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Reviews for The Over-Under

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  • From runoutofaname on March 07, 2011
    Love it! Keep it up =)
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  • From Daktalakpak on March 06, 2011
    Pretty interesting start you got here. Looking forward to see where this will go. :) Have fun writing it for us :P
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  • From hisoka on March 03, 2011
    very interesting,depressing because of how close to real this feels(im sure many people can sympothize with how narutos feeling, being in such a trapped situation).really love it cant wait to see what happens next
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  • From missbri88 on March 01, 2011
    I'm super excited for this new story of yours. I've missed you here, and cross-dressing Neji and Naru just sounds hot. I can't wait to see more! Did I tell you I missed you...? Lol
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 01, 2011
    I like the start to this. The premise sounds pretty interesting, and I can totally understand Naruto's hesitation to take a job at a host club. I felt bad at Naruto's panic attack at the end of the chapter and want to keep reading so I can see things get better for him. Now I'm really curious about what will happen when Naruto shows up at the Over-Under and why they decide to make him cross-dress. I'm also curious to see why Sasuke would be at a host club to begin with. (He surely doesn't need to pay anyone to flatter him and pretend to be his date for the evening--there's a million people who would pay him for the chance to do that!) Also, will Sasuke realize Naruto is a cross-dressing male or believe him to be female? It seems to me that there are things a man just can't hide--his hands, the fact that he has an Adam's apple--and to someone as observant as Sasuke, he'd have to notice, wouldn't he? Could be pretty interesting if they both know that Sasuke knows, and yet the romance happens anyway. Well, that's just my two cents. Looking forward to reading another chapter. :)
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  • From moodysavage on March 01, 2011
    This sounds like it's going to be very amusing. Wonder if Naruto will get hit on by a customer or another host?
    :)
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  • From veryloudanimal on February 28, 2011
    Noo! Poor Naruto D:
    He'll make a very pretty woman though! Please keep writing, you've got me interested!
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  • From ANON - richon on February 28, 2011
    ahaah you can't stop ow what happen to naru. i love the beginning of this story. it promise great thing. Love it please update soon
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  • From LadyLaran on February 28, 2011
    Pretty strong start. can't wait to read more!
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  • From lilliandragon on February 28, 2011
    I like the new story.
    Can´t wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Rita on February 28, 2011
    Wow, so good so far!
    Haha, I just love the idea, and this is so far very well written.
    Also, you get a huge plus for cross-dressing Neji! Hahaha, I hope we'll see more of him in the future.

    I can't wait to see how Naruto's situation progresses!
    Keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From ANON - Just another reader on February 28, 2011
    Interesting start. Nice detail and characterization. I look forward to reading more. It will be fun to read how Naruto adjusts to the idea of working at the Over-Under. : )
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  • From tawanawelch on February 28, 2011
    Yes!!! I love this and I'm so happy Neji's in it!! I can't wait to see what he wears or what he does in this or who else might be a cross-dressing host as well. I'm excited about your story too!^^
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  • From Dorkchic on February 28, 2011
    Woot! Naruto as a host and Naruto in drag! I cannot wait to read the parts where Neji is training him in all things feminine. I can just imagine Naruto's reaction to the make-up portion... not to mention the padding/undergarment portion.
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