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Reviews for Kyusuke Uzumaki

By : AngelTalion
  • From roro237 on March 27, 2011
    I'm almost in tears:) That was wonderful! This chapter touched me so because it's REAL. I know silly huh?! But that's how it should be for the child. Kyu-chan was so cute putting a photo album together for his dad. I loved it! You're the Angle with the bomb writing skills. I really love your story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Althydia on March 27, 2011
    Great chapter! I loved learning a bit more about Naruto's feelings for Sasuke and his relationship with their son. Sasuke also had very sensible arguments about raising Kyu. And Kyu was incredibly sweet with Sasuke. Plus, Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is evolving and with the new arrangement they'll be forced to interact more! Oh, and Sasuke's way of silencing Naruto is very nice too... :)
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  • From ANON - richon on March 27, 2011
    sasu act like a parent, they are puting rules, they start to communicate again. love this story!!
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  • From tawanawelch on March 27, 2011
    I am so glad Sasuke said all those things to Naruto about boundaries being set. Naruto will love Sasuke even more later on when Kyusuke turns out better for it. I'm glad Sasuke got a kiss in as well. X3
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2011
    I want more~!
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  • From cynaga on March 27, 2011
    Ch 3 - Wow. I loved this line, "I have no intention of leaving him alone Sai. I have every intention of collecting what’s mine.” Turning he went back into his home, stopping only to make a request. “Let Neji know as well please.” And I really liked the way Kyusuke told off Sasuke.
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  • From cynaga on March 27, 2011
    I'm actually reading this little gem backwards. Just finished ch 4. DRAGGING??? Are you crazy? That was a beautiful, fascinating account of Sasuke and why he didn't come home to Naruto right away. This fic is really special.
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  • From cynaga on March 27, 2011
    DELIGHTful~!
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  • From ANON - dar on March 27, 2011
    Tehehehe a trying sasuke is always something to look forward to reading!! I love kyu, he's sooo adorable. I already love him and I haven't seen him but he just feels soo adorable! Thanks for the new chapter! I am a fan!
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  • From LadyWolf on March 27, 2011
    Angel, I love this fic!! I'm glad Sasuke brought that rules thing...who in the right mind would ask a four year old what do they want to do??? Huh??? I just don't get that...

    Oh well....great read, please post soon!
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  • From ANON - chynna18rawrr on March 23, 2011
    I love the story so far i really would love it, if you continued it, their really arent a lot of good sasunaru mpreg stories out there and i think this could be areally great one. i only noticed a few grammar mistakes, but other than that i cant wait for more.

    :D chynna18rawrr
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  • From NAnderson on March 23, 2011
    Ohhh these chapters still feel to short for me!!! I need more XD lol. I dont think the story is dragging. Its actually set on a fast pace compared to what I was thinking. Heck I was thinking it would take longer just to have him warm up the sasuke then that. Not that Im complaining ;) I think the whole thing is going great and im looking forward to more!
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  • From DevilnBlue on March 22, 2011
    awww I just stumbled onto this story and it's so cute. Aww at the end with... wow.. blanked on his name... Sasuke's son saying that he wanted to marry Shika... and aww at the part where Sasuke and son were picking out tomatoes.... kawaii
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 22, 2011
    I wouldn't say this was dragging at all! In fact, this was the best chapter so far. A lot of very necessary character development happened here (that is certainly *never* a boring thing!) I liked the gradual development in the relationship between Kyusuke and Sasuke. Things are far from perfect between them, but they're starting to come to a gradual understanding. I think the fact that Sasuke has a naturally calm personality is really working in his favor here. If he was the type to fly off the handle, it would certainly go over well with a spirited kid like Kyusuke. (And who knows, maybe Sasuke's disciplined side is also helping him out as well since it sounds like Kyusuke runs wild a bit more than he ought to. He might respond positively to a bit of discipline?) Also was really, really glad to hear Sasuke's explanation. We can understand where he's coming from much better now. Of course that doesn't turn him into a lovable, sympathetic hero, but it does help us to see his side of things (i.e., empathize with him). I think that's super important for any main character of a story.

    Sasuke's explanation for why he never came back made a lot of sense to me, in a real-world sort of way. We hear about it all the time: Person A moves to another city to be with B. After a while, person A realizes s/he hasn't made any friends and hates his/her new job. A's misery gets taken out on B and the relationship suffers. Sasuke pretty much would've been in the same situation in Konoha: he doesn't like anyone there (aside from Naruto) and since he hates Konoha, he certainly wouldn't be overjoyed to take up his role as a ninja of Konoha. (So, no job, no friends. But love makes up for that? Sadly, it's impossible.) But I think Sasuke is right that having Kyusuke to worry about is good for him and Naruto as a couple since it takes the burden off Naruto. Looking forward to seeing Naruto's response to Kyusuke and Sasuke. :)
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  • From Dorkchic on March 19, 2011
    I don't think that it is dragging at all. Love what you have done so far and actually adored the part where Sasuke asked Sai to pass the message on to Neji. I wonder if Sai would actually do it. I do not think he would because he was pissed when he found out about Neji kissing Naruto and is apparently not as emotionally stunted anymore. But its funny that Sasuke believes he would just because he said so. Cannot wait for your next update!
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