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Reviews for Checkmate

By : Darkprism
  • From Mya416 on July 19, 2011
    I absolutely adore your writing. The universe you've created is great. How you're portraying Sasuke is actually amazing and similar to how I would've pictured him as. :) I hope you'll write more about Naruto and Sasuke's relationship.
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  • From writeaddict on April 07, 2011
    This was good, it didn't even need sex- though the scenes you write sizzle. I loved how you had a sub to sub talk and addressed the insecurities we see in Sasuke throughout this series. That he talked to Shikamaru was icing, Shikamaru is my favourite lazy genius. I love your work so thank you for writing this bit of insight.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 07, 2011
    I really enjoyed that! You didn't make the extended metaphor too much or boring. It was a great insight into Shika's mind and his relationship.
    Great job!
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on April 07, 2011
    Beautiful, simple beautiful.

    Sasuke wants something even more with Naruto but he is afraid if he gives in completely, that Naruto will live him because he wasn't challenge anymore to Naruto. Sasuke should try with Naruto or he will never know how much Naruto feels for him. :)

    Thank you for this amazing chapter :)
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  • From ANON - lo on April 06, 2011
    As like all your writing this oneshot rocked. I love the devotion and the depth of feeling these couples have. The conversation between those two was wonderful. I just absolutely love these stories, there is a maturity in the relationships that I don't even see in mainstream published works. You are very talented.
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  • From ANON - akira on April 06, 2011
    oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was great!!! please you have to write anout Naru and Sasu, perhaps after this conversation? or other day but linked to this? is true what Shika said in the end. what would Sasuke do? but is also true that sasu is broken and only Naru knows that. MAHHH i love so much this stories of yours.

    XOXO
    Aki
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  • From suzannecmc on April 06, 2011
    THAT.
    WAS.
    GREAT!!!!!!!

    emotions and sexy all over the place.
    and lordy, there is a Manhattan, Kansas!

    thank you.
    (for the geography lesson too)
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  • From tawanawelch on April 06, 2011
    I really loved how vulnerable Sasuke was and trying to mask it for Shikamaru. I hope that talk they had really does sink into Sasuke's brain and he can truly give Naruto the happiness they both deserve.
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  • From Carousel on April 06, 2011
    This was lovely and sweet. You're so awesome.
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  • From shirokitsune25 on April 06, 2011
    nice! real nice! it is also the first one that i have read that has a TALKATIVE sasuke....meh it fits the story so its all good! XD
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  • From nivell on April 06, 2011
    Lovely! Secretly, I imagine Sasuke and Shikamaru holding hands and being best fwiends. XD
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  • From cynaga on April 06, 2011
    wonderful~!
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  • From mannahpierce on April 06, 2011
    For me this was one of your best. I really appreciate it when an author gets into a character's head and then manages to communicate that to the reader. This was excellently done and utterly absorbing.
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