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Reviews for Seven

By : SoulOrchard
  • From ChatNoir on October 17, 2011
    I have to say, I find the start of this story really interesting. I don't normally go on this site anymore, but I will start to again to keep checking back on this story. It's an interesting premise, and I am curious to see where it goes. I hope you continue it. Good work, keep writing.
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  • From moodysavage on July 09, 2011
    *looking around* tap tap tap (against the computer screen) anyone there? anyone? sasuke's memory is gone and naruto is sad :(
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on June 13, 2011
    Gahhhh!!!! Why is there no more! It was so interesting!
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  • From Carousel on May 28, 2011
    I love this story so far. It is original and intriguing. Please update soon!
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  • From Kirstymaria on May 28, 2011
    this story is awesome. I love Narusasu and the fact that Sasuke lost seven years of his life seems exciting especially since he and Naruto used to hate each other. I hope Naruto and convince Sasuke of their love. please update soon,
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  • From missbri88 on May 28, 2011
    Oh you tease me with these shorty chapters! I can't wait for more and to see how Sasuke and Naruto came together after such an implied hateful past. *holds up bowl* More Please?!
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  • From tawanawelch on May 28, 2011
    LMBO!! My iPhone made a 'correction' when I typed Neji, it automatically said my name sorry. Also, in the end of my review I said he instead of him. I hate my mistakes!>.
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  • From tawanawelch on May 28, 2011
    Wow!! When I saw this I wondered how I missed seeing it. I started reading the first chapter and was hooked!!! I like that this about Sasuke cuz it's usually about Narutobeing the victim. I'm glad Nejislady is a friend in this I get kinda tired of him being a hated rival.:). I can't wait for more reaction from Sasuke when he finds out more about he and Naruto. I love this story already!!!X3
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  • From nivell on May 28, 2011
    I like where there is going! It's interesting to see how they hated each other and grew to become lovers when they're older. I noticed some typos and missing apostrophes but they were minor.
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  • From Danyealle on May 27, 2011

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you state that no profit is made. It must be clearly stated in that you make no money/profit.


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  • From missbri88 on May 22, 2011
    I'm looking forward to seeing more. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2011
    okay i'm confused......sasuke has been in a coma with possible brain damge for seven years right?? so how could he have been with naruto for the last five years and been living together with him for the last two years????

    or is it that he just now woke up from an accident that happened recently and he thinks he is back in 2004??? i like the idea for the story, but you need a beta to help you make the story more fluid.

    keep working hard!

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  • From conrada7 on May 22, 2011
    Idk what the heck the idiots who gave you only 3 stars were thinking. They must have not read the same story that I did, because the story that I just read was incredibly interesting and has so much potential!!! I can't wait to read more so please keep updating!!! =D
    *5 stars!!!!*
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  • From moodysavage on May 22, 2011
    oh definitely more....soon soon soon soon soon!:)
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