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Reviews for Teenaged Pervert

By : sasunarulover527
  • From bloodshound on October 24, 2011
    mwahahaha. it's going to be hella fun seeing how long Naru can hold out. Though Sas sure ain't being subtle, that's for sure.
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 23, 2011
    omg.
    i cant wait for more.
    update soon.
    and separate chapter 3.
    its annoying when people leave it bunched like that.
    i love this fic so far.
    XD.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From moodysavage on October 23, 2011
    I'm enjoying this story. I'm rooting for Naruto... I hope Sasuke DOESN'T manage to get Naruto to sleep with him during those two weeks. Then Sasuke can obsess over why he's still thinking of Naruto and track him down after the job is done. Wouldn't want Sasuke to always get his way now would we? lol I like a Sasuke that has to work for it lol.

    One suggestion... paragraphs! Hit return once in awhile so it doesn't become one huge paragraph. That makes it kind of hard to read. However sometimes the spacing gets messed when posting so it might not even be you making it that way!
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  • From Vrrtuk13 on October 23, 2011
    Any chance you could do something about the formatting of chapter 3? All I see is a big block of text that is really hard to read, and I'd really like to read this chapter because the story is a really nice read, minor grammar mistakes aside.
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  • From ANON - chynna18rawrr on August 11, 2011
    O dear god, I WANT MORE, this is incredibly funny and hilarious, Perverted sasuke is always hilarious.. and i love younger seme, I cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - alex on August 03, 2011
    I really like this story, I hope to see an update soon! Cant wait for more dirty Sasuke!!!
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  • From moodysavage on August 01, 2011
    lol Sasuke is so not done with his teasing. Naruto is soooo in for it lol :)
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2011
    Heh, struggle all you like Naru. He'll get you pretty pretty and your little boxers too. mwhahaha.
    Still, it'll be interesting to see how long he can hold out before Sas gets him.
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  • From ANON - keke on May 30, 2011
    hehe I like Sasuke-kun so much in this story, I just know the plot will get juicy-- it definitely has the potential to ;) :)

    anyways you did a good job of giving us a good reason Sasuke wouldnt want to stay with Kisame- how gross *cringe*
    ~
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  • From moodysavage on May 17, 2011
    cute :)
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  • From missbri88 on May 16, 2011
    I like the start to the story. I was like "Shark porn?! Wtf?! Lol", but I'd really like to see more. The grammar/spelling errors... I'm a beta missbri88 at gmail. Talk to me.
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  • From bloodshound on May 16, 2011
    awww man, Sas is going to so totally rule him... but the lemons... the lemons... *drifts off into own x rated fantasy world and drools. Then shakes head.
    ehem. Still, poke the meekest dog to often and it will bite. It'll be fun to see if this will be a seduction story or a push him until he snaps or something else and will they have contact after the job is done.
    looking forward to more. ^^
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  • From ANON - chynna18rawrr on May 16, 2011
    THIS WAS FUNNY, i love the chapter, AND Sasuke is quite the troublemaker isnt he, LOL I look forward to the next chapter :))
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 16, 2011
    Forget the other stories! Just update this one!
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