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By : djserani
  • From moodysavage on July 08, 2011
    I really liked how you wrote this chapter...you have a knack for writing truly hot and sexy scenes. But it felt like I had missed something before this scene. You know like when you leave the room during a movie and you've missed out on something really important?

    Kotetsu, Izumo and Genma all know that they love 2 others. And I could see how Genma could be attracted to Izumo because he'd noticed him before and thought about him as the one that the 2 people he loves are in love with so he might be curious as to why and as a former playboy he could still be attracted. But it's Raido who stands out oddly. He wasn't a playboy and he hasn't figured out his feelings for Genma yet other than a connection. So I can't see him suddenly being attracted to Kotetsu. I CAN see him joining in to see if it's possible to be a foursome BECAUSE he loves Izumo and Genma and realizes that they both love Kotetsu too. And I could see Kotetsu doing the same because of his love for Izumo and Genma.

    Actually I guess I see Raido as someone who would purposely try this out because it seems to be the only solution for this situation for those he cares about. Because otherwise I don't see how he'd make a move on Kotetsu or why Kotetsu would respond to him.

    Arrgggg.... this sounds like I didn't like the chapter but I did! It's just that Raido... I don't want him to be just messing around because of what that guy said. He could take that idea and decide to try it for the others and then realize that yeah... it is love with Izumo and Genma so it's all worth it to see if it would work with him and Kotetsu loving them.
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  • From POHness1 on July 08, 2011
    Haha. oh my goodness. such complications are surfacing. But it makes perfect sense, with everyone looking at the other person's partner. If this doesnt end up t be a straight four-way menage, I will be surprised. It might solve their problems, though. I could see understanding coming out of this. I can't wait to read about it. oh my, this will be HOTT! ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on July 07, 2011
    wow... that chapter was so painful. Does Raido have an idea?
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  • From POHness1 on July 07, 2011
    Wow. this is just getting even more complicated. I do have a strong fondness for Genma/Kotetsu, so them taking this new step in their relationship is fine for me. but with the story meaning to be a Kotetsu/Izumo fic, this is gonna be a very interesting turn. If anything, this to me sounds like a clear sign to Izumo that, if you truly want to be with kotetsu, ur gonna have to fight for him. *shakes head in amazement* this is such an awesomely complicated story. ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on July 05, 2011
    ohhh I just love Kotetsu and Genma together. Love them love them love them love them!

    And while I know the best friend pairs will end up together, they really are a very special couple.

    Now I think it will have to be Raido and Izumo who break up first because they can't stand to not be with their best friends. Kotetsu and Genma are still at the 'never tried and gave up before trying' stage. But Raido and Izumo seem to be getting ready for the 'why didn't I ever try' or maybe 'I will regret it if I never try to see if it would work'

    I loved this chapter.
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  • From POHness1 on July 05, 2011
    aha! So the time has finally come. They have finally reunited with their significant others and told them the truth. I kinda figured everyone would take it okay, since the situation has been known to happen. But now we have a clue into the future. the reunion sex between Raidou and Izumo was telling for both of them, and I imagine Genma and Izumo will feel the same. except, with their history, I imagine they will actually be able to talk to each other about it. Hm... fun things are to come. ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on July 05, 2011
    now it's getting painful... it's not going to be easy to ignore anymore. I don't know why but I worry about Genma's feelings the most. I think he seems to be the most vulnerable. o
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  • From moodysavage on July 04, 2011
    awwww... just... awwww. I totally agree, that was making love. It was different from Raido and Genma because their time together intense and immediate while Izumo and Kotetsu had Kotetsu thinking what was best for Izumo more. Even in shutdown he was putting Izumo first.

    Next... the meeting? the talk? *fingers crossed*
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  • From RitzCracker on July 04, 2011
    wow. they finally did it. oh, i can't wait to see those four in one room together.
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  • From POHness1 on July 03, 2011
    Oh man. This mission just got a lot more complicated. Now they have ninja after them? *sigh* I hope they make it home before they get caught, but whats the fun in that? hehe At least they got in smoothly. I totally thought they were gonna get caught. THAT would have been a travesty.
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  • From moodysavage on July 03, 2011
    I was stressed that they were going to get caught and have to be rescued. I had visions of them finally being together because they thought they were going to die and then their boyfriends showing up. I like this so much better. I liked that they successfully retrieved the scroll themselves because I think they felt like they weren't given enough chances to show how capable they are. Now they need to just NOT ... SLOW... DOWN!!!
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  • From POHness1 on July 02, 2011
    *sigh* so much confusion. This is getting really complicated. It will be a very interesting situation when they finally resolve it.
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  • From moodysavage on July 02, 2011
    oh my gosh... the only thoughts going through my mind now is TIME! expected back in 5 days? day and a half to get there? and in the other chapter weren't they supposed to be finished in a day or two? That means they will get to the city on the same day/night that Kotetsu & Izumo are going after the scroll! Right?!? Right?! Arrgggg!!!!

    Well... at least they're not arriving when they were in the shower. *cringe* Fine... they can all just get married... to each other. It will be a 4 person marriage without Raido and Kotetsu sleeping together. arrrgggg!!!
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  • From tovah on July 01, 2011
    This chapter kinda confused me a little. Rai and Gen had sex? Did I miss that chapter? I thought I read it all. I knew there was some kissing and them grinding on each other at the end of their mission but I had no idea they had sex.
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  • From cynaga on July 01, 2011
    delicious story~!
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