Reviews for When A Heart CracksBy : SirGeneralSir |
DUDDDEEEE WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED THIS SHIT ITS SO FUCKING GOOD !
I really love your story but I'm starting to get frustrated on getting to the same place I was age's ago it's another class of turture. Just do a time skip if you don't know what to write about their sex scenes just keep writing ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
This is one of the best stories I've ever read I'm planning on making a story but I need you to be my co-author I'll be very pleased if you can accept my request you can contact me on Facebook by the name crimson Dee and I have a profile picture of hatake Ken I'll be looking forward to your response
well damn this is great.
just wanna ask if this is still ongoing or dropped?
Another great chapter hope we are almost done with the lovefest part lol
Glad for another good chapter thanks again
if there has to be ten people of breeding age to be a clan then the uchiha clan is not a clan since there is only 1 or 2 alive.
I don't know how long its been since you've updated but I'm looking forward to more. Please continue to write this story.
That you came back to finish this storyI'm so gladI think it's sad That They abused Naruto So badly and steal all of his stuff That his parents left them when he diedMakes me think That nothing but Crooks live in that townHope to see more of your story Thank you
Welcome back heart soared youthfully at your stories return!!! ^_^
I have enjoyed this story so much that I read it twice. I hope you are feeling better and give us the rest of this story soon. Loved the part where kiba got his ass handed to him!😂 looking forward to seeing the next chapter soon.
I can't wait for more of this story It is an excellent story and It has a lot of depth And a lot of feelingsI just can't wait for more I have read this story twice now I read it while you were writing it and I read it just now From beginning to end It takes a really good story to make me have to read it twice.
Miss reading this great story hope more come soon....Love the whole idea
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