex. Knowing she got pregnant from that one time. Yeah I feel for her but like Naruto said that's no reason to ruin people lives. Pick up your feet the lava is running your way:) This chapter had just blow-ed me away! Last night I was re-reading the first story Under the Desert Sun and Moon. And the Anbu was after her?! You're a genius I've said it before. I didn't see it coming but upon reflection it all fits together:)!!!!! And of course Naruto let her get away! That's my boy! I bet he still wants to save her if he can:) You know I've falling in love with you:) In that Author reviewer kinda way:) I love your story! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^
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  • From roro237 on July 17, 2011
    Thank you for not leaving the cliffy from hell for another day:) You're the best and you're a genius to:) I love this story line. You pegged Naruto right. Of course he wont believe it was Miss Pink until he sees and hears for himself. That is one of the many things I love about him is his loyalty to his friends. Plus now Gaara tells that she wanted to go to Sasuke every time she was in Sand. She loves Sasuke so much I'm afraid I don't put anything pass her to do. I said earlier I didn't want to guess but I've had all day to think about this:) I got to tell you ok! :I think as much as I dislike her Kabotu has done something to her mind: She's so in love with Sasuke that it wouldn't take much to flip her mind into believing that she can get him to love her. WoW! I love this story ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on July 17, 2011
    okay that ain't good. So, eitheer a sakura rogue or a sakura cloan. both options are pretty bad. If it's a rogue i hope she's being controlled.
    and pls pls tell me u didn't just kill shiro. pls.
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  • From roro237 on July 17, 2011
    OK I'm calming down... OMG! What?! Wait what?! I don't want to be making any kind of guesses. This is the cliffy from hell!!!!! I love it:) WoW!! I just didn't see that coming from any angle. To say I loved it is not a big enough statement:) So think volcanic eruption big ok! I love it ^_^
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  • From roro237 on July 17, 2011
    Drip drip! Sorry my nose is bleeding let me get a tissue:) WoW! Here goes one more first for me. Gaara on top! Hot!! ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on July 17, 2011
    I loved hearing about Shiro's past and I think the relationship is just adorable! Gaara has a pet and I find the whole thing really interesting. Gaara is tolerant... doesn't mind waking up roasting and Shiro follows him everywhere. Really good!!!
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  • From roro237 on July 16, 2011
    I LOVE it! I'm so happy for Garra!! He has a very sexy boy-toy:) Wish it was me( I didn't mean to write that out loud). This intermission has really been the bomb!!! You know what? I have never read three hold chapters with only Gaara in them! But let me tell you I have enjoyed them greatly. You have given me a lot of firsts!! You going to have to take responsibly:) You have already:) Writing this crazy good story that I can't get enough of ^_^
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  • From roro237 on July 16, 2011
    That was so good! Now we know how the twins and Shiro came to be! The saddest part was Kabuto took his eye! What the? Was the mad scientist growing him for parts? The intermission has taken off to new heights:) I love this informational one ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on July 16, 2011
    oh ho, so Kubuto has managed to make Gaara a potential mate. Interesting. The twins will be safe with sas and Naru but tusnade really needs to know all this stuff. I hope Shiro isn't a plant. It would be just like Kabu to try something like that. He really is a slimy prick.
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  • From moodysavage on July 16, 2011
    tch tch tch...ah Gaara is being naughty and taking advantage of poor naive Shiro... what SHALLL we do? :)
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