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Reviews for I like to watch him sleep

By : moodysavage
  • From IlOvEmUsIcAnDyAoI on March 06, 2014
    Oh my god I love this!!! Itd be funny to see if sasuke will react the same way to the others as he has sai. Especially kiba who naruto is actually really good friends with. Anyway, its a great story. Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From bloodshound on December 30, 2011
    a bit annoying when stories do that. ah well, at least u still have a definite destination still in mind. And best yet, our boys are together. ^^
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  • From KalyxandSoren on August 21, 2011
    Haha! I love how Sai is trying so hard to piece it all together. I like that you gave him such an analytical nature. ^.^ Oh man when it clicks it's going to be priceless! Great chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on August 20, 2011
    *snickers. poor oblivious Sai.
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  • From Mandymoo on August 08, 2011
    Hey there Moodysavage.

    This is Mandy (finally created an account)

    Again, you took my breath away though that is nothing new. :)

    I love how they are portrayed in your story, very true to their original characters! And goodness with all that teasing it had me tense! Great work with the suspense.

    You say there is no plot but I spy with my little eye at the very least an emotional plot. Everything leads up to the moment when they finally... have fun... So don't worry. And besides, some of the best stories start out with no plot, just some typing!

    Thank you for writing this story... :) It is amazing.
    And sorry I took so long to review again
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  • From ANON - mina on August 08, 2011
    i just read the whole thing. so sweet! this has to be one of the first stories where i didnt feel like the 'i love you' mid coitus was forced and didnt fit. also like how the moment was 'ruined' with the dobe comment lol adorable :)
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  • From KalyxandSoren on August 07, 2011
    Hahaha! No need to blush! We all get carried away with one word or another in a lemon. It's a simple truth that even I have to challenge myself with...for some odd reason my repetitive word is 'pleasure' and I even went so far as to buy a dictionary styled thesaurus to broaden my vocabulary, and that has helped a tad >.< though still no other word for the particular story I'm working on has really fit in my opinion...So I'm probably going to post it as is and try to edit it when something comes to me hahaha! But anyways, I say great work! And keep it up, because you say you don't have a full plot, but I find this story sweet and enthralling I would hate to see it end anytime soon!
    ~Kalyx~
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  • From ANON - Kalypso on August 07, 2011
    Yeah! Finally! I love this story but after each chapter i felt like i was just teased. I kept wanting more, more, and more. I still do this was great. Can't wait to see what else you have in store. :)
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  • From cynaga on August 06, 2011
    [ch 12] Lovely!!! Sexy and very romantic at the same time. The pacing was just right.
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  • From KalyxandSoren on August 06, 2011
    Absolutely excellent! Though I detect your doubt from your a/n before the chapter...SO! I have a little challenge should you feel up to it ^.^ Go a few chapters without using the word 'suck' in conjunction with your writing ability...Or any other word to it's demeaning equivalent! MWAHAHAHA!!! Instead find something you like/enjoyed about the end results of your brain genius! And be sure to mention it to us loyal readers in your a/n's I promise you negativity breeds negativity so try turning it around because I meant ever word in my last review!
    With that being said, I shall commence with a review of this chapter.
    There is one thing I could like to mention. Strictly as a constructive side note. I found the use of the word 'cock' so often to be a little distracting, but with that being said just know that it did not in any way sway my mind about how BRILLIANT I believe this 1'st lemon of yours is!
    I was thoroughly entranced start to finish! (no pun intended...but since it is waving it's cheesy head around...I suppose I'll let it slip! Haha! And trust me I'm well aware of how lame my jokes are. But I'm rather addicted to your writing so I suppose it won't be the last one you'll have to endure! ^.~)
    I loved that you were very meticulously detailed about the whereabouts of their hands. Many writers underestimate the power that that one detail holds. Somehow hands are cast aside as just simply 'roving' or 'roaming' or some other sensual 'R' word lol! It gave a welcomed clarity to the lemon that made it easy to follow, and offered it a lot of substance!
    You took time to give insight from both character perspectives which really spiced up the intensity and the edge to the scene. And an OUTDOOR LEMON!? >.< *points* this is my lemon face! See it!? See it?! It says that was a really great call!
    And the fact that this chapter was so long speaks to me as well. Because all too often, those details being left out will cause a lemon chapter to be too short...Or mostly filler with a few paragraphs of 'RrrrRrRRromance' (I suppose this was my attempt at typing the rolling of an 'R' lmao!)
    I could sing the praises of your work for far longer, though I suppose I'll cut myself off here for now, just know I will always be honest and constructive.
    ~Kalyx~
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  • From tjrender on August 05, 2011
    (Rolling over for a cigarette) Ahhh, absolutely perfect! Thank you !
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  • From Dorkchic on August 05, 2011
    Sweet! Looking foward to the next chapter. The lemon was fine- it managed to skirt that fine line between intimate and cheesy. So I give it two thumbs up- fine family fun.
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  • From roro237 on August 04, 2011
    I would never have guessed that was your first lemon?!?! That was H O T! That was S E X Y! That gave me a bloody nose:) I loved it ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on August 04, 2011
    I said i'd consider strangling you if something went wrong while they were getting together... nothing did so you're all cleaqr. Instead you gaves beautiful, beautiful sasu/naru lemons... and those last couple of lines were just soooooooooo them. *snickers.
    Now, pls let them be together for a bit before something rocks the boat. :P
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  • From Madamdragon on August 04, 2011
    Oh my that was hawt stuff. *nose bleed* You need to make more lemons like that, Lemonade all around. Hope another update is to come.
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