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Reviews for In The Dark

By : monochrome
  • From moodysavage on April 21, 2011
    That was good!!! Very very fun to read! I really loved the part where Sasuke said he had to get out of there because he didn't know how much of his own insults he could take.I forget right now how you phrased that but it was really funny. And I love what Naruto says at the end about wanting Sasuke to be his mate. The way he says it is almost formal. The flow and pacing of this is really good too. Be inspired to write lots!
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  • From randrinawilson on April 21, 2011
    Now see kiddies, this is why your mommie tells you not to go out and play in the woods at night!!!!!!! ;) this is getting good!! Naruto went out and got him a playmate!!!
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  • From JaydenNara on April 21, 2011
    Ha... Itachi's passed out on the ground and Naruto is practically propositioning Sasuke. That's so awesome. It's already obvious that Sasuke is attracted to Naruto, so it remains to be seen if Sasuke is going to make it difficult for the him or not. And what are they going to do with poor Itachi? Will Naruto let Sasuke take him back with a promise to return, or will Itachi have to wait until he's well enought to move on his own.

    Well I'm hooked, please continue.
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  • From KiaraNxiar on April 17, 2011
    Fantastic! I haven't read such a well written Naruto adventure/mystery fan fiction in a while. Totally love how you started the story and are building more suspense with each chapter. While it was hilarious how Itachi was pranking Sasuke, I totally felt Sasuke`s irritation with Itachi. You have uncanny ability to portray characters` emotion while maintaining their originality.
    After reading Naruto`s transformation, I can’t wait to read the next chapter to find out what exactly he is. Hope you won’t take too long to update.
    KN.
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  • From smint45 on March 20, 2011
    Wow is Naruto some kind of werefox? It seems that he can not control when he shiftes and when not!! Poor guy!!!! I so can't wait for him to wake up and to meet the brother!!! Thank you for the fast post!!! See you!!!
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  • From moodysavage on March 19, 2011
    :) You have a great way with words. I like how the scene was all from Sasuke's point of view and how he reacted to seeing Naruto and kept coming back to the word 'naked' lol.
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 18, 2011
    Well, what's Sasuke going to do now? But more importantly, what's Naruto got planned? Clearly Naruto attacked Itachi for a reason. (Was he already attracted to Sasuke and jealous of seeing Itachi embracing him?) He also chose to bring both brothers back to his cave, also for a reason. Will Naruto let them leave so easily now? The premise of this fic is pretty cool with the town legends and the monster and all that. :D I'm just hoping you keep the story the way it is--dark and creepy--because I think that's the fic's major selling point. (If you plan on, say, having Naruto show up at Sasuke's school after this and turning the story into a high school fic, I would say: don't do it!) Hope to the next chapter soon. :D
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  • From ANON - Aiko-chan on March 18, 2011
    Ooooh, I really like where this is going! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - JJ on March 17, 2011
    I am liking this story alreay and I hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded and see what happens next.

    JJ
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  • From tawanawelch on March 17, 2011
    Oh man! That was a good scare. Itachi's hilarious in this, hopefully he'll stay in this fic.lol. Poor Sasuke fainting right into the claws of the monster. 0.0
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  • From tawanawelch on March 17, 2011
    OMG!! Please let it be Itachi coming to him and Itachi not dead. T.T
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on March 17, 2011
    Naru naru naru!!! Yay!!! 'tachi can be such a mean brother, but I like how easily the two of them interact, very nice!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on March 17, 2011
    Gosh I like this story. You are totally great with suspense and relieving the tension in the story. You did an awesome job of building the tension in chapter one...chapter 2 was totally perfect how all that tension broke with Itachi laughing his head off lol. Then you built it right back up again. That kind of stuff is really hard to pull off well and your awesome at it. Hope to read more soon!
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  • From ObscurexShadow on March 09, 2011
    I hope you continue this soon. It was a good start. *nodnod*
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  • From smint45 on March 04, 2011
    NOOOOO not fair!!! You can't end it here!!!! This a really fascinatig start!!!! I want more!!!! Please give me more!!!! See you soon!!!
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