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Reviews for Kyusuke Uzumaki

By : AngelTalion
  • From ZeroZoey on March 14, 2011
    Oh boy, I wonder what Kyusuke is going to think when he finds out what Sasuke said to Naruto. Since that kick is sharp there will be no way to keep it from him. Sasuke is going to have to go through both Naruto and Kyusuke and I think the biggest challenge will be Kyuske. With Naruto's prank genes and Sauske smarts that kid is going to be trouble for him. Cannot wait to read. Update soon and thanks


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  • From ANON - richon on March 14, 2011
    i was so ewxited to have a new chapter. becareful sasu kyusuke is a true uchiha an avenger!!! You will not be excused easely. Love this story. see you soon
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  • From niceladysakura on March 14, 2011
    thank you for updating!

    i like this chapter atleast now Sasuke is here to stay :))

    i just hope that somehow Kyusuke will forgive Sasuke and give him a chance as well as Naruto in their life..they both deserve to have a family

    update soon!
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on March 14, 2011
    I don't think the village counsil would dare go against Naruto's wishes when it comes to Sasuke seeing his son without his permission considering the fact that Kyuubi is as protective over the kid if not more as everyone else in the village is!!!!!!!!!! And Kyuubi should have some time out bashing Sasuke for all the pain he put his Kit and Kyusuke through!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kalypso on March 14, 2011
    Love it! It just gets more and more interesting. Can't wait to see how it ends up. More soon please! :)
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  • From AvangalineHazel on March 14, 2011
    yay!!
    More chapters please :D
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  • From goodchaos on March 14, 2011
    Ahaha I like how it's going so far. Let's see how Sasuke does against all the guys of Konoha that wanna be with Naruto.
    PLUS I want that cereal! 8D= Yum!
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  • From ANON - kit on March 14, 2011
    Sasuke! that bastard!
    I'm really interested in this story. It seems that Sasuke spending time with his son is inevitable since he told naruto that taking the case to court is an action he is willing to do. I'm actually looking forward to seeing kyo be stubborn and react negatively to the forced interaction. I'm excited for the next chapter!
    Im enjoying naruto and sasuke's personalities. it seems spot on. The only thing I wanna say about naruto though is that yes he may be more submissive then sasuke, but I still view him as being a strong ninja who is able to handle himself properly. I love reading stories where naruto is strong and charismatic as a ninja, but when he is just naruto I like to see his vulnerability. He never had a family and friends didn't come into his life until 12 so.....I feel that in that regard, his ability to handle stressful social situations is lacking. Thats why I was happy to see Neji come and assist since Naruto is someone who needs the support of his friends.
    Anyways I'm sorry for babbling so much. Thanks for the quick update!
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  • From volaju66 on March 14, 2011
    I know its supposed to be a Naruto/Sasuke fic but god if I don't want him to end up with Sai...or hell anyone else but Sasuke. I'm completely intrigued with your story though. As with all your stories, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - K on March 14, 2011
    That update is fast. Thank you so much. In a way im glad that thats all the punishment hes getting. Now he can focus on getting his family back. I hope Sai shows up soon. That should be a funny incounter. Competition is good for Sasuke.
    Thanks again. I look forward to the next update. I enjoyed this as much as the other one.
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 14, 2011
    I like how Naruto admitted that if it was just him, he'd still be giving Sasuke chances, but since he has a kid now, he can't be so free with his actions any longer; he has to put his child first. I think these are the ONLY circumstances in which Naruto would have willingly given up his bond with Sasuke. I like that things are still platonic between them, there's no "OMG Naruto/Sasuke looks hawt" thoughts from either of them. I think in order for the romance to be really satisfying, Sasuke needs to re-earn Naruto's trust.

    I'm curious what Sasuke has been doing these past four years--it sounds like he spent them peacefully? That should be points in his favor with Naruto, but why didn't he choose to stay after they made love, and why didn't he choose to contact Naruto in all this time? If it hadn't been for Kyusuke, would he have *ever* tried to contact Naruto? Those are obviously points against him. But truthfully, not knowing what happened between them that night, I sorta feel sorry for Naruto for only being a one-night stand, but I sorta don't since Sasuke has always been pretty clear on not wanting to return to Konoha, and has never done anything but run from Naruto, so Naruto really couldn't have expected anything else. :(
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  • From ANON - Althydia on March 14, 2011
    So Naruto hasn't completely broken his link with Sasuke? And now Sasuke will have to convince Kyusuke and Naruto to trust him again... Not so easy, particularly when other friends will certainly get in the way.
    But Naruto also has the problem of Kyusuke hating Sai. I mean, his son kind of asked the Hokage to send his lover on a mission to be killed! Does Kyusuke have a particular reason for such a dislike of Sai?
    And isn't it ironical that Kyusuke also inherited some traits from Itachi (like being a prodigy)? :)
    I look forward to the next chapter (hopefully)!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2011
    I cant wait til the next chapt
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  • From randrinawilson on March 13, 2011
    Sasuke Is playing dirty using the "our childhood" card! That was brilliant! I especially like the last minute Neji addition thrown in. Sasuke is wondering why neji is C@)% blocking here but naruto is male that can have kids. an extremely powerful male that can have kids. That kinda adds extra chum to the sharks. But the main thing, Naruto is very scared that Sasuke is going to end up hurting his child just by being well Sasuke but there are things that only a uchia can teach a uchia and naruto knows that. he also knows that the council would also order him to let sasuke spend time with him too. Kyu is already showing signs of being a genius. I hope that Naruto doesnt just fall in love with all over again. Sasuke doesnt deserve that. He needs to earn it. put in blood sweat and tears for it just like naruto did.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on March 13, 2011
    I really hope you'll continue this story, the beginning is quite promising!
    Kyusuke is really cute with his temper and strong personality, but isn't he going to find the truth about his other father even though Naruto hides it from him? I mean, Sasuke has the same eyes and he is the only one (obviously Kakashi's one sharigan isn't the same), plus they share physical traits and I'm sure he's also inherited his father's genius (and that's not counting a child's natural curiosity)...
    It should be quite difficult for Naruto to completely deny his son the truth because he himself was hurt by not knowing who his parents were for a long time. Plus, Sasuke can teach his son Uchiha secrets concerning the sharigan that even Kakashi can't. And the fact that Kyusuke doesn't like Sai might certainly facilitate things for Sasuke... If he admits his feelings for Naruto.
    Also, what has and hasn't happened in the world you've created concerning Sasuke and Itachi's standing with the Leaf? Obviously Sasuke has left his village and killed his brother, but has he learned the truth about Itachi and the Leaf? And has the war with Akatsuki happened? These events could have a strong influence on the whole context... And has Naruto completely given up his bond with Sasuke (which would be a big difference from canon too)?
    Well, I'm sure you're going to answer some of these questions in your story, but it's just really intriguing and I really look forward to reading more!
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