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Reviews for Incredible Ninjas

By : eva630texas
  • From jaybird988 on October 01, 2011
    I like the idea so far but the issues with naruto and sakura kinda ruin it for me. i know you said you are developing a plot and that is part of it. i am hoping that the issues will get resolved soon otherwise i don't think i can read it.
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  • From SmilesforSai on September 30, 2011
    Haha,Sakura. I always knew she had it in her!
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  • From jaybird988 on September 30, 2011
    i was wondering if there are going to be pairings like narutoxsakura. like the story.
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  • From joeparas1988 on September 29, 2011
    Hot premise, but you need more detail in your sex scenes for them to be actually hot - saying 'Those two over there are fucking, as are those two, and thems etc etc' isn't sexy at all. It's boring.

    Go into a little detail, small things like movement, positions, sounds, smells, expressions or even feelings. It makes the reader think the people acting like little sluts are actual PEOPLE, and not some imaginary idea.

    Looking forward to lots of promiscuous sex on everyone's behalf, maybe even some flashbacks of Minato, Kushina, Mikoto, Fugaku etc doing similar activities? And /gasp, maybe even some partner swapping?!
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  • From Namikaze7 on September 23, 2011
    HA!!! now we are talking!!! great job. im really looking forward to next chapters. you should consider putting this on fanfiction.com btw. i think ud get way more reviews.
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  • From moodysavage on September 23, 2011
    what?!? what?!? what's next? arrggg!!!!
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  • From Ookami88 on September 23, 2011
    While this story sounds good, the only thing we saw here was Sakura blowing that stuck up kid. Will there be more? When Hinata or other kunoichi (but especially Hinata) will be subjected to the things in the disclaimer?
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  • From moodysavage on September 22, 2011
    awwww... that was so awesome!!! I can see how they were thinking and I agree... I would hate for Naruto to be stuck so soon with not being able to go out on missions. And I'm so glad for Naruto!!! Poor Kakashi... stuck being Hokage lol.
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  • From moodysavage on September 18, 2011
    first chapter very unexpected lol... second chapter I have no idea where you're going with this... hopefully sasunaru/narusasu? (fingers crossed) :)
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  • From Takai153 on July 12, 2011
    Funny as hell! Making the sex hotter while keeping the comedy is the only thought for improvement I can think of. Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From SSShitstorm on June 05, 2011
    I can't stop fucking laughing.
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  • From tawanawelch on June 02, 2011
    Hilarious!!! Sakura sure did surprise the Hell out of the kid.XD. Can't wait for the next chapter!:d
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  • From TangoKilo421 on June 02, 2011
    Uhh...yeah.
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