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Reviews for Rivals

By : moodysavage
  • From ANON - Timber on October 30, 2011

    I just loved the poem about Naruto and Sasuke and Sakura working so hard to see Kakashi's face!!! It kept me laughing from start to finish!! I loved the part about them not getting to see his face till he's dead.....that would so be like Kakashi....but then again they could have asked the Ramen guy and his daughter what he looked like because from their expressions....he must be pretty hot!! I've never seen either of them blush in an episode like they did when they got to peek at him eating. LOL But we all do love a mystery!!!

    This is Timber.....aka ....Timberwolf....aka HotAnimeGuysFan ....lol....
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  • From KalyxandSoren on August 16, 2011
    I think this is quite a nice series of poems! I'd actually like to see more of them if you plan on adding more to this mini series? You do very well with rhyming and not having it come off as trying to hard. So super kudos! It takes a lot of thought to put something like this together ^.^
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  • From Carousel on May 08, 2011
    Poem 4 made me really sad. Sasuke is so hurt and broken and I just hope maybe Naruto can heal him a bit.
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  • From ANON - Carousel on April 27, 2011
    That third poem was really super cute.
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on April 14, 2011
    Sasuke's POV

    LOL This is funny and so like Sasuke!! I just loved how it developed and the flow that it went!! You so have a gift with words!! Its nice to see you post and not keep that talent hidden like you have all these years!! Maybe you can post some of your other works as well for everyone to see. Such a gift is ment to be shared with the world!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on April 14, 2011
    Naruto's POV
    I just love this!! I think its really CUTE!! :) Can't wait to see more!!
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  • From Carousel on April 12, 2011
    I loved Sasuke's POV. This is going to be such a cute collection of poems.
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  • From tawanawelch on April 05, 2011
    I really liked Naruto's calm determination.
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  • From AngelTalion on April 03, 2011
    :) This made me smile! And I haven't even had my coffee yet.
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