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Reviews for Illusion and Dream

By : djserani
  • From ANON - Yamalover on August 18, 2012
    I love this story and found myself readin the last few chapters again after having withdrawl symptoms of these 4. My fav part is when Genma and kotetsu are saying goodbye, always brings a lump to my throat they are incredible and you have played their emotions soooo well love it! Please update living the dream soon. Thanks!
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  • From TempestFury on September 02, 2011
    I loved the story. I finally was able to follow you from DA. It's tempestfury76. You really know Kotetsu and Izumo, and it sounds like you're writing more about Raido and Genma....lol! I love the way you wrote about all four of their conflicting emotions. For a while there I thought Zumo was going crazy. You always seem to capture me with these stories. I hope to read more soon.
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  • From POHness1 on July 15, 2011
    *EPICapplause* I am sooooo happy with the ending of this story. especially with how serious all of the relationships were getting. this way, they are all happy. you spun one fantastic tale, and i enjoyed reading every second of it. ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on July 14, 2011
    oh my gosh I sooooo LOVED this!!! Sending lots of love your way for this awesome awesome story!!! It was really good how you had Aoba and Iruke give a few little hints to get them going in the right direction because we KNOW those four were too close the the situation to see clearly and while it may have not been enough for Aoba's suggestion... Iruka is a respected teacher so his opinion would be taken more seriously. I got so excited when Izumo and Kotetsu asked Genma and Raido to have dinner at THEIR house. I started to repeat in my head 'ask them to marry you ask them to marry you...' lol. Thank you so much for writing this awesome story. You have written a very special story with very special characters. You did a wonderful job portraying their feelings and emotions while interweaving it with a really solid and interesting storyline. And the pacing of this story was just perfect. I know the story is over... but this is a story I know I'll reread and keep rereading because it's revisiting characters I love. lol and if you ever feel like writing another epilogue I would love to read about when Kotetsu and Genma slept together again. They were my favorite couple :) Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it here.
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  • From TypoIsMe89 on July 14, 2011
    So i Just had this crazy dream about these four guys and the weird thing is that they all ened up together...I'm torn, and this story put me through emotional hell (yet I kept coming back for more...>_>) but I loved it Thank you for Crazy, hot, disfuctional story!! looking forward to futre stories = ) I promis not to bitch XD
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  • From RitzCracker on July 14, 2011
    Thank you for the wonderful ending. Definitely worth it.
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  • From cynaga on July 13, 2011
    HURRAY!
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  • From TypoIsMe89 on July 13, 2011
    YAAAAY!!! Finally!! woot ~Celebration Dance~ Your evil but i seem to like pain and so its ok and i love you cus my boys are together!!! tho i must say...you play dirty i dunno if that could be called a foursome or not but that was hot! but whats even hotter is just about to ha[[en so i'm going to go read
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  • From moodysavage on July 12, 2011
    Ok... chapter 30 made me cry. I cried when Kotetsu was getting his belongings and he and Genma were kissing goodbye and I cried when Raido and Genma were leaving Izumo and Kotetsu's apartment. This is just heartbreaking. 4 rings... they can all marry each other. I just love this story.
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  • From ANON - Analei on July 12, 2011
    Man, the drama in this story is great. Secretly I'm hoping some near-tragic mission occurs and the wounded party results in bringing forth a bundle of emotions. And just maybe, since Genma is my favorite, I'm hoping it ends up being him. Very sexy story!
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  • From moodysavage on July 11, 2011
    ohhhh...that was realllllly good!!!!!!!!! it was bittersweet and there wasn't any other way it could be for this. I liked that they realized they were taking a different step and they all paused... and I like that Raido made that decision. It fits that he wouldn't be as afraid to take that step as the others. *sigh* it's like harry potter ending... something you've loved throughout the story and hate to see ending but you're also glad to see how the conclusion works out. that's how I feel about this story.
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  • From cynaga on July 11, 2011
    so complicated *sigh*
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  • From moodysavage on July 09, 2011
    whew! (fanning self) that was awesome...really meltdown awesome... whoo hoo!

    I loved the looks for approval and touching among the four. And I really liked that part where Raido took his shirt off and hesitated like he wasn't sure if he would be accepted and he was totally accepted by Kotetsu. They were purposely allowing their lovers and best friends to be with the other and there was no jealousy. I think Raido said it correctly when he said their wasn't anyone else he would trust Izumo with other than Kotetsu and Genma. And that part where Genma asked if he could mark Izumo... and that other part where Kotetsu leaned over to take care of Izumo... and uh... well... quite a few of the parts... *grin* well there were a lot of parts I could talk about that I liked lol.

    now... about those rings... hmmmmmm
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  • From cynaga on July 09, 2011
    [ch 28] a foursome? that's your solution? i didn't see that one coming... not a bad idea at all!!! very HOT!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Freak on July 09, 2011
    *Slams empty coffee cup down next to an empty jar of instant coffee grounds....*
    I stumbled onto your story late last night and after calling in sick to work, drinking more than enough coffee to cause a heart attack, and unplugging my phones- i have read all 27 Chapters!
    I cant believe how great this story is, just amazing. Your so talented, i feel like im in the story. I hate to admit it, but im DYING to see/read Kotetsu and Rai in bed!
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