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Reviews for The Bet

By : kaiyousama
  • From Yuri24 on July 14, 2013
    This is so intense! I really love this couple and your story!
    Your writing is great, detailed and very graphic. While I was reading the story I could feel Kiba's anxiety and anticipation.

    It's a pity that it's dropped because I would love to read a lot more about this unusual couple.
    Well, I'm assuming that it's dropped, but maybe it's not, and someday you will decide to continue... Or maybe not, but a girl can dream! xD
    Anyway, thank you for sharing all that love with us! ^^

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  • From ANON - imawilburd on May 03, 2012
    Oh shot is right oh I love it. I wouldn't have looked for this pairing normally but I
    Am totally digging your story. I love Itachi as dom and is ideals and rules are
    Just great and love Kiba's path into subspace.
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  • From ANON - Jane on October 09, 2011
    Hey, this is really good, I don't usually like Kiba Itachi fics but this one just flows so well I cant help but like it XD I really like the base idea as well as the execution you've made for the story this far... no so much with the cliff hangers in the middle of smex though >__< lol anyways keep it up I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you update soon.
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  • From ejpt9999 on June 18, 2011
    i like this a lot when is the next update?
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  • From cynaga on May 29, 2011
    I love this but you are such an incredible tease ... the progress is painfully slow and every chapter is a cliff hanger!
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  • From veryloudanimal on May 29, 2011
    The 'Oh shit' there at the end is so perfect!
    Leaves me wanting more but also giving a good end to that chapter without feeling dropped.
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  • From ANON - AJ on May 13, 2011
    You realize, of course, that was a terribly mean place to stop the chapter at? ;P

    I like the fact that Kiba freaked out a bit during the foreplay. Since it's all new to him, that's much, much more realistic than if he'd gone along with everything perfectly and then discovered by the end of it that OMG, he's born to be a sub! Theoretically, since this is a type of sex it never crossed his mind to participate in, he's not going to be perfect at it the first time, and may not ever be entirely perfect at it if it's not 100% his kink. Well, as a good dom, Itachi should be able to accommodate and still enjoy himself in the process, just as he's done so far.
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  • From ANON - arya on May 11, 2011
    a very very nice story. Absolutely LOVE itachi. :) him smirking is just too hot. Either way, kiba isn't too bad either. a very unusual pairing but i'm starting to like it quite a lot. anyway, itachi as a dom is of course out of this world. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - B on May 08, 2011
    I had two immediate reactions to this story. The first being WOOHOO!!! and the second being NOOO!!!!! Now let me explain, the first was due to being so excited that you updated this story. The second was due to where you left the story off..... cliffhangers are down right evil. Anyways, I like how you juxtaposse Itachi's and Kiba's perspectives. I think that it makes the story flow better with the different points of view. Can't wait to read the next chapter (hint, hint - update soon). :)
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  • From ANON - lo on May 07, 2011
    I like how Kiba is slowly figuring things out. I like the learning process Kiba is experiencing.
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  • From moodysavage on May 05, 2011
    I liked how Itachi was nervous about giving him the contract. And that Kiba came out with no shirt and saw how Itachi reacted :)

    I like your style of writing how you take turns on their POV too.
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  • From ANON - BD on May 03, 2011
    Wow... I can not wait for you to update this story again (even though you just did). The chemistry you have going on between Kiba and Itachi is palpable. (I am really surprised you don't have more reviews too.)
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  • From ANON - AJ on April 26, 2011
    This is quite sexy. I like the fact that Kiba is no wilting flower. I think Itachi is a little over-confident at this point and absolutely sure he's going to get what he wants. But he likes Kiba's defiance, doesn't he? Kiba should turn the tables on him a bit and not give him exactly what he wants in exactly the way he wants it. Itachi will probably discover he likes that even more than when everything goes according to plan. ;)
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  • From moodysavage on April 26, 2011
    hot and sexy :) I really like hearing what Itachi is thinking and how he's been wanting Kiba for a long time. Obsessive love is one of my favorites to read about.
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  • From ANON - B on April 25, 2011
    Kiba, Itachi and the car... a perfect combination. Of course Sasuke wouldn't like camping, but the fact that he went and took Naruto spoke volumes. Too bad Kiba doesn't know about the voicemail that Itachi left him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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