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Reviews for Lemons

By : moodysavage
  • From Hotanimeguysfan on January 16, 2012
    Lemons

    Went and reread it all again!! Laughed my headoff as usual!! Its just so funny and adorable....one you never get tired of and can enjoy again and again!!
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  • From vernajast on June 22, 2011
    You had me giggling, especially the "Sasuke is my honey" one. Hilarious!! The closest I ever came to a poem about the boys was this:

    "There once was a man from the Leaf / Who fell for the Uchiha chief. / They fought and they wrestled, / At his neck he was nestled, / And their honeymoon lasted a week."

    *gigglesnort* My one foray into fan fic poetry, and it turned out to be a limerick. ;P Thanks for the laughs!
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  • From bloodshound on June 19, 2011
    gushes. so awesome. I'm glad she came around in the end.
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  • From AngelTalion on June 19, 2011
    LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! This was beautiful. I love them all in fact! Well done love.
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  • From ChiyokoChan on June 18, 2011
    yeah i'm mad no ones naked! D:
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on June 18, 2011
    Chap. 5 Sakura's Jealousy

    I really enjoyed this poem and how happy Naruto and Sasuke were and the peek into their private lives. (I sooooo HATE Sakura and was happy she was out of the picture for a time.....would so love to see her gone from the real story line but can be happy when I find it here in fanfiction instead at least.)I enjoyed the view and the progress and changes!!

    Can't wait to see what you update on your other projects!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on June 14, 2011
    Love the update!! I was so shocked with the last part.....soooo did not see that coming. I just love the his toughts/his thoughts its just too cute to see whats going on in their heads!! Fun and Cute all at the same time as well as very Sweet!!

    Now you just need to update the other ones too!!! =) I soooo want to see what happens next in them too!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 21, 2011
    Chap. 3

    I really enjoyed this poem and though it fit both of them perfectly. I would really like to see you write a story cause I think you could write a really great story that would be fun to read. Its amazing how easy it is for you to come up with such long poems so quickly!! That shows a lot of skill....I so wish I could write!! =)
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  • From ChiyokoChan on May 21, 2011
    AWWWWW!!! The two new poems are just sooo cute!!! :D

    Naruto is so seme -licks lips-

    Too bad Sas-UKE has him taken -pouts-
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  • From Carousel on May 11, 2011
    This is so excellent. I loved the second poem. I couldn't stop laughing. XD
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  • From bloodshound on May 10, 2011
    oi, don't knock the inspiration... especially when it's cute and lemon flavoured. ^^
    yay for almost self writing lemons.
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  • From AngelTalion on May 10, 2011
    These made me smile! Very nice! I laughed at the new one. Very cool! :)
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  • From demona013 on May 10, 2011
    Hahaha...I sooo love this. Please please post more. They are witty and clever.
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  • From tawanawelch on April 06, 2011
    LOL!! That was sweet!!^^
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  • From FireSnake on April 03, 2011
    Cute ;)
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