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From ANON - Naomi on January 01, 2015
This is a great story and I can't wait to see what happens between Sasuke and Naruto next! Please update soon!!!!!!
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From ANON - Maracuja on September 08, 2013
I found this story a lot of time ago, then I changed my computer and I lost it until now, and you don't have any idea of HOW much I missed it.
Actually, I had already read all the chapters, but I know that inspiration isn't always in the air, so I'll wait for you to post and check the story every once and then, because it's awesome.
I hope you don't take impolite comments too personally, some people just think everything is due to them, it's an occupational hazard.
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From ANON - Chiaki on May 02, 2013
Hi I dunno if you're gonna update this anytime soon but I hope you see this comment ^_^ and oh yeah I really really love your story!!! (I've read a lot of fanfics and only ever bothered to review this one btw) Hope you post the other chapters soon :D looking forwards to them
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From ANON - liz on April 14, 2013
Can't wait to see what happen next :)
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From ANON - Maracuja on April 03, 2013
I've just finished reading the last chapter of this story and I am truly depressed by knowing it won't continue for a while. I don't use to review stories on this site because I'm Italian and I'm not so confident with my english, but I couldn't refrain to do it with yours. Although I'm not native speaker, I sense that this story is written in a very good grammar, and the plot is something amazing. I wish I could read more of it, so please, take your time and go ahead with "Conversion", you'll always have one reader at least. By the way, I wanted to review this story because I know how much it suit a writer to be told she's good at her job. I hope you'll be back soon!
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From ArtemisLee on December 30, 2012
Hee! I enjoy this story quite a bit! Sasuke being such a sexual being is pretty cool, Naruto's gonna just have to get used to that it seems >D Hmmmm can't wait for more in the next installment! Until then take care!
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From YukinoKara on April 11, 2012
I'm really loving this story so far! It's so interesting, and I love how you've written it! I'm extremely glad that I read it.

I really like how you write Naruto and Sasuke, and the way you switch point of views is useful and flows very well. :)

You've done an amazing job with this so far! Good luck with the next chapter, and I'm really looking forward to it! :)

~Wishes of health and happiness,

YukinoKara
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From ANON - amnda on November 24, 2011
Love it and I look forward as always to reading more when you have the chance to update. :D
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From ANON - yummerset on November 18, 2011
I appreciate the time you take to write stories for your readers, i'm sorry people have been such assholes to you. I look forward to reading future installments of your stories :-))
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From ANON - ines on October 28, 2011
I looooove your story !!! you're the best EVER !!! I can't wait 'til the next chapter >< I check everyday to weather there is a new one or not �� !!

Please do your best !
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From Bluerose92 on October 18, 2011
wow.
i'm really liking this story.
i cant wait for more.
and i read the end of the last chapter.
so i wont put what i normally type here.
lol.
love it so far.
cant wait for more![is this ok?]
{i think of that as a compliment}

~Golden Kitsune~
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From ANON - Aingyl on October 15, 2011
Just wanted to say I LOVE your stories! I look forward to each update, but I do understand what having so much busy-ness going on can be like.

Waiting for updates is like waiting for Christmas or my birthday lol it seems like it takes forever, but then the day comes and I get what I've been asking for, for the last 6 mos, and it's AWESOME xD

Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Mystic on October 13, 2011
I usually don't read AU fanfics, but I wanted to say that this is probably one of the best fics I've ever read, canon or not! I really hope you update soon!! You're extremely good at writing! ^^
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From ANON - Megumi0505 on October 07, 2011
I'm so glad you're reposting this story. I loved the concept behind it and I was really sad when you went on hiatus. If I remember correctly, the part you stopped at made me want to keep reading more XD

I like your idea of having grace chapters. It's true, you never know when writer's block will hit you so it's good to have a back up plan. That being said, I'm still a little saddened knowing there are finished chapters in existence that I can't read yet. I'll get over it, it's not like I don't have a million other fics I can read to pass the time, lol!

I like the website you set up for yourself, I think it's a nice idea to have a collection of your stories someplace away from all the archiving sites like deviantart and aff.net and ff.net. There's one person on deviantart that I check their personal site before I check their profile on DA because she tends to update her site before she updates her DA.

I have to comment that this is incredibly well written, even the original was really well done, and you somehow improved upon that which I didn't think was possible. Most people can't write first person to save their lives and you did it so well I almost can't believe it. It really felt like I was getting inside the characters' heads and that's what I love about first person perspective.

I was originally looking for the fic so I could read some key scenes I really enjoyed, but you haven't posted those chapters yet so I'm sol in that respect XD

Looking forward to the next update, even though I pretty much know what happens, it'll be fun to read it again XD
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From ANON - Jen on October 06, 2011
Very sorry to hear you feel pressured by certain reviewers. Since you enjoy writing, it's sad for someone's inconsiderate words to detract from something you like to do. Ignore them if you can and keep writing for yourself? (I know, I know, easy to say, hard to do.) I have friends who only read completed fics because they don't like waiting around for chapter updates, etc. I think if as a reader, you KNOW you feel that way, then adopting such a policy is a mature decision to make since it keeps both reader and writer happy.

Anyway, on to the chapter: I loved it, as usual. :D I was surprised (in a good way) that Naruto told Sasuke about his family background. At this point, Sasuke has no way of knowing that Naruto doesn't share that information with anyone, period. But then again, Sasuke doesn't usually share that kind of information about himself either, so they are growing much closer than either one realizes as this point. I'm wondering if Naruto's willingness to share came from the fact that he sensed on some level that Sasuke had just told him something private, and if he identified with the fact that Fugaku doesn't like Sasuke's "girly" looks. Being self-conscious about his appearance and feeling like an unwanted kid are all things Naruto can understand. (And as a private aside, apologies to the fangirls, but I've never found Itachi's ponytail sexy, so I burst out laughing when Sasuke cracked on him for it.)

The ending of the chapter is a killer! Just like when they kissed, Naruto froze again, this time at seeing a naked and cum-splattered Sasuke. (Naruto is SUCH a lucky bastard!!!!) I can hardly believe that he froze (and then wouldn't leave!) out of shock alone. Just like when they kissed, Naruto recognizes his freezing up and being unable to move away from Sasuke is an odd response even while he's doing it ("I know I should probably leave before he realizes I've seen anything"), yet he rationalizes rather than leaving as he ought to do. I'm dying to know what he thought about what he saw, especially since Naruto can't even bring himself to masturbate.

(BTW, when Sasuke mentioned that the incident with Naruto was worse than when Neji interrupted him, did he mean when Neji brought him that letter at the beginning of the story, or was there a different incident?)

The ending of the chapter was both hot and sad at the same time, how Sasuke is trying so hard not to be attracted to Naruto, yet found himself unconsciously imagining it was Naruto who was inside of him instead of the toy. Is a cold pillow and "the dull vibrations" of his sex toy really going to be enough anymore, now that Sasuke has begun to realize what it's like to have someone like Naruto in his life? :(
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