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By : SoapMaster
  • From AlienixX on May 25, 2011
    I liked the battle scene but the end disappointed me. I cannot imagine Sasuke 'flying away' back to sweet ever-green Konoha.. especially with Naruto. All this ranting about leaving the village in case it gets too bad.. or want the Uchihas would have wanted of Sasuke.. Naruto's a naive bore. Uchihas were just the kind of family to want bloodiest revenge, and the whole mass kiling is unforgivable.. not to mention Itachi and Sasuke's own childhood etc etc
    In fanfictions with similar plot Sasuke is soo easily convinced by Naruto's empty words and tears. It's just stupid and sad. Unreal. As if he really could live and serve the people - the Council - who passed the order to kill everyone dear to him.. can you imagine that?..
    I just hope Kishimoto won't do something similar to the original Sasuke :)
    On the whole you did a god job, thank you and good luck.
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  • From AngelTalion on May 23, 2011
    NICE!!! I really loved it... great action... :-( Naruto gagged at kissing Saskue. Come on no one else could really put up with eather of them too long. LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2011
    I think this is pretty good, especially the fighting part. I think it takes a lot of skill to write a fighting scene and you managed to pull it off perfectly. On the other hand, I think you might've focused too much on that and forgotten to add a few details to the emotional part. I mean, this is supposed to be an epic fight, where all sorts of feelings are involved and supposed to be sorted out. I think it would've been even more intense if you described the way they were both feeling, the anger, the anxiousness, the eagerness. Know what I mean?
    Still, it's a good fic! Did you write it recently or did you already have it writen? I'm asking because many things have already happened after the Pain arc but you only mentioned stuff that happened up to the moment Nagato died.
    I was reading this and it almost gave the same feeling I had when I watched that new ova from Shippuden "Sasuke vs Naruto" (I think it's called) where we have a glimpse of them fighting at the Valley of the End. It was really exciting! If you haven't seen it, please go check it out!
    And I hope to read more of your work!
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  • From AvangalineHazel on May 22, 2011
    this has the potential to be a fantastic story. I think you should seriously consider making it more than just a one shot.
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