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Reviews for Under the Desert Night Sky *Completed*

By : Royality
  • From moodysavage on June 21, 2011
    *sigh* That was so wonderfully special. Even while having sex their feelings for each other were so obvious. And they were gently teasing each other even then. Loved it.
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  • From Carousel on June 21, 2011
    I loved the last two chapters. They were sweet and smutty at the same time. Update soon!
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  • From moodysavage on June 21, 2011
    omgosh I'm so behind and I planned to catch up before I commented but I just had to comment on chapter 7. That chapter was just so wonderful. I loved that scene where Sasuke and Naruto were trying to patch each other up but going about it in totally opposite ways with the cotton ball. That was just too funny. And the little teasing they did back and forth was just so sweet after their fight. And Naruto wanting to give his eyes to Sasuke... I just love how you've written these two.
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  • From narulov56 on June 20, 2011
    *Nose Bleed* That was so hot! :D

    Update soon!
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  • From roro237 on June 20, 2011
    Oh my heaven! That was h o t:) Naruto is so loving I think he would do that for Sasuke. The tears of Sasuke was priceless. I agree with him! True-er love will never be found:) I wish the original would turn out like this! I loved it. I loved all three ^_^
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  • From roro237 on June 20, 2011
    I had to stop and say "OhMyGod" ^_^
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  • From randrinawilson on June 20, 2011
    I dont really understand Naruto's logic on wanting to give sasuke his eyes. Why in the world would he be willing to go blind for him? for sasuke, not being able to use the sharingan is as good as being blind, with narutos eyes he wont have the sharigan so what would be the point? one of them would still be blind. Kyuubi cant grow narutos eyes back. that just really seemed like a moot point, a gift of the magi moot point. He loves him so much that he would be willing to do anything for him but he kinda needs to start thinking in the box here.

    if he has itahi's eyes he shouldnt be having degeneration. that was the point of taking your brothers eyes. it states that in the manga. A uhiha can use the sharingan so muh that it damages the eyes and they would go blind after they have reached a certain level. The only way they could attain perfection and not have any damage while using their use was to take their brothers eyes. once that has happend they wouldnt inure any damage when using there sharingan. wouldnt go blind. did something else happen to sasuke? can sakura help if they tell her what is going on?
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  • From bloodshound on June 20, 2011
    oh Naruto. Sniffle sniff.
    that's just... *sniffles more.
    maybe they can have an eye each.
    Go yyou Number One Suprise Ninja you.
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  • From Carousel on June 19, 2011
    I love this so much. It's sweet and simple.
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  • From narulov56 on June 18, 2011
    Oooh, I must say this chapter was longer than usual. I enjoyed like that. :D

    Poor Sasuke, He's going blind. I wonder how Naruto is going to handle that situation.

    Wooh, I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Update soon :D
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  • From roro237 on June 18, 2011
    WoW! I love how you bring out their romantic sides. It's not flashy because that's not the boys. You have just the right touch for them. Like Sasuke saying my first and only love:) I love it! The craziness that is Naruto you have capture that to:) Yeah! I'm hooked ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on June 18, 2011
    dammit, who's stirring up trouble and messing up their peaceful life. *growls.
    When I find them i'mma gunna maim them a lot!
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  • From moodysavage on June 18, 2011
    *snicker* Sasuke's mission not getting very far because Naruto is too dense... gotta' love that journal *snicker*
    I'm really glad that Sasuke isn't going to Kohona too. That whole play fighting that Gaara witnessed at the table was so cute. Really like those scenes :)
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  • From roro237 on June 17, 2011
    I loved it! I was so happy to read all five at once:) The fight the boyz had in 4 was so them:) That's the only way they hear each other sometimes. I love Gaara. I think he would stand up for his friends just as he is doing. I'm hooked no doubt about it ^_^
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  • From narulov56 on June 17, 2011
    love it so far. the 4th chapter kinda broke my heart a bit, but the ending made my heart all swell up again ♥. EHHHH I love it.

    Keep it up! :D
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