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Reviews for Stay with Me

By : 7SinsofAnime
  • From FromAfar on June 28, 2011
    Thank you for the story. These chapters were very.. nice. Time moves smoothly and chapters are pretty eventful. I only wish for more & more Sasuke-Naruto personal interaction, as it's not possible for them to compete right now. It'd be interesting to know what's going on in Sasuke's country, too, as there must be some consequences to the massacre, not to mention Itachi's fate..
    As someone mentioned above, Naruto's a Keeper, demon's vessel. How do they communicate?
    A very interesting plot, and Naruto is really an enigma, as a prince and a person.
    Please continue! Thank you.
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on June 13, 2011
    Definitely cute and definitely eager for more!
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  • From bridmatt on June 12, 2011
    A well-written, entertaining story with an actual plot? What in the hell is something like this doing on AFF? (Yeah, I said it.) Seriously, this is one of the only stories I bother coming to this site for. I like that there's a certain amount of maturity in the tone of this story. No one is going around acting like a panting teenager who can't keep his/her hormones in check. I appreciate the fact that Kakashi and Iruka, for example, are portrayed as actual MEN who speak to Naruto as if he is a fellow adult, exactly the way that advisers to a prince should behave. It would have been all-too easy to rely on fandom cliches and turn them into a gay couple with Iruka standing in as the hysterical, pearl-clutching mother, and Kakashi as the overly-permissive, perverted father-figure. I'm quite glad you didn't go there. The characters have more depth to them the way you've written them. Certainly Naruto comes across as a person I can take seriously the way he authoritatively stood up to the (legitimate) anger of Kakashi and Iruka once they found out about what Naruto did for Sasuke. (At his position, he certainly would've looked weak if Kakashi and Iruka had gone all "doting parents" on him.) My only suggestion for you is not to use the "Naruto's P.O.V.," "Sasuke's P.O.V.," etc., tags in the middle of the story because it's awkward to read. (It almost acts like an author's note in the middle of the story.) Instead, when a point of view switch occurs, you can indicate the scene change with a line, but more importantly than that, use a good transition statement that lets us know we'll now be following the perspective of a different character. (For example, immediately starting off with a sentence telling us what the new character is thinking or doing is a pretty easy and direct way of telling us who we are now going to be reading about.) Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on June 05, 2011
    Things seem to be going at least semi smoothly... for now.
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  • From AlienixX on June 04, 2011
    Thanx for a glimpse of a mystery that is Naruto :) And for answering some of my questions.
    It's strange that Naruto and his kingdom are so 'foreign' to Sasuke.. after all, they're neighbors and as royalties, they were supposed to keep some kind of contact, if only for the sake of diplomacy or courtesy. Yet they're complete strangers, never heard of each other, any rumors or else.. "Freezing winters and cool summers"? Sasuke's definitely somewhere from Russia-like country! (I'm Russian) Somewhere near my region :(
    Hinata & Naruto's behavior shows that people tend to expect their kindness returned. People who have never harmed anyone have nothing and no one to be afraid of..
    How could some people seriously suspect a half-dead person of attempting a murder and "taking the kingdom for his own"? Tsunade could have confirmed his wounds (lethal wounds) weren't fake or pretence..in fact, he died :)
    I liked the sparring episode. Of course, Sasuke's itching to practice, he's all for action. But the scene turned out to be sad.
    So, Naruto's body's a vessel and Kyuubi - his keeper. Interesting. What demon is his "darker side"? No wonder then, why they don't want to accept him as a king, or why he can have some "trouble" finding a spouse. Who'd want him? He's a deadly walking threat.. the sparring went a bit too strenuous and it provoked that power, what about more dangerous situations, then?
    Those mercenaries - are they like hunter-nins in Naruto's original universe? Ha, why should Naruto care about a dangerous foreign prince if he's surrounded by assigned assassins, day and night, wherever he goes?.. sad.
    Thank you for the chapter, Are you really The Element Child? :)
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  • From hisoka on June 03, 2011
    Things seem to be moving with them, even though naruto gets more and more secretive as things progress. well I guess that’s why he was so open about so much in the beginning it makes sense…I think.so its going to take sasuke a while to heal but whats to become of him after he gets better?noone seems to be warming up to him any time soon hes gonna have to start trying to make some inisiative into getting people to become confertable or at least use to seeing him around. Hmm..i cant remember the last time naruto blushed like that(if at all)it also seems that narutos putting the whole incident in the training room behind him, also notice that kiba just left sasuke there in the training room and just ran off with hinata a bit cold but I guess kiba still doesn’t like or trust sasuke.well until next time cant wait to see whatll happen next
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  • From Stellaluna4 on May 23, 2011
    OOOoooOooO Update~ This story has me caught!
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  • From morbidcuriosity on April 30, 2011
    love it can not wait for more. is there a way for me to be notified of your updates? do you hold accounts on other sites?
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  • From Carousel on April 27, 2011
    Chapter 3 was very intriguing. This is a pretty complex plot. How will Sasuke react when he finds out what Naruto did to bring him back to life?
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  • From smint45 on April 26, 2011
    This story is geting more and more interesting!!!! I want more!!!
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  • From missbri88 on April 25, 2011
    Omg I love this already!!!!! I was so sad when I reached the end of chapter three and saw there wasn't anymore... Sooooooo, MORE PLEASE!!! *holds up empty bowl*
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  • From bloodshound on April 25, 2011
    wow, compicated desu... I wonder what will happen when Sas realises that he literally owes Naru his life?
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 25, 2011
    Oh, now I'm disappointed. It's this 'Tristan-Izolde'-syndrome-kind-of-thing... where two people are drawn to each other by some magical (or other) force. I don't like it because it's always unfair for one or both parts of the relationship.
    Well... I'll stay tuned anyway.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 19, 2011
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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  • From BelleArcher on April 17, 2011
    I am enjoying your story and hope you continue with it. Sorry for the lack of constructive criticism that's not my thing.
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