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By : modeac
  • From Akitaru on November 02, 2019

    Good history


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  • From ANON - Mars on March 08, 2013
    I love your rant at the end about his mom. I never really liked that part- or her- much anyway; too much mary-sueness for me. I mean come on, "Oh yeah we're related to the senju and by extension the uchiha, possess untold sealing talents (that you don't possess), and have been used as living prisons for the past 130-odd years".
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  • From ANON - zeroenna on November 29, 2012
    Such a good fic, please continue whenever possible
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  • From ANON - DoomMarine54 on March 09, 2012
    No just no you have fucked up every part of this story so far Samui is this annoying representation of yuourself and nneds to stop being put on the high ground she has gone through no hardships Naruto has gone through worse and he doesn't sit around and mope when things go bad, It's good to see that you're such a shallow person that Samui gets to be a main character even though Sakura got killed because she's "usless" even though she's done more then Samui but Samui is hot and that's all that matters to you. Your a terrible writer, who doesn't understand his characters in the slightest.
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  • From joeparas1988 on October 13, 2011
    Um, was this chapter a flashback to four chapter ago? lol... why?
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  • From ANON - xavier8994 on May 12, 2011
    True, we need more idealists in the world. But Not idealists like Naruto. We need idealists who understand that the world isn't black and white, and quite honestly, I think with the way Naruto acts, that that's how he sees the world. A mass a black and mass, good and evil etc etc.

    Seeing the world like that will just keep everything the same. We NEED idealists, but we DO NOT need people who blindly follow random bullshit that people say with pretty words to hide it's own "evil"
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  • From Takai153 on May 02, 2011
    Run Naruto, run for your manhood's life!!!

    Great chapter. I like what you did with Madara showing up then. Funny. Also, like how you used him to shake Samui up a bit. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From rolalinii on April 29, 2011
    i'm looking forward to seeing another chapter soon great story
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  • From Takai153 on April 09, 2011
    Love this fic! The sex was wonderful and you're doing a great job with the plot. I totally agree with you that idealists are good, but Naruto has gone way beyond idealism and into the deep end of self-delusion. I'm so glad you're continuing this fic and I'm looking forward to how Samui has affected Naruto. Hope for more sex too.^^ Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ri100014 on March 23, 2011
    Great start. I felt like it was actually a better story than it was a smut piece, so if you're still interested in putting more thought and time into it I know I'd look forward to reading more of it. Always need a bit more substance every once and a while here, even though it is (admitably) a smut site.
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  • From ANON - Thrilhouse on March 17, 2011
    Great story. I usually only come to adultfanfiction.net when I'm in the mood for smut. But then I found this, It has a better premise and characterization than any of the fics with samui and Naruto found on FF.net.

    Very much looking forward to how this progresses. Until next time, later!
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  • From ANON - chm01 on March 11, 2011
    nice, though I wish naruto was less submissive, hopefully this will help put his head straight (then again considering that in canon he always buckles under a woman's wish)after all youre rigth it's one thing to be an optimist and another is to be deluded, I just hope he becomes a bit more assertive in his sexlife as the fic progresses (wimp naruto gets bored after a while)
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  • From Liger001 on March 11, 2011
    that was pretty good, hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on March 05, 2011
    it's good to see someone doing this great pairing
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