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By : djserani
  • From POHness1 on July 01, 2011
    And so, as the mission comes to a close, they both have a sexy rendezvous in the tub. Niiiice. This is getting even better. And I've been thinking. Which is worse: having a crappy mission and having sex after it, or getting a mission that required them to play as lovers acting a bit too real. Hm... I'm not sure. But I wonder how they will all end up fixing this. I hope no hearts get broken. That would ruin them all. Only the future will tell. ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on July 01, 2011
    you write like... chapter after chapter of foreplay between Kotetsu & Izumo. I absolutely love it. You are realllllllyyyy skilled at those scenes. These two are definitely close to their breaking point. There's no way they can go back and try to not be a couple. Even though they love the other two I think it would about kill them to be apart from each other again. But heck out of all the couples... they all dragged their feet about liking others lol. I guess Raido and Genma though are better about stating what they want they without so much hesitation. It was Raido who finally asked Izumo out and Genma who told Kotetsu that they should be exclusive. I guess being who they are makes them better at making hard choices maybe. Arrrgggg... want them all happy happy happy!
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  • From POHness1 on June 30, 2011
    haha. they are going to have their hands full with that woman. she will be the death of them. Unless... they actually do get married. wow... that would be interesting. I cant imagine what they would tell Raidou and Genma. *shakes head* this gets more fascinating by the second. And I wonder how Raidou and Genma are handling their situation. Hopefully, more smoothly. At this point, they are so comfortable with each other, you would think that Izumo and Kotetsu actually WERE a couple. Which is what we are going for, but anyway. Can't wait to read more ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on June 29, 2011
    I loved all those touching scenes!!! I'm a big fan of touch :) At breakfast, at the market, in the garden... *sigh* I think their interrupted morning took them to the point where they don't want to hold back showing their feelings even if they are holding back saying their feelings. The mission gives them that freedom and they are finally running with it. It's like they are refusing to think about anything else. I just loved that Kotetsu bought those rings and 'proposed' to Izumo. It's like they just can't help saying all they want even though they keep saying it's for the mission. And now... lol the wedding? *bouncing up and down in excitement*
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  • From TypoIsMe89 on June 29, 2011
    ...I dunno weither i should be mad or happy but i do know ur a mean mean mean person and a tease!!! I was like finally!!! tetsu/izumo sexy time!!! after weeks and weeks and weeks of suffering on my part ( since the boys obviously dont care who they get ass from = (....well they do just not with each other -_-)the boys are seconds away from making mad crazy earth shattering passionate sex the freaking LAUNDRY MAID!!! of all ppl kills it!!!(and me) not cool...but i'm happy because it's progress and you feed me enough to last a bit longer for the wait...just how long will that be? putting aside my bitchy rants...I loooove this story XD and ur amazing writer so update soon!!! and THAT was the best almost sex soon in the entire story (bias opinion XD) it beats the full scenes for me
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  • From POHness1 on June 29, 2011
    well, so much for faking a couple. I would call that a break of sorts. They are a cute couple though. If only they werent both dating someone else at the moment. The discussions when they get back are going to be very interesting. I can't wait to read it. ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on June 29, 2011
    that was amazing... truly truly amazing. Izumo waking up with Kotetsu like that was just so steamy and sexy that I was all like 'go ahead go ahead- raido & genma have already taken another step'... and then the LAUNDRYYYYY... lol I just reread that and thought 'no, oh no' lol. I'm awful I know but it was that good that this time I wasn't thinking 'stop not yet' lol. *sigh* and just as good was what came after. Them lying in bed together just holding each other, looking and kissing... that was something special. It showed so much depth of feeling between the two. I swear I am just so in love with this story. Like Vanyel in love which I have read repeatedly (last herald mage series by mercedes lackey)

    oh and your welcome :)
    what can I say... your story is amazingly wonderful and I was inspired :)
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  • From ANON - cynaga on June 28, 2011
    [ch 18] so beautiful and the LAUNDRY! you dog... ;)
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  • From POHness1 on June 28, 2011
    wooooooow. I come back from a busy weekend and i find three chapters of awesomeness. Well, one side of the relationship has finally broken. though, with that situation, I cant really blame Raidou and Genma. I wonder how they will end u dealing with it. Hm... and how long until Izumo and Kotetsu finally break as well. This is getting so awesome. I can't wait to find out what happens next. ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on June 27, 2011
    awww... that was sweet. I bet they won't stay on the same side of the bed either lol.
    oh and I wrote you something on mine. I couldn't resist, I just love these couples :)
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  • From moodysavage on June 24, 2011
    whew! *fanning self* I do believe my mouth is tingling lol. That chapter 16 was really hot. I continue to be amazed at how awesome this story is. EVERY chapter continues the plot so well and are just so freakin' good. I also loved chapter 15 with Izumo and Kotetsu almost getting married. I really like how it's Izumo who in his mind keeps wanting to push things a little more. It's like he couldn't allow himself to think about it before as a possibility but now that Kotetsu is in a real relationship and Izumo knows that one is possible and that they both have feelings for each other... he just can't help but want to push for more. It's our playboy who is the voice of reason lol.

    I like that Raido seems shocked. His feelings are the ones that we've heard from the least which fits him and it's nice to see him kinda blindsided and given a wake up call.

    Soooo looking forward to more :)
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  • From POHness1 on June 21, 2011
    and so the moment has finally happened. they took it quite well, actually. kinda like how Genma and Kotetsu took the realization that they were in love with each other. hm... i wonder how this will turn out. i imagine it will be a little while before the confrontation, because it doesnt seem like a good idea to me for that to happen on the mission. But i suppose we will see.
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  • From moodysavage on June 21, 2011
    :( my review didn't send! (stupid foreign words I can't read) AnYhow...

    I loved this chapter! *fanning self* That scene in the alley was reallly steamy. I love how they can't help but ignite when they touch each other and they forget about everything else. And they admitted they wanted each other! It was reallly sexy how they did that without realizing they were doing that. And I liked that they stopped before they cheated. Oh it's just all wonderful :)
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  • From POHness1 on June 20, 2011
    wow. I go away for the weekend, and come back to a fantastically confusing chapter. Poor Kotetsu is just making things soo hard on them both. It's only at the end that he really thinks of the consequences of his actions, not just on him, but on Izumo. My goodness, he is causing some trouble. But love can do that to people, and he will have a hard time getting through this mission without messing up both of his relationships. I hope it all comes out well, though. I would like for everyone to still be happy, even if Kotetsu is with Izumo and Genma with Raidou. *sigh* I'll have to wait and see what happens.
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  • From ANON - shesinunderland on June 18, 2011
    i love this! this chapter made me laugh their resistence is breaking lol
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