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Reviews for Ease The Pain

By : sasunaru2006
  • From ANON - Althydia on May 12, 2011
    I think if you've read the manga it's not confusing. I had no trouble understanding it because I knew what each part referred to. Makes me wonder about when you'll stop following the manga and why, though. Hopefully Sasuke will accept Naruto's light in his darkness... I'm looking forward to when they meet again. Also, was there some hint of Kakashi/Iruka in this chapter? I actually thought when it happened in the manga that the author was giving some fanservice to all who support that couple. :) (because Kakashi and Iruka are very rarely seen together in the manga otherwise, even though they have lots of shippers)
    And is the mpreg not certain now? I do hope it happens, particularly because of what it will mean for Sasuke and Naruto's relationship (that and their baby would undoubtedly be quite cute). This would be one bond that Sasuke would certainly have trouble breaking since reviving his clan used to be one of his goals. Plus, it seems that Sasuke's (or is it Itachi's?) jutsu had some effect on Naruto. But maybe it just gave him the ability to carry children and Sasuke still has to impregnate him? It does indeed raise the question of why Itachi would have such a scroll. Particularly if it works only on a jinchuuriki (but does it?). By the way, why would the Kyuubi hide it? Could he want Naruto to get pregnant? Or it could be something else completely.
    I also liked the idea that Naruto and Sasuke think about each other when watching the moon. At least it's not only associated with creepy Madara (who seems to be a pervert too - should Sasuke watch his back?). Although I think that all that sexual frustration can't be good for Sasuke. That guy is really too repressed. He should take example from Naruto and at least indulge in fantasies if he can't have the real thing (or until he can have it). :)
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  • From missbri88 on May 12, 2011
    Its not confusing per se...
    But the chapter was good. You didn't need to tell us what chapter of the manga you were writing from. But I'd like to see more. :)
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on May 12, 2011
    If the problem with Naru is what I think it is then Sasuke will have to rethink that whole let Naru die thing, and that whore he travels with finally get the hint that Sasuke will never want her used ass!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ceridwen on May 11, 2011
    It sounds like Naruto's rear is now like a girl, that's unusual and more than slightly disturbing. You've got a couple of misspelled words but nothing major. If he gets pregnant, how on earth is it going to be born? As they say 'no assbabies!' Remember to explain the extra/changed biology and don't just lump it under the fox, he gets blamed for everything. This is looking good, keep it up.
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  • From AngelTalion on May 11, 2011
    I like it and speaking from experience here, these chapters... the ones that help fill in the gaps and get you to the meat of what you WANT to write are the hardest. However they are neccissary... because while you know in your head what is and has happened the reader doesn't. Nothing sucks more then reading a fic and going...wait what just happened there. ;-) So good job!!
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  • From moodysavage on May 11, 2011
    We so need to have sense knocked in to Sasuke. He's planning on killing off Naruto along with the rest of the village? arrrgggg!!!!

    not too jumpy & yes it made sense, more soon! :)
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  • From ANON - chynna18rawrr on May 11, 2011
    oohhhh i love it, I bet i know why naruto's acting strange, Sasuke knocked him up. ... LOL i love it and i want more please update soon,
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  • From missbri88 on May 10, 2011
    I like it! I hate you because I want you to continue and I can't wait for more! And if you take it down I will be sure to bring riots to your door. Or inbox... :/ But YAY! Give me more!
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  • From moodysavage on May 10, 2011
    Love it! (jumping up and down) Love it love it love it! More more more!!!
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  • From ANON - AJ on May 10, 2011
    I agree with ceridwen's entire comment. Besides everything ceridwen said, it doesn't make sense for Sasuke to randomly decide to use a jutsu on Naruto to make him feel better (let alone a pregnancy-inducing jutsu!) since they're hardly friends and more like enemies (from Sasuke's perspective). Sasuke would hardly want to go out of his way for Naruto when the possibility exists that approaching Naruto could get Sasuke caught. Is there a reasonable, logical explanation for why Sasuke would go this far? Seems to me that putting Naruto in a happy genjutsu is an easier and less dangerous way of helping him out than first using an unknown jutsu on him and second returning to have sex with him.

    I'm definitely not saying this is a bad fic and don't continue it. It's just that at this point, Sasuke's motivation for his actions is unclear/doesn't make sense.
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  • From Kingcobra on May 09, 2011
    Please continue. This is too good to be taken down.
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  • From ANON - dar` on May 09, 2011
    I wanna read more!! Definitely continue!!! I want to know what sasuke did to naruto, i mean why else would he need the sharingan??? Thanks for the chapter and I can't wait until the next!!
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  • From AngelTalion on May 09, 2011
    Bad bad bad Sasuke!!! Fucking and running and leaving behind maki-chiha babies!! And then he sharingoned him... naught Sasuke!! *sighs* but hot and sexy and I can't wait to see Naruto's reaction!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - Althydia on May 09, 2011
    I really liked the beginning and I hope you'll continue this story.
    Also, I hope Sasuke will come back for Naruto and the baby, since your Sasuke seems to have not completely lost himself to darkness yet. And I wonder how Naruto's pregnancy will influence his training and the events to come, and how others will react to it. Plus, once he's pregnant, Naruto will probably realise it wasn't a dream this time...
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  • From LadyWolf on May 09, 2011
    More please......


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